Hello to all,
I am soo happy with all of the support I have gotten, especially from the last chapter. I love you all. I only have a small problem (well not really a problem... I've just forget the word I need to use) which is with the guest reviews. Please put your names, or at least something so when I answer/reply I same differentiate between you all. Also I am now having to write on my blackberry phone- which is why there's may not be a bottom authors note or line gap, as its doesn't allow me to do that. Anyway;
Guest 1- Here it is.
Slytherin Quidditch- Yes, yes he is. You made me smile so much by calling Evie E, and as for how he is going to make it up to her? I have no idea... I just know that she is not as submissive as he thinks she is ;). Thanks for the review.
Guest 2- Thank you. It took me so long to write that chapter because of the meanness (Is that a word?) I tried to keep it as close to the book as I could- but the film is a big influence as well. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I hope you wont be disappointed.
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Evie's pov
"Stop it" Tris said before Four could throw the knife at Al. I groaned inwardly and mentally scolded my sister for her selfless Abnegation ways. Don't get me wrong, I was immensely proud that she was standing up for Al, but I just wish she didn't do it when Eric was in the room. He was a vicious pig at the best of times, but where the Priors where concerned he just wanted to make life as difficult as he could... And trust me, ninety percent of the time, he succeeded.
I took a step closer to my sister and reassuringly pressed my hand to her shoulder- I was at an angle so that nobody could see my sisterly act but Tris would understand it, her posture relaxed the smallest but to let me know she was alright. I dropped my hand before anyone could see me egging her on, but stayed close to her, I may have been the youngest out of the Priors, but it didn't mean I was any less protective over my siblings and parents. "Any idiot could stand in font of a target. It doesn't prove anything expect that you're bulling us. Which, as I recall, is a sign of cowardice."
"Then it should be easy for you. If you're willing to take his place." Eric replied. I swore under my breath of course he would do something like this. Sadistic pig. I threw a dirty look his way, which he returned (Eric's and mine conversations now consisted wholly on nasty looks and tense body language. I of course -being female- won the dirty look competition.) Eric's scowl turned into a smirk, and it didn't take a genius as of why. He was making me pay for my actions with Levi yesterday. Tris didn't back down, she held her head high and moved throughout the crowd.
"There goes your pretty face. Oh wait you don't have one." Peter hissed as Tris walked passed him.
"Shut up Peter." I hissed back, my voice echoing round the now silent training room, if I couldn't let my anger out on Eric, I certainly wouldn't mind letting it out on Peter. "If I wanted shit from you I would have squeezed your head." Christina behind me snorted, and even Will looked amused. Peter turned towards me his face showing as much contempt as he could, I smiled back at him treating him very much like I treated Caleb back in Abnegation when he would scold me for not being selfless. I'd be as annoying as I could just because I could, and the best way to do that was to smile innocently at them and watch them go insane. Thinking of my brother suddenly made me extremely homesick. I miss my brother, I miss his hugs, I missed his comforting way and I want nothing more for him to be happy... but right now I just wanted him here to hold me like I dreamed he did last night.
"Enough." Eric snapped, cutting off any comment Peter was about to make. "If I wanted to hear your voice Brunette I would of said so. If you say another word, you wont like the consequences." He said swapping the Stiff comment with hair colours, like most other people did now. Bastard
I glared at the leader standing in front with me, and turned my attention back to my sister, who at this moment in time, both impressed me and made me question her sanity. For someone who had only won one fight, she seemed to have more Dauntless in her than most, as I wouldn't imagine many would go up against Eric. I knew that I wouldn't. He scared me to much to do that, but he didn't scare Tris. I had some weird feelings for him. That I wasn't even going to try and analyse. Yet she was the who didn't fear him. She had already reached the target and was standing boldly in front of it, I knew that she was nervous from experience.
I felt Al stand behind me, his face torn between embarrassment and gratitude. I reached back and grabbed hold of his hand, needing someone to help me watch this. He wouldn't like this either, unbeknown to him and Tris, me and Christina had already guessed his crush on my sister. It was both cute and hilarious for the both of us, and we often jokes behind their backs. He stepped forward and slung his arm along my shoulders. He was a dear friend to us, and his actions made the nerves that had been building up calm slightly, but my body was still tense as I waited for knives to be thrown at my sisters defenceless body.
"If you flinch, Al takes your place. Understand?" Four asked. I felt Al stiffen at the comment, I leaned further into him. Christina and Will walked over to where we were standing, they to looked agitated and nervous. Christina grabbed my free hand; I looked at her gratefully. Will was holding Christina close to him, as if to protect her. I turn my focus back to Tris, just in time to see the first knife being thrown. It landed close to her cheek. I felt my heart rate quicken. 'You can do it Bea. You can do it.' I kept repeating, as if I was trying to send the message to her. "You about done Stiff?" Four mocked, I felt myself scowl at him. I expected the bulling from Eric... What is it with the dauntless? Leave me and my sister alone!
"No." Tris said defiantly, my scowl turned into a smile.
"Eyes open then." Tris complied. Four threw another knife- it landed above her head. I leaned even further into Al, my head falling against his chest. My hands where balled into fists. Al tightened his grip on me, and in the corner of my eye I could see Will do the same to Christina. This was a harder watch than hers and Peters fight.
