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This is my eleven year old brothers FIRST FANFICTION EVER! With his permission, I posted this here. That being said, I would love, love, love it if you would support him by reading and kindly dropping him a review? He is very nervous about your reactions! Help me convert him to the fanfiction writing faith! Thank you so much!
Happy reading!
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Jack was flying around in Burgess one day when he passed a bakery. he stopped for a moment, looking at all the colorful cakes in the window. Jack realized it had been a long time since he'd eaten cake. A very long time. He looked at the delicious looking desserts. Now he wanted some.
But Jack didn't want to steal it. He would have to make his own. But there was a problem. He didn't know how to make a cake. So he decided to go to Jamie.
When Jack got there he said to Jamie, "Do you know how to make a cake?"
"Well yeah you get a cake batter box then follow the instructions. Then you get ice cream!" Jack looked puzzled.
"What's Ice cream?"
Jamie looked at Jack with his mouth dropped. "You don't know what ice cream is?"
"No, why?"
Jamie bolted out of the bedroom, headed for the kitchen. He pulled out the ice cream and a spoon, closed the freezer, then scooped it and shoved it in Jack's mouth. Jack's face lit up and he said, "What is this?"
"Umm...vanilla ice cream. Oh! Try some mint! And chocolate! And peanut butter!"
Jack's mouth was filled with ice cream and he said, "Whoa. MORE."
A few days later.
Jack was at the North Pole and he was in a bed...a hospital bed. A medic yeti was there trying to get Jack awake but failing. Jack had so much ice cream that he passed out. If they were lucky, he's would wake up in a few hours. The yeti looked at Jack sadly. He did not envy the headache he would have when he did, though.
A/N: As said above, a review would be much appreciated! Going against policy, I will personally reply to each review with his reaction. Thank you so much!
(If this was not to your liking, I've posted a chapter of my own. Look at the cute little next button on the bottom right of the screen! two chapter update, whoot whoot!)
Love,
Mariah
