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Chapter 4: it starts

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"Okay I guess you can help them like that. Good luck." Benni stated as ben zoomed off to where the crash had happened hopping nobody was or would get hurt.

"Benni who are you really?" Grandpa max asked "you seemed to be testing ben for something right there."

"Yes I was." Benni answered max's question. "I had seen everything Benjamin had done since he got to this park." Gwen had a look of shock and worry on her face as benni said that sentence. "And if he really wanted to help people what he needs is conviction to help those that need it" he finished ignoring Gwen's look of worry. "I just had to make sure. Well…?" benni asked both Gwen and max

"What…!" asked both Gwen and grandpa in unison.

"Are you going to go help him, or just sit here and wait for him?"

Both grandpa and gwen had a dumbfounded look. gwen was the first to react and go after ben 'of course' benni thought to himself before calling max "we need to have a chat." was all benni said

Ben was going as fast as he could but it still felt like an eternity to him but was only five seconds to someone looking on he had arrived in his XLR8 form before his watched time out right in front of the robot. 'It's huge bigger then a three story house' ben thought.

The scene ben arrived at was horrific at best there people that had been caught in the blast of the robot landing so close to the entrance to bens satisfaction no one was dead but there were a lot injured ben had to get that robot out of there.

He ran towards the robot and getting closer to it he could see details of its body and legs to his surprise it did not have a head just arms and legs and these bumps on its shoulders. It had a red colored chassis and it was a tri pod all three legs made up at least half its length its arms were just as long as its legs with five shape knife-like fingers. It looked down at ben and noticed the watch on his wrist "oh man. Come at me stupid." Was all ben said as he ran away from the entrance hoping to get the robots attention the robot simply launched its probes out of its shoulder to go collect the omnitrix as ben ran full speed into the forest with the probes and robot in close pursuit.

They ran for a good two minutes before a tree branch swung at bens head he nimbly dogged it landing on the ground with a silent thump as THWAK the branch hit the probe right behind ben sending it flying to the probe close behind it knocking it into a nearby tree instantly destroying both of them in a blast of flame wooden splinters and retched metal. "Darn I missed one." Ben turned to see Gwen behind the tree with a disappointed look on her face making fun of ben. "Oh wait its just ben." She said stinking out here tongue at him.

"Funny, really funny..." Ben said interrupted by the mechanical sound of the robot growing closer.

It popped out from behind a line of trees directly behind Gwen nearly crushing her as it stepped down not focusing on her missing by only a few inches as the shockwave of the impact hit Gwen that sent her flying into the ground sliding for a few before she hit her head on a rock with a nasty crunch sound.

Ben was enveloped in anger "GWWEENN" his voice reverberating with such rage that the robot stop for the first time it felt afraid looking down at his watched that went green the moment he looked down at it he activated it to no avail ben was shocked no green flash no alien standing where ben was standing and then he heard her. "This is what you get for ending my fun" said the replica Gwen inside his head "WHAT ARE YOU DOING UNLOCK THE WATCH RIGHT NOW." Shouted ben leaving the robot again frozen just from bens voice although slightly surprised at his outburst seemingly directed at no one "huum… no" was all the replica said "WHAT"ben asked shocked "I don't know what your deal is but if this robot kills me you will die to" ben tried reasoning with the replica contain his rage from to keep it from clouding his reasoning. "I don't care, at least your cousin will die" but she knew his argument was sound ben was about to lose it until in a meek voice she said "if you name me I will help YOU"

Ben so surprised by her demand that his anger vanished. "Fine I'll name you… I'll name you memry." ben stated much to memry's elation from ben calling her name. "All right I'll help you benji." The nick name memry used pissed ben off but she just laughed at ben's angry demeanor "here you go" and with that she forced ben to transform. his body began to grow a full foot from his human height as his body had begun to change his skin was replaced with a green colored crystal that began to envelope his entire body his clothes transformed into skin or crystal tight jump suit, it hugged his body it was white with a black line going through the right breast vertically with the omnitrix dial on his right breast

"Diamond head" ben shouted as he charged at the robot who was to stunned from what happened to move "of course it hasn't moved you were so angry just a minute ago I bet its still realing from the shock." replied memry telepathically ben thought not to dwell on it and kick some robot butt he charged at the behemoth with the training he had in the omnitrix he had complete control of diamond head forming a blade from his right arm that sharpened to fine point getting ready to slash into the robot.

Getting closer ben was surprised to see the robot lift its arm it fist open reveling and indentation in its palm where it launched a blood red beam heading straight for ben thinking on instinct he remembered that crystals can bounce back light he quickly reverted his right hand and transformed them into a plat as he felt the energy travel into his body and controlled how it traveled keeping it at the center of his body in the abdomen focusing it after the robot stopped firing ben quickly stretched out his right arm and through his finger he fired a concentrated beam that had turned green from being inside his body cutting the robot into little pieces expelling all the stored energy.

Ben timed out just in time as the beam died barely. Gasping out in pain he went to go check up on Gwen limping closer to her. Grandpa Max had gotten there without ben noticing and was already checking on gwen a calm and relieved look on his face. Ben stepped closer and grandpa max noticed ben suddenly running up to ben grabbing him before he fell over. Ben coughed blood, grandpa had reeled back accidentally letting ben hit the ground where he started vomiting blood. 'BEN, OH MY GOD BEN OH NO.' Memry shouted in ben's head max going to pick up ben stood frozen everything stopped moving, the trees in mid sway with the breeze, the grass moving with the trees, the bugs crawling, the bird flying, everything stopped in mid air or mid movement all hat actually was moving was benni and don-don approaching bens body. Benni pointed at the omnitrix memry had materialized surprised and broken.

