Lies of the Mind
Hello people! This is my first fanfic! I hope all goes well! Enjoy!
Name: Lies of the mind
Summary: Syaoran has a beautiful wife, Raena, and a beautiful daughter, Sakura. But when sudden memories take over him, He won't treat Sakura as just a daughter. Slowly he realizes the lies of a mind. (S+S)
Ages: Sakura: 17
Syaoran:19 (thinks 36)
Raena: 34
Disclaimer: I do not own Cardcaptor Sakura (CLAMP)
Raena is mine
Reviews:
Everyone: yes I mean EVERYONE! Not people who are called everyone. Plz read the notes below kay? Arigatou!
the cherry tree: yes you're rite! I think you're the only one who caught onto that! And yeah, I should bring up his real age. I will this chapter!
BabyPenguin: Yeah. Everything's going rite if you hate all three of them. I wasn't even planning on the twist, but I guess it popped into my head! Lol! I don't think it's much of a cliffy tho…
Cheerysakura88: Sharp glass it is! Sorry, not chopping cuz she'll die too quickly and no one will have a turn…. Next chapter do you wanna be the guest appearance? You the highest letter name in the club so you go first!
Princess-confused: Thank you! Hope to see you in my other chapters!
Death is waiting: That's great you want to join, but what weapon do you want to use? Yeah, my mom's strict when she's angry.
Walking Green Cucumber: okay, sharp knife. Oh yeah, think back. Who do you think was Raena's husband? Lol! My point was to make those girls sluts! Lol!
NOTE 1: So far there is three members in the club! Join anytime! For any questions about the club just review! Below are the people who've joined:
Cherrysakura88: Sharp glass
Death is waiting: weapon not confirmed yet
Walking Green Cucumber: SUUUUPER DUUUPER sharp knife!
(the guest appearances will happen alphabetically and will be two at a time if there's too many members)
NOTE 2: Yes, as I have mentioned in some reviews above, I will set up a club called Scissors-Bring-Death-to-Raena-Club. What the people who have decided to join get to do is stab Raena when I have guest space. Added bonus is that I will make a bonus chapter made for the members just to stab Raena with scissors or other pointy things. If you want to join plz tell me whenever okay? (oh and mention what item you want to stab her with.) Just review that you want to join!
NOTE 3: I have made a new FANFICTION! It's called "Blessed Curse" and is a fantasy genre. So go and check it out if you want!
The survey!
Do you want more:
a.More SxS fluff
b.More Raena insanity
c.More about the other characters
e.Other (please tell me what.)
do you want the story to be:
a.long chapters, short story
b.Short chapters, long story
Do you like (answer yes or no):
cliffhangers?
Fluff?
Sadness?
Humor?
Action/fighting?
Do you want a in the next chapter:
a.kiss
b.death
c.fight
d.past flashback
5.Do you want:
a. Syaoran to be more forward
b. Sakura sadder
c. the girls sluttier
d. Syaoran more curious
e. Sakura happier
f. Raena to come back
That's it guys! Please review your replies and I'll fit them in!
