Sorry for letting you guys wait that long. Here's the next chapter!


EDDIE'S POV

I woke up and didn't see Loren laying next to me. I searched the whole appartment but couldn't find her. When I walk into the kitchen I see a note laying on the table...

I can't do this anymore. Please don't try to contact me.

x Loren

No, this can not be happening. I finally convinced Loren that she's save with me and now she's getting out of my grip again. I can't let this happen, I've got to get her back. I don't understand what's wrong. Everything was great so what changed her mind? I don't care what she says, I'm going to her house right now.


LOREN'S POV

It's one of the hardest thing I had to do but I can't do this anymore. It's just too hard. It's not like Eddie cares. He'll just move on to the next chick and forget about me in a second. Maybe that's for the best but I just can't help but to cry. I've been crying my eyes out all morning.


NORA'S POV

Loren has changed so much and not in a good way. She doesn't talk to me anymore and when she does she snaps at me. She has been like this for two years now and I just don't get what's wrong. She was such a sweet and responsible girl but she's exactly the opposite now.
Melissa was her best friend and they were almost like sisters but one day when I asked why Melissa didn't come over anymore she just stated that they weren't friends anymore. She dated Ian and he was very sweet and caring but she broke up with him too. When I tried to talk to her about it she would just yell at me that it's not my buisness. And now she's hanging with that Chloe girl. I never liked Chloe, she's just so fake and mean. And what about that Tyler guy, I walk in on them making out all the time. He just doesn't seem like her type.
She goes to parties and gets drunk all the time while she never did that before. I tried to object to her throwing a pool party the day before yesterday but she got very angry so I just let her have it. I stayed in my room and watched out of the window. I saw her making out with EDDIE DURAN. When did that happen? What is EDDIE DURAN doing at Loren's pool party? He seems like her type though.
I walk past Loren's room and hear her crying. I know she'll just snap at me when I walk in but I want to be there for her like old times so I walk in.

Nora: Sweetie? What's wrong?

Loren (sobbing): Nothing!

Nora: But why are you crying?

Loren (snapping): I'm fine mom, just leave me alone!

I wanted to ask more but the door bell rang. I opened it and saw EDDIE DURAN standing in front of my house!

Eddie (insecure): Hello, I'm Eddie Duran. Are you Loren's sister?

Nora: I know who you are, when Loren was younger she was fangirling all over you. (laughing) And no, I'm not her sister. I'm Loren's mother

Eddie (looking down): I'm sorry Mrs. Tate

Nora: It's okay and you can just call me Nora but could you please tell me why you're here and how you know Loren?

Eddie: She didn't tell you about me?

Nora (hurted): No, she used to tell me everything but she changed and not in a good way.

Eddie: You know, deep down she's still the girl she used to be.

Nora (confused): How do you know?

Eddie: Cause when she is, I mean was with me she would act like her old self.

Nora: Okay, I'm now even more confused. Would you please come in and explain what's going on between you and my daughter?

He walked in and sat down on the couch next to the chair I sat down on.

Eddie (hestitant): Well, how much do you know?

Nora: I don't know anything

Eddie: Well, I used to have home scholing but my mom wanted me to go to a public school so I could socialize.

Nora (squealing): Your parents are Max and Katy Duran right? I absolutely love them!

Eddie (laughing): I can see that

Nora (laughing): I'm sorry Eddie, their music is just so great. I can see where you get the talent from.

Eddie: Thanks Nora, that really means a lot.

Nora: Loren loved your parents too, we used to sing to their music every day. Did you hear Loren's beautiful voice?

Eddie: Yes, I did. (blushing) She's amazing

Nora (dirty): I guess you're not only talking about her voice?

Eddie (ashamed): I don't know what you're talking about but Loren really is amazing in everything she does.

Nora: I'm sorry, it's just a bad habit I took over from Melissa

Eddie: Yeah, Melissa really loves talking dirty

Nora (confused): Is Melissa one of your friends?

Eddie: Yeah, why?

Nora: Oh, I just thought your friends would be like Loren's friends.

Eddie: Well, Melissa is sometimes weird but also very nice and Loren's friends aren't nice at all.

Nora (laughing): Yeah. (serious) So, what exactly happened between you and Loren?

Eddie (hurted): We dated but she broke up with me this morning

Nora: What happened?

Eddie (desperate): I don't know, everything was going great but when I woke up this morning there was a note saying she couldn't do it anymore.

Nora (confused): Why was she at your house?

Eddie (ashamed): Well, it's kinda akward to tell you this but we slept together.

Nora (shocked): You did?!

Eddie: Yes but I really care about your daughter Nora

Nora: How long did you guys date?

Eddie (looking down): Just for two days

Nora: You mean since the pool party?

Eddie: Yeah...

