The Diary Adventures of Molly Drake

The Drake Diaries

I am really, really sorry that I haven't updated this! It's just too much homework and social stuff really, anyways I tried to make this much darker but i'm not used to it as this is my second fanfic. It's like I tried to make a young Molly be in a situation where she needs to act older... Hope you like it and remember to review! Just putting "Really good" or "Love it" makes a huge difference! I looked on Wikipedia and found out about the red rain in 1983 in case you're wondering (tell me if it's wrong!)

Wednesday, 30th April:

Shaz visited today! Well she only popped round because Mum woke up for less than a minute. Josie came round as well crying, Shannon's gone missing.

"We only went to Pegasus Park but it was closed because of the strange weather, I mean red rain? Soon comets will be falling out of the sky!" She sobbed, while trying to laugh.

I told her to remember what happened.

"Well it closed while we were in there, we were in this kind of tunnel that passes under the aquarium when the lights went off and the fish just froze! Then we ran outside and then..."

"Then what?"

"Shannon screamed. The whole tunnel collapsed, but then I went in the debris and found her ok."

I turned the news on. There were reports about what Josie just told me, I couldn't bear to listen to two stories, so I turned it off.

"Then the rain got heavier and turned more red! Then the whole place turned heavy in fog and we looked into the sky. There was a huge black cloud but it didn't look normal so we kept running then there was a gate we ran through but rocks from this statue fall off and trapped Shannon. That's the last I saw of her."

In less than 5 seconds, there were us two crying.

"I then called Tracey, she was with us but she stayed at the car park the whole time but when she came over she spotted a hole, so she crouched through and then more rocks fell. Now Shannon and Tracey are trapped in that theme park!"

"Come on, We going there." I said plainly.

"No we're not! Your mum just woke from a coma and your running off to a haunted theme park!" She yelled at me, her temper was oddly rising...

The TV then turned itself on! "It has been confirmed that two young girls, Shannon Delcoy and Tracey Mellow have gone missing in the park." The newsman spoke seriously, "It has been advised to cancel all plans to the park for the next week or two."

I looked at Josie and she returned the same glance.

"It seems we'll have to scrap that plan then." I mumbled.

Monday, 5th June:

"The world is coming to an end. I saw the cloud for myself and it was definitely a sort of vortex! Please help me Mum!"

This is it! The government have sent out the army to deal with this cloud! More people all over the UK seem to go missing everyday now, What if I'm next? Evan was called up to the Houses of Parliament today to discuss plans! He bought me with him because no one else would look after me, I'm just too cute...

"Molly, you must be on your best behaviour ok?"

"Yeah, Evan I will."

"Now I need to introduce you to the minister of the territorial army because he needs you to help out with this operation." Evan was giving me a huge responsibility!

He handed me a steel briefcase, I opened it to find the things Lara Croft would have died to have! A pistol, Laser pen, Heat goggles and an earpiece!

"Look at you, Agent Drake!" Evan whispered and pinched my cheek.

"Evan! I'm not a child!"

After walking up loads of stairs, we finally reached the main chamber.

"Mr. White! I see you've bought Miss Drake with you." He spoke loudly.

"Yes, sir. This is Molly Drake, Alexandra's daughter." Evan said, introducing me. I shook hands with the man.

"Lovely to meet you Molly. I am Richard Adams, the Minister of Britain's Territorial Army. I see you have the tools Evan gave you?"

"Yes, sir." I held out the briefcase.

"Fantastic! Now Molly, I need to show you how to use a dangerous weapon like this." He took the pistol, aiming it for understanding. "Well there's nothing to learn except for reloading, but just pull the trigger to fire."

Tuesday, 6th June:

My mission today was to return to the Theme Park, even though the cloud has moved from over it.

"Molly, Good luck with this, I know your 15, But just be careful."

"I will dad."

Did I just call Evan my dad?

He just pretended to ignore it, but I knew it was bugging him...

I got out of the car and proceeded through the cornered off area, I was shaking at this point!

I crawled through the hole Tracey went through, the rest was just fog.

"Drake! This is Adams from HQ. What can you see?"

"Not much, sir. Just fog and a few bodies...Wait, bodies!?"

"I thought only two people were the last to be seen! How could there be more? How many more?"

"About four, sir. Whatever caused this, will spread to central London I'm guessing."

I kept walking to find the tunnel that Shannon and Josie were almost trapped in, I sneaked through but the sea animals were back in the glass. But they looked different.

"Sir, The sea animals look different."

"I'm sure they do..."

"I'm not joking! They look red!"

Then I saw the light. I knew this was bad! I just ran so I escaped but all of the rides were on fire! I could smell this horrid gas spreading and reaching my nostrils...

"Sir...I feel queasy..."

I then unfortunately threw up.

"Drake! Get out of there! I have received news of a mysterious figure at the North end of the park!"

I just ignored it. I had to find this figure.

45 minutes later...

I reached the bridge where the weather was turning worse. But then the light came again, A man stepped out...

"It seems this is where it all ends, Molly. Your mother was right, You don't follow instructions, do you?"

"What!? What do you know about my-"

All that was then heard in the next 10 minutes was a gunshot.

Hope I did alright! I know it's a bit like Molly's friends sneaking into the police station! I just had a kind of Doctor Who moment while I went to see Fame in the cinemas (Good film!) So I just typed it up! ) *Bite lip nervously*