"Come on stiff. Let someone else stand there and take it." Four mocked again. Tris face twisted into annoyance.
"Shut up, Four." She snapped. Four threw the last knife, which hit the board to close to her head for me to be comfortable. When she stepped forward I realised that her ear was bleeding. Wanker. I thought aiming all my anger at the leader and our trainer. Eric walked over to Tris, and put his arm around her. Similar to what Al was doing to me. He squeezed her shoulder, looking straight at me. I immediately knew what he was doing, he was trying to make me miserable again by making me jealous of sister. To an extent it worked, but I was to proud of her and mad at him to be as hurt as I probably would have been.
"I would love to stay and see if the rest of you are as daring as she is, but I think that is enough for today." Eric said, finally turning his gaze away from me. I quickly give Al a quick embrace and murmur a thanks into his ears, and then walk over to where my sister was standing. Eric stayed close by, but stepped back so I could embrace her.
"You are insane." I said as I stepped back, she smiled slightly at me.
"Is that your version of a compliment E?" Tris teased, I nodded proudly and stuck my tongue out at her, which made her smile brighten. "Where are you going now?"
"I'm going to meet Levi, he had something to show me." Tris frowned at my answer which made me repress the urge to roll my eyes. "Don't worry. He's fine." I consoled, she gave me an amused look and raised her eyebrows.
"Oh really?" She teased, but her face suddenly turned serious "Just be safe okay?" I nodded and pulled her into another hug.
"Seriously Bea. I meant what I said last night"
Levi took me to his favourite place by the chasm, it was fenced off, which meant that we could dangle our legs over the edge. The water splashing against my feet felt refreshing, and the noise finally allowed me to think. Levi interlinked our hands, and pulled me against him. He was warm, but somehow not as comfortable as Eric was, but I doubted anyone would be. Me and Levi sat in comfortable silence for a long while; both lost in our own thoughts.
"You are extremely distracted Miss Evie." Levi noted after the silence had become awkward. I nodded and smiled cheekily at him, which he returned.
"Worried about Dauntless initiation." I lied, it didn't sound very convincing but to be fair it didn't have to be. Levi wasn't the one to pry, he never asked to many questions, and any 'inappropriate' ones he did ask never needed an answer as they were always 'messing around questions' as he liked to call it.
"This have anything to do with a certain leader?" He asked, I turned my body so I could look at his face. He knew. God damn it, he knew. His eye's met mine hungry for information, I dropped my gaze and moved into the position I was in a moment ago. "I saw you together the other day, and I may of heard what he said to you yesterday. Don't worry I won't say anything." He stated, not asking any questions. The usual Levi behaviour.
"Thank you." I whispered back, he was a good guy after all.
"But." He started, and I felt my heart begin to sink. Levi's voice was filled with his usual mischief. "I think we should have some fun with it."
"Fun?" I repeated sounding incredibly unsure and stupid. He nodded, and leaned closer into me. He brought his mouth to my ear and said.
"I've always wanted two things in life. To be and all round gentleman- which we can both agree, I am. And two to make Eric as pissed off as I can."
"And what do I have to do with you plans?"
"Eric thinks of you as property, I am going to make it seem like I own you, and by that I mean date you." The look on his face glowed with self pride. I shook my head in desperation... Men!
"I'm not going to date you Levi. You're a funny and good friend, and I am comfortable sitting with you. But I am not going to date you." I stated, trying my hardest not to hurt him.
"Oh Evie. I meant fake dating." He said as if it was obvious of what he meant. I frowned at him, and waited for him to elaborate. What the hell goes through that boys head. Sometimes I wonder for the dauntless men's sanity. "Look Eric was pissed when you kissed my cheek. What do you think would happen if he saw you kiss me for real?" I wasn't able to fight the smile crawling across my face. I liked the way Levi thought. Eric was a possessive arsehole, and to have something he 'owned' go AWOL in front of him, might just be the best thing he needed.
"What did Eric do to you then?" I asked, he sighed,
"Eric is a horrible, horrible man, who decided that my brother would be great punching bag." His voice was extremely dark, the tone didn't suit him at all. I didn't even mask the shock on my face, his look softened when he looked back down at me. "Perfect timing." He murmured I looked back to see the Eric was about to walk along here, and guessing from the look Levi was giving me- it was show time! "Follow my lead, and put your arms around my neck." I nodded and complied with his instruction. My small hands fitted nicely round his neck. I noted that his skin was warm, he was warm. It matched his personality. "Feel free to mess up my hair." He added with a wink. I rolled my eyes and let out an exasperated sigh, one that only made the grin on his face widen. His placed his hands either side of my face and gently pushed me towards him, I moved my Legs so they where either side of his. As his lips found mine he lowered his left hand to the back of my neck, pulling me further into him. His other hand travelled down my back, and was rubbing in circular motions. I kissed him back as best as I could bit hard with no experience of a kiss where I'm actually doing something. This kiss was gentle, staged but ... Nice, I guess. Remembering what he said about messing with his hair, I moves one of my hands up to grab a fistful of it, Levi moaned against me, I didn't know if it was real or fake, but I was past caring at this point. This was fun. I liked kissing Levi. The kiss depend, I was just about to open my mouth and let him have full access. When we were torn apart by the murderous face of Eric.
"What do you think you are doing?!"
