Should I continue? (chapter 6 extract at the end)

I don't know whether to continue this story or not, I don't have many reviews and after re-reading it I am beginning to find my characters 2 dimensional. So I want you to let me know, should I:

A) Continue and keep the story the way it is

B) Re write the story (I will keep the same plot)

C) Stop writing the story

I am not vanishing from forever, I will just stop this story (if you guys want me too). I will keep this on I just wont be updating it anymore. If I stop, I will most likely keep writing more Lost Boys fiction but it may be a while before I do as I have no ideas as of late.

By the way, if I continue this story will only be one part instead of 3 as I feel that I will ever get 3 written. I want you guys to let me know if you have any ideas for this fic either through reviews (anonymous are NOT disabled) or messaging through its up to you. But just so you know I will only write more if I get more reviews.

Just to keep you interested (hopefully) here is an extract from chapter 6:


Chapter 6 Secrets beneath the Floor Boards.

Normal P.O.V.

3 week's ago Raven was attacked, wounded and almost killed, 2 weeks ago She had faked a bad headache to avoid everyone, 1 week ago Michael had realised that something wasn't right and Today? Today Raven was mooching around her bedroom doing nothing in particular, just wanting to be alone. Rave didn't know why she wanted to be alone, it was strange really nothing seemed to interest her anymore, except Alan. But it was different this time around, not like the crush she had on him before, no, this was a hunger, a craving a dark desire that had Raven watching his every move. Every breath he took, every flash of his dark eyes, every beat of his heart…

Hope you guys liked that and PLEASE review you will get Cupcakes, Cookies and Hugs*

Love

Fire Storm Pixie

*Unless you have personal space issues in which you can take a cookie and go…(apologetic face)