Smooth Criminal - Daredevil
Authors Note: Thank you to everyone who has reviewed my story, as you are well aware my reviews I had before had decreased immensely leaving me with only zero reviews. I thank the readers who have given me the opportunity to keep on uploading new chapters by being able to increase my reviews, thanks heaps I really appreciate it. Anyways I hope to get more reviews then I have now! So as soon as you read my story remember to submit a review!!!
Uploaded: Chapter seven has now been uploaded and is up and running! This chapter is full of action and even more chilling suspense! And uh it's actually Dawn now lol!
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'Ok let's make our way down to the crime scene' Eames spoke in a whisper. The two undercover Detectives stood out of the black Mercedes car both looking casual and cool Goren took a few steps forward he glanced over his shoulder and smiled 'is that your husband's car?'
Eames snorted in irony 'no not any more.. It's mine and it always has been mine, to be honest..'
'So how did everything go last night?' Goren asked gazing back at Eames and continuing to walk down the alley almost near 21 Wall Street, they walked deeper into darkness but a bit of light could be seen, actually a lot of light. Goren took out a pair of Investigation gloves; he placed them over his hands and stretched them so that they were loosen and not as tight. He kneeled down onto the ground to find any tracks of foot prints and of dragging that might be seen in the gravel of dirt and soil.
Eames waited, she stared down at Goren with a sceptical look 'ok impress me' she spoke folding her arms like a macho women.
Goren coughed it sounded more like a cackle 'well... My brain thinks that this lady was walking down to the closest building; she probably was visiting a friend or family who lives nearby this alley... She was killed here and dragged into a truck.. If I only knew where the truck is' Goren looked around he spotted something glinting in the darkness at the end of the alley 'that wasn't so hard was it?' Goren replied standing up and rubbing of the dirt on his black trousers.
Eames smiled sweetly 'lucky you'
The two undercover Detectives headed down the end of the alley. It wasn't exactly the end, there were two path ways in which they looked more like roads but there was no cement just dirt but it showed wheel tracks from the cars that would've drove into the alley and back out to where Goren and Eames had parked. It was still too early and yet dark, the sun hadn't reached the sky just yet, still it was taking it's time rising up very slowly allowing its beam of light to show a bit above the buildings (since there's no mountain). Goren took a deep breath and blew it all out, he took out his flash light and clicked it on 'rise and shine truck' he spoke. Eames shook her head sideways 'see what I have to put up with every day' she joked and ending with a slight giggle.
Goren smirked 'yeah funny' he spoke in derision.
Eames snorted 'well I thought it was funny'
The two stared silent and yet untouched truck 'hold this' Goren demanded, Eames took hold of the flash light she the light on the truck 'your not going inside are you Goren?' she asked concerned and yet her expression looked rather anxious.
Goren nodded his back facing her 'yeap'
'Don't be silly, you don't know what could be inside!' she whispered which sounded more like a pleading hiss.
Goren laughed wickedly 'please no one is going to harm us; we are perfectly safe, besides its dawn'
'Lets hope your right Goren' Eames looked around, she always hated being standing alone in alley's while Goren goes and wonder's off to investigate 'its just not fair' she muttered almost throwing a tantrum.
'What?' Goren asked glancing at her.
'Nothing'
Goren shrugged and opened the doors at the back of the truck aside; he stood into the dark unlovable vehicle 'this truck gives me the shivers' he spoke, he looked back Eames wasn't there 'where did that woman run off to' he then focused inside the truck, he stood into it apparently there was a note on the floor inside 'the body of the victim is still alive, we have taken her to a hospital in which I will call you in fifteen minutes, signed Deakin's... Head of NYPD' Goren read quietly he slipped the note in his long sleeved, blue shirt pocket the shirt he always wears most times at work. Goren looked around inside of the truck he took several steps further more inside 'alright, all clear.. EAM-'
Before Goren could finish the doors slammed shut, he heard keys rattling to lock the doors; Goren hurriedly walked towards them and tried opening the doors, it was no use. He spotted Eames walking back up towards the truck holding the flash light in her hands and looking startled, her face went paler she looked like she had seen a ghost, apparently she was looking at something near the truck at least that's what Goren thought, he saw a shadow of a figure on the wall, another person was with them the whole time, watching their every move and knew when it was the right time to capture either one of the Detectives that's if it was their plan. Goren yelled for Eames help, he yelled over the top of his lungs even he yelled more to wreck his throat to make it sound all crackly and dry and yet sore. Eames couldn't help she couldn't hear Goren's yell because the truck is sound proof. All she saw was his face and his lips miming into the words she thought of was *help!?* Goren felt a breeze at the back of his neck, the atmosphere grew colder and chillier and even much more dislikeable it even felt so cold-hearted. Shivers went from his tail bone all the way up his spine making his eyes go from strong to meek.
Eames dropped the torch light, she saw something grabbing Goren around the neck, more like arms, she wanted to call for backup with other NYPD cops, she shook herself out of her hypnosis and grabbed a walkie talkie from her jacket she switched it on 'Deakin's, are you there' she commended, the sound of the walkie talkie was more like connecting to the internet but more like a signal that was going out 'Eames what is it' a voice replied through the walkie talkie, Eames placed it near her mouth to make it clear 'Goren is under attack we need more back up!' she yelled, the voice of Deakin's returned 'where is Goren?' Deakin's replied, Eames groaned 'he's inside the truck, the doors are locked and someone is attacking him from inside! Hurry we need backup' Eames waited 'I've called for backup Alex just don't let Goren out of your site!' Eames wiped the anxiety sweat of her forehead 'thankyou... Over and out'
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TBC Goren's inner-voice told him one thing *someone is going to get hurt* it was right after all. How will Goren settle this and will Eames find him in time before it is too late? And who is this mystery man.
