A/N:
First I would like to thank my wonderful guest reviewer who hated my story so much that they decided to spend there precious time commenting and thought my summary was so awful that they chose to read it.
I love getting reviews that critise my writing, as long as its done in a constructive way. Part of the reason people write on sites like this is to receive feedback from other people. But just telling me something is bad wont make it better, it will just piss me off, or in the case of the reviewer above make me laugh.
Anyway bitch over, secondly reviews:
Stardust of Orion: Thank you for pointing out the blur between the two scenes, I'll make sure I change it when I have the time. As for your suggestions about Severus, your right, I am unsure of who to pair him with. I quite like the idea of Severus with either Sirius or Narcissa (who will begin to have a much bigger role in the story in the next few chapters) and I can also see him with Bill or Charlie. However, I hate fics where it seems that everyone has to be paired up, so although I will be having a happy Severus, I wont try and force a couple that doesn't fit with the way I portray his character.
My Alternate Reality: Glad you're happy with things so far, I've always loved Draco as a character and I also think that is important that Harry makes friends from Voldemort's side
SpyderByter: really not sure what to say to that exept that you've one the award for most random comment ever ;)
Lady Aqualyne: glad your enjoying . From the comments I've got so far, I can see the most likely Snape pairing being Sirius, although I do like the idea of outing him with one of the slytherins. As for Snape and Neville, I'm not even sure how that would work ("not like that, you imbecile") and Snape and Ron doesn't even bare thinking about lol.
Dhragonis-Slytherin: although some of the changes I'm going to be using are common, I think they work (why mess with a winning formula?). although I can see a situation in which Ron would follow Harry, I think both my characterisation of him and the time that this is set (end of fourth book, jealous about triwizard tournament and the fact that they are not in contact over that summer) would mean that for my story it just couldn't happen. Also, I couldn't Have everyone follow Harry, so Ron just lost out lol.
To all my other reviewers: thank you for your support I appreciate all my reviews (except certain guest ones lol) and they deffo make me write faster.
Finally; I would like to point out that I am dyslexic and while word picks up words that are spelt wrongly, it doesn't pick up words that I spelt right but didn't mean. When reading through this chapter I found quite a few, but there is a strong possibility that there is some that I missed, so I apologise for that.
Harry Potter had never been happier. Today was officially the best day of his life and the person he had to thank for that was the most feared Dark Lord in a century. It had started as a normal day; he'd woken up and had breakfast as normal, then trained with the Dark Lord, studied with Draco and gone to wash up for dinner. However, when he went into the dinning room he saw not one, but two people sitting there.
"Oh my god, Sirius" Harry shouted as he launched himself towards his godfather.
"Heya pup, how you been?" Sirius asked, hugging Harry tightly
"I'm great now you're here" Harry smiled "why are you here though? Have you joined?"
"Yeah I've joined pup. I get my mark next meeting. And as for why I'm here, that would be because you're here pup. You know I would never fight against you. The only reason I stayed with Dumbledore is because of you."
Harry just hugged him tighter, before pulling back and murmuring "thank you."
"No problem pup"
They finally pulled apart and Harry looked at the other occupant of the room. Voldemort was smiling at him.
"I plan on letting the rat be found next week, after I've made sure that he knows no important information."
"Really?" Harry asked, hardly daring to believe that his godfather would soon be a free man.
"Consider it an early birthday present" he said, nodding.
After dinner Voldemort suggested retiring to his private sitting room for a drink to celebrate. Harry and Sirius both quickly agreed and followed Voldemort to the room, where he pulled out three glasses and a bottle of fire whiskey. Pouring the drink and settling back into a chair, Voldemort lifted his glass "to the end of Dumbledore and the rise of the Dark Order."
Harry and Sirius also raised there glasses, echoing the Dark Lord before drinking the amber liquid. Voldemort refreshed the glasses and Sirius raised his, saying "to family" nodding to his godson, who smiled and once again downed his drink. The drinks were refreshed once again and Harry made his toast. "to new begins" he smiled at Voldemort and Sirius.
By the end of the first bottle they were toasting "Dumbledore choking on a lemon drop" and by half way through the second Sirius was slurring his way through a list of why Harry was the best godson in the world.
"You know Lily and James would be proud of you pup." He was saying "I know you Harry and I know you're worried about what they would think, but they really would be proud of you. I know you've changed sides, but that only goes to show that your not so stupid that your blindly following Dumbles. They didn't give there lives for you to become a pawn, they did it so you could live and be happy." He smiled weakly at Harry then heaved himself up "I'm going to turn in, I love you Harry"
After Sirius had left the room, Voldemort poured himself and Harry another drink and then stared into it as if he wanted to drown himself in its depths.
Harry looked at him sadly. "I've forgiven you, you know?" he said.
Voldemort just grunted.
"I mean it" Harry said, "so snap out of it. You've taught me more than anyone else; you've given me a life I never thought I'd have, so you don't get to feel guilty about a mistake you made years ago."
Voldemort looked at Harry surprised. " your godfathers right you know, you really are the most selfless, loving, amazing, forgiving, amazing, wonderful human being I have ever met."
"And you are derry vunk. Wait… wait no, you are very dunk."
Voldemort laughed at that "so are you. I can't believe I got a fourteen year old boy drunk"
"Seriously, you've killed people and tortured them and stuff and your worried about under age drinking" they both started laughing.
"I guess your right" Voldemort smiled "but we should get you to bed"
Harry laughed even harder at that. "That's funny. Lord Voldemort wants to get me to bed" Voldemort just shook his head.
"Come on Harry up we get" as he put out his hand to pull him up. Unfortunately, having had even more to drink than Harry and therefore being ever so slightly intoxicated himself, Voldemort was slightly unsteady on his feet. So instead of pulling the teenager in front of him up, as he had intended, he managed to instead be pulled down, on top of said teenager.
Harry blinked in confusion, his lap now full of Voldemort. "ermm hi" he giggled
Voldemort looked up at Harry. "You know Potter, you have very beautiful eyes"
Harry stopped laughing at that statement, instead asking nervously "really?"
"Really Harry. You are the most beautiful person I have ever met" and then he kissed him.
He couldn't help it; the nervous innocence of the teen's voice combined with a flash of the most brilliant smile ever seen would snap the will of much stronger men. The kiss was tentative at first, questioning, but when he felt Harry respond he kissed him even harder, tongue begging for entrance to Harry's mouth, his fingers curling in the teens hair. They broke apart, both panting. Harry's lips were swollen and his eyes were shining brightly. Voldemort sighed "come on Harry, lets get you to bed" he said as he climbed off the boy. Pulling Harry's arm around his neck the two slowly made there way out of the room and across the hall, to Voldemort's chambers. Voldemort deposited Harry on the bed before stumbling around the other side and collapsing on it himself. Pulling the covers over the two of them, Voldemort place an arm around Harry and drifted off to sleep.
A/N2:
Not entirely happy with this chapter, but I figured it was the best way to get the relationship moving. Curious to here what people think about it (especially about whether this is moving to fast) so please review. I have not started on chapter eight yet, but it should be up this week.