Nora: You know, I saw you guys making out in the pool that day

Eddie (ashamed): You did?

Nora: Yeah but why did she broke up with you?

Eddie (holding back his tears): I really don't know Nora. I don't know what I did wrong.

Poor boy, he reminds me of Ian two years ago. Ian was heart broken too when Loren broke up with him after dating her for almost a year. He didn't know what he did wrong either. I can see that Eddie really cares about Loren. I don't get why she broke up with him.

Nora: It's not your fault Eddie. She pushes everyone away

Eddie: Even her own mother?

Nora (hurted): Yeah, it started two years ago. Eddie, could I ask you something?

Eddie: Sure

Nora (hestitant): Do you...eh maybe know...if you were her first time? It's just that I don't know what she's doing anymore. I don't know if she sleeps around with the whole school and it really scares me.

Eddie: Don't worry Nora, she told me that I was her first time.

Nora (relieved): She did? You've got no idea how happy that makes me.

Eddie (hestitant): Could I maybe see her?

Nora: I don't know if it will help, Loren's a very stubborn girl. I've been trying to get through to her for two years now and nothing works.

Eddie: Could I try?


EDDIE'S POV

Loren's mom is very nice. She reminds me a lot of my own mom and she looks a lot like Loren. I really want to see Loren though. I've got to know what's wrong, I want to feel her body in my arms again. I want to kiss her soft lips again and I want to whisper into her ears how much she means to me. When Nora was about to response Loren walked downstairs. She wears a black tank top and white shorts. She looks like she has been crying all morning but she still looks hot as hell. When she sees me she runs upstairs again.

Eddie (yelling): Loren! Please talk to me!

Nora: I'm sorry Eddie...

Eddie (looking down): It's not your fault.


LOREN'S POV

I'm crying on my bed again. Seeing Eddie hurts very bad right now. I really care about him but I can't. What is he doing here? He doesn't care about me so why would he visit me? I'm just so confused, I don't want to talk to him right now.


EDDIE'S POV

It hurts so much not being able to be with her. I've called her a bunch of time but she didn't pick up. I'm walking around with the question why?! Why did she break up with me? Nora told me that Loren was gonna be at a fotoshoot today and she gave me the address. I think I'm gonna go, I just want her to explain.

I walk into the building of Loren's fotoshoot and see people fixing her make-up. She looks beautiful and incredibly hot. If she was still my girlfriend I would walk up to her and pull her into a fierce kiss but she isn't mine anymore. I walk up to her anyway cause I want to talk to her. When she sees me she walks away and I walk after her.

Eddie: Loren, I deserve an explanation. You never told me why...

Loren: Go away Eddie, I can't do this right now.

Eddie: I deserve to know why, Loren. A note telling me you can't do it anymore isn't enough for me.

Loren (snapping): Go away, pretty boy!

Out of nowhere Chloe came walking up to me. She made it impossible to follow Loren any further.

Chloe: I told you she was just a little loser. Just admit that you want to be with me.

Eddie (irritated): Don't talk about Loren that way.

Chloe: Why are you even defending her?! She dumped you!

Eddie (still irritated): I'm very aware of that fact, thank you for rubbing it into my face.

Chloe: You and me belong together Eddie. Just admit that you have a huge crush on me so we can be together.

Eddie: I never had a crush on you Chloe and I still don't. So, if you could just leave me alone.

Before I knew it Chloe crushed her lips onto mine, the paparazzi who got into the building snapped a picture and hurt flashed through Loren's eyes. I guess Loren didn't see that Chloe started the kiss. She can't see that I push Chloe off me either cause she walks to the photographer and starts posing. I try to walk up to her but Chloe's arm holds on to mine and the paparazzi are in my way.

Journalist 1: Eddie, is this your new girlfriend?

Journalist 2: What's her name?

Journalist 3: How long have you guys been together?

Chloe starts posing like a crazy person and sucks up all of the attention.

Chloe: I'm Chloe Carter and Eddie just asked me to be his girlfriend.

I want to object but Chloe and the paparazzi won't let me.

Chloe: Eddie liked me since his first day of highschool but Loren Tate had a crush on him and he didn't want to hurt her feelings.

I can't believe this girl. Everything that comes out of her mounth are lies. I don't get why she would hurt Loren, one of her best friends, like that. She makes Loren look like a pathetic fangirl. I just hope nobody will believe the stories in the papers. When I finally got rid of the paparazzi I look around to find Lorenbut she's gone and Chloe pulls me into another one of her disgusting kisses.


Why did Loren brake up with Eddie? Will they get back together? Why did Loren get mean? Why pushes Loren all the people she loves away? What will happen with Eddie and Chloe? What do you guys think is going to happen? Should I continue or did it suck?