Authors Note: Thank you to everyone who has reviewed my story, as you are well aware my reviews I had before had decreased immensely leaving me with only zero reviews. I thank the readers who have given me the opportunity to keep on uploading new chapters by being able to increase my reviews, thanks heaps I really appreciate it. Anyways I hope to get more reviews then I have now! So as soon as you read my story remember to submit a review!!!
Uploaded: Chapter seven has now been uploaded and is up and running! This chapter is full of action and even more chilling suspense! And uh it's actually Dawn now lol!
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'Ok let's make our way down to the crime scene' Eames spoke in a whisper. The two undercover Detectives stood out of the black Mercedes car both looking casual and cool Goren took a few steps forward he glanced over his shoulder and smiled 'is that your husband's car?'
Eames snorted in irony 'no not any more.. It's mine and it always has been mine, to be honest..'
'So how did everything go last night?' Goren asked gazing back at Eames and continuing to walk down the alley almost near 21 Wall Street, they walked deeper into darkness but a bit of light could be seen, actually a lot of light. Goren took out a pair of Investigation gloves; he placed them over his hands and stretched them so that they were loosen and not as tight. He kneeled down onto the ground to find any tracks of foot prints and of dragging that might be seen in the gravel of dirt and soil.
Eames waited, she stared down at Goren with a sceptical look 'ok impress me' she spoke folding her arms like a macho women.
Goren coughed it sounded more like a cackle 'well... My brain thinks that this lady was walking down to the closest building; she probably was visiting a friend or family who lives nearby this alley... She was killed here and dragged into a truck.. If I only knew where the truck is' Goren looked around he spotted something glinting in the darkness at the end of the alley 'that wasn't so hard was it?' Goren replied standing up and rubbing of the dirt on his black trousers.
Eames smiled sweetly 'lucky you'
The two undercover Detectives headed down the end of the alley. It wasn't exactly the end, there were two path ways in which they looked more like roads but there was no cement just dirt but it showed wheel tracks from the cars that would've drove into the alley and back out to where Goren and Eames had parked. It was still too early and yet dark, the sun hadn't reached the sky just yet, still it was taking it's time rising up very slowly allowing its beam of light to show a bit above the buildings (since there's no mountain). Goren took a deep breath and blew it all out, he took out his flash light and clicked it on 'rise and shine truck' he spoke. Eames shook her head sideways 'see what I have to put up with every day' she joked and ending with a slight giggle.
Goren smirked 'yeah funny' he spoke in derision.
Eames snorted 'well I thought it was funny'
The two stared silent and yet untouched truck 'hold this' Goren demanded, Eames took hold of the flash light she the light on the truck 'your not going inside are you Goren?' she asked concerned and yet her expression looked rather anxious.
Goren nodded his back facing her 'yeap'
'Don't be silly, you don't know what could be inside!' she whispered which sounded more like a pleading hiss.
Goren laughed wickedly 'please no one is going to harm us; we are perfectly safe, besides its dawn'
'Lets hope your right Goren' Eames looked around, she always hated being standing alone in alley's while Goren goes and wonder's off to investigate 'its just not fair' she muttered almost throwing a tantrum.
'What?' Goren asked glancing at her.
'Nothing'
Goren shrugged and opened the doors at the back of the truck aside; he stood into the dark unlovable vehicle 'this truck gives me the shivers' he spoke, he looked back Eames wasn't there 'where did that woman run off to' he then focused inside the truck, he stood into it apparently there was a note on the floor inside 'the body of the victim is still alive, we have taken her to a hospital in which I will call you in fifteen minutes, signed Deakin's... Head of NYPD' Goren read quietly he slipped the note in his long sleeved, blue shirt pocket the shirt he always wears most times at work. Goren looked around inside of the truck he took several steps further more inside 'alright, all clear.. EAM-'
Before Goren could finish the doors slammed shut, he heard keys rattling to lock the doors; Goren hurriedly walked towards them and tried opening the doors, it was no use. He spotted Eames walking back up towards the truck holding the flash light in her hands and looking startled, her face went paler she looked like she had seen a ghost, apparently she was looking at something near the truck at least that's what Goren thought, he saw a shadow of a figure on the wall, another person was with them the whole time, watching their every move and knew when it was the right time to capture either one of the Detectives that's if it was their plan. Goren yelled for Eames help, he yelled over the top of his lungs even he yelled more to wreck his throat to make it sound all crackly and dry and yet sore. Eames couldn't help she couldn't hear Goren's yell because the truck is sound proof. All she saw was his face and his lips miming into the words she thought of was *help!?* Goren felt a breeze at the back of his neck, the atmosphere grew colder and chillier and even much more dislikeable it even felt so cold-hearted. Shivers went from his tail bone all the way up his spine making his eyes go from strong to meek.
Eames dropped the torch light, she saw something grabbing Goren around the neck, more like arms, she wanted to call for backup with other NYPD cops, she shook herself out of her hypnosis and grabbed a walkie talkie from her jacket she switched it on 'Deakin's, are you there' she commended, the sound of the walkie talkie was more like connecting to the internet but more like a signal that was going out 'Eames what is it' a voice replied through the walkie talkie, Eames placed it near her mouth to make it clear 'Goren is under attack we need more back up!' she yelled, the voice of Deakin's returned 'where is Goren?' Deakin's replied, Eames groaned 'he's inside the truck, the doors are locked and someone is attacking him from inside! Hurry we need backup' Eames waited 'I've called for backup Alex just don't let Goren out of your site!' Eames wiped the anxiety sweat of her forehead 'thankyou... Over and out'
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TBC Goren's inner-voice told him one thing *someone is going to get hurt* it was right after all. How will Goren settle this and will Eames find him in time before it is too late? And who is this mystery man.