"You look like someone died." Stated benni calmly at her

"YOU BASTARD" Memry shouted running towards benni only to be stopped by donna who pinned her to the floor now she had the appearance of an adult her slender arms and legs replaced with defined and well toned arms, her breast fully developed, her hair reaching her waist still clothed in her hoodie skirt and stockings she held memry there.

"Did you have anything to do with this memry" benni asked coldly memry looked benni in the eyes and froze she did not freeze with fear only with surprise benni was calm as if ben was not dying right behind her.

"FUCK YOU, HOW DARE YOU ACCUSE ME OF HURTING BEN" Memry shouted at benni

"Its not the first time you hurt him."

"What are you talking about?" Memry asked puzzled

"Threatening to kill gwen, almost having him sink into insanity, making him watch as you almost skewer gwen though the heart. Yes you've done nothing to hurt him."

"Those were to get rid of HER I don't want her to mess with my ben."

Benni had an imperceptible smile poker faced he continued "Your ben?" Memry was aghast "You love ben." 'so interesting' thought benni looking at her aghast face her smiled at her. "fine I will believe you didn't do anything to ben but you know what happened, don't you? Uh Donna if you could."

Donna got off of memry and returned to benni's side "Yeah the energy beam he took in was not completely out of him and h… he reverted back and t… the pain there was so much pain I had to cut the connection with him it was… it was horrible and all he cared about was making sure 'She' was fine I'm going to kill her now"

"NOOO" Ben shouted still coughing blood grabbing memry's leg before he froze again keeping her held down

"WHY, WHY, WHY, WHY DOES HE FIGHT SO HARD FOR "HER"."

"You really are stupid aren't you? He's safe so are you, he fought that thing wanting to keep you and gwen safe now he has to worry about her not you right now. So you have a bio scan how is the damage"

"The beam has rebound all over his insides it's a miracle it missed his heart but everything else was torn to shreds." Memry complied by answering bennies question shivering and squirming recounting the damage ben had taken.

"And he can still move so much amazing, well then I best take a look at him" benni moved towards ben with donna at his side still in adult form so she was taller then the 10 year old benni and she enjoyed the change in perspective from having to looking up to him to having to looking down at him she smiled looking at him but he was not paying attention to donna he never does when he's focused. Waving his had memry froze like the others but ben had regained motion benni tore him from memry's ankle as he left a trail of blood on the ground as Benjamin pasted out from the pain and blood loss.

"well lets get started if you thought what happened to Benjamin was painful before you have no idea what he will have to endure now, I am sorry Benjamin I really am." Benni said as he began to heal ben who began screaming a soul retching wail convulsing and twitching spasmodically.

"Can't you put him under?" Donna asked not wanting to hear him scream like that.

"Donna he is under this is only a fifth of the pain he would be feeling if he was awake. The spinal cord is fine but the ribs, his organs, and most of his bodily fluids are in his abdomen area purée styled only his heart was spared. The procedure has only begun now comes the painful part." Benni said all of this coldly and in a matter of fact way with no hint of remorse for causing ben so much pain 'he's going to have a nightmare, I already know' donna thought between ben screaming and the thought of benni's past she couldn't take anymore and benni knew she couldn't. Donna froze like everything else as a tear froze in mid-air as it was falling down her face.

(Skip 3 hours if time was passing)

Benni was almost done with the healing and ben was still screaming not as bad as before but still enough to traumatize any regular person during the operation benni had was getting tired freezing time while healing someone took a lot out of him there was only a few minutes before he would pass out but he was done ben was healed and he returned memry to the watch and restarted time after taking donna and returning to the campsite.

Max was carrying ben while gwen was waling both looked terrible but ben looked peaceful in his sleep. "Benni were we gone long?" grandpa max asked nonchalantly approaching the R.V. and letting gwen in first then he went in setting ben n his bed and gwen knocked out as soon as her head touched the pillow grandpa max moved to the front of the R.V. sitting and sleeping in the drivers seat.

Benni fell asleep outside with the campfire burning brightly as he and donna now in don-don form fell into a dreamless sleep, lucky don-don benni was about to relive a nightmare. He was on a deserted planet getting ready for war the odds were in his favor 16 armadas and a major army all against him. he smiled, smiled at his opponents as he said to all of them not enough he then took off his armor removed his weapons and tied both hands behind his back He loved fighting the killing the rush of dismembering his opponents and the blood soaking his clothes it had taken 2 years to build up their armies and It took benni two hours to burn it all to ashes only one person was alive and that was benni laughing as he looked over the now obliterated army not a scratch on him or the bandana tying his arms together. He then proceeded to find survivors and make sure there weren't any laughing the whole time just like a madman who was having the time of his life.

Benni awoke screaming, sweating and panting from his nightmare getting ready to hurl but he held it in 'no point in making a mess' he thought he turned to a still sleeping don-don and a still bright starry sky it was a few hours till morning he judged. Trying to go to back to sleep was impossible for him after having a nightmare but he felt something warm, looking around he found the fire had died out but the feeling of warmth was clear he looked to the epicenter of the warmth and found that it came form the R.V. moving towards it he wondered truly what would he find when he got there.

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