hehe sup?
yeah i know im probably THE worst updater in the universe!
so... finally chased the WB away (for good, i hope) and i will TRY to update more frequently...
my friends gave me ideas :) love those guys! :D
oh and i shouldve asked this ages ago but...
who do you think your characters friends and enemies are?
ONWARDS TO the story (i just quoted my all time fave show, yeah, i know im kool... anyone?)
The dry ground was cracked and the sun beat down on the land. A ball of tumbleweed floated past an- out of nowhere a male teen with chocolate brown unkempt hair peaked out the top corner of the image snatched up the tumbleweed.
'Haha! Tangled thing, check!' and then he disappeared bac the way he came.
Kaila groaned. She was walking near the walls of the mall, but by the look on her face and the fact that her hands were empty, it was obvious she hadn't found what she was looking for. She sat down for a second. Her eyes suddenly lit up and quickly crawled over the her left. She picked something up and smiled. She got up and walked away.
Kaila: I found what I was looking for!
Eric and Kelvin were near the lake, both searching for something on the ground. Eric accidentally flicked some dirt and it landed in Kelvin's eye.
'WHAT THE HELL!' he screamed as he blinked his eye in an attempt to get it out.
'I'm sorry, my friend. I suggest you wash it out with water.' the blonde replied carelessly.
'Well, obviously I'll wash it out with water, but you meant to do that!' Kelvin exclaimed angrily.
'I didn't.' Eric stated calmly while the other male splashed water into his eye.
'ARGH! You're such a liar!' he yelled.
Thunder walked over.
'SHUT UP! You sound like a child!' she shouted at the blood red headed 17 year old. They glared at each other. Thunder turned away carelessly and crossed her arms. 'You are so annoying Eld!' she told him before strutting away triumphantly.
'Whatever!' he called after her.
By now Eric had found what he wanted and left Thunder and Kelvin behind.
Thunder: UGH! He is probably the most annoying person I have ever met!
Kelvin: She acts so quiet around everyone else, but only shouts and screams at me!
Eric: I'm glad I didn't have to watch or hear those two arguing for very long. I have much better things to be doing.
Zakk's eyes were on Jessica as she walked around the campus. Ace was walking past and noticed Zakk staring at the talented Asian.
'Hey Zakk, watcha looking at?' he asked in a sly voice. Zakk quickly straightened up and spoke quickly.
'Nothing... I was just, um...' he trailed off.
Ace grinned widely. 'Right, well maybe stop 'umming' and get searching, you wanna win, right?' and he walked off still smirking at how smitten Zakk was with Jessica.
Zakk: I WASN'T staring I was just... um... (Zakk, again with the 'umming' :P )
Ace: He is a bad liar.
Rey and May were walking with various objects in their hands. Rey had a bucket and a bottle and May had a ball of string.
'Gee, I can't believe we actually found these things on camp.' Rey stated.
'Yeah, I wonder what else Chris has lying around this place, probably a suite or something where he stays while we have to use those crappy cabins.' May replied. Eric appears out of nowhere and ends up in the middle of the two girls, their arms linked with his.
'Hello ladies, may I be of assistance?' he says in a smooth voice. Rey looks a little uncomfortable seeing as how he nearly insulted her during the trolley challenge while May raises an eyebrow at him, noticing Rey's discomfort around him.
'Uh...' Rey starts.
'We're on different teams, I think we'd better go, hey Reyann?' May says, saving them.
'Yeah! Let's go!' they walk faster, leaving him behind.
'Hmmm, I must work on those two girls!'
Maylene: I wonder why Rey didn't like being around him?
Eric: Those girls may form a problem.
Reyann: It was a good thing May saved me!
(fast forward)
All of the contestants are standing in a line with their objects in their hands, but most of them didn't even have items at all. The line led to a long table, sitting at that table, was Chris, with paper in hand. Hex looked like he was still afraid the snakes were behind him.
'OK campers, your hour is up, let's see how you went. As I say the 'something that', I want whoever collected that object for their team to show me what they have. As it stated on the top of the list, it cannot be anything on/in you, i.e. skin, blood, jewellery, hair, accessories, clothing etc., and it cannot be anything that you own.' Chris announced.
'Let's just get started!' Neveah demanded.
'Fine!' Chris mumbled something else then continued. 'Item #1, 'Something That is naturally sharp. Objects please.'
Eric walked up with a rock in his hand while Breeze walked up with a thorn.
'Okay, explain why.' Chris told them.
'Because this rock can probably cut your foot open.' Eric said. Chris looked at Breeze, who raised an eyebrow.
'Alright, thorn's kinda obvious... A point for the girls since not all rocks are sharp.'
The girls cheered and the boys groaned.
'Item #2, Something That lights it up.' No one came forward. 'No one, really? Okey dokey. Item #3 Something that will tangle.'
May walked up with the ball of string and Marvin walked up with a ball of tumbleweed.
'Where did you get THAT from?' May asked the 16 year old.
'I dunno, just found it somewhere.' he replied. Chris thought for a few seconds about which team should get the point.
'Hmmmmm, I guess I'll give a pont to the guys since I don't know where Marvin could've possibly found that, so it's unique.'
It was the girls turn to groan now.
Chris continued, 'Item #4 Something that makes a jump.'
'Doesn't make sense,' someone mumbled, most probably Neveah. Eddy presented a grasshopper in front of Chris.
'How did you find, and catch that? We couldn't!' Tara asked incredulously.
'Easy.' he responded. Chris shuddered a bit at the sight of the green insect.
'Point for the boys, and take the grasshopper please.' he announced. 'Next one, Something that can change.'
For the second time that day, no one stepped forward. 'Again? Wow, you guys really suck at this.' this statement made the campers clench their fists and glare at Chris. 'Let's try this one, some thing that wipes out.'
This time two contestants did walk up. Zakk and Jessica. As the put down their items, they accidentally brushed hands, making them both blush. Eric noticed this and smirked evilly. When Chris saw what Jessica put down, he was NOT pleased. There, on the table was a picture of none other than Chris McLean. Everyone else saw this and put down an eraser.
'Not. Funny!' he yelled.
'Really, is that why everyone is laughing?' Jessica said between giggles, her laughing was also seen by Zakk, who thought she was gorgeous when she laughed.
Zakk: Yeah, the joke Jessica played on Chris was hilarious! And Jessica's laugh was... *sighs dreamily*
'Definite point for the boys.' Chris said, then clenched his jaw. The laughing died down and Chris went on.'Something that holds water.'
Kaila presented an empty water bottle with no lid. 'I found it outside the mall.' she smiled. Chris looked at the boys, who shrugged.
'I guess that's a point for the girls then.' The girls grinned. 'Ok, something that covers the previous item.' the boys shrugged again and Kaila then showed Chris the lid for the bottle, which she had taken off.'Another point to the girls, so that means the teams are tied!' the cruel host exclaimed. 'Time for a tie breaker.'
Leo: I can't believe we tied!
Jayli: This is nerve racking! Props to Kaila though, you go girl!
Wes: I lost what I had!
Morhin: We better win this tie breaker.
Hex: All the running from the snakes made me tired... *falls asleep*
The table and objects were now gone and Chris was standing in front of the campers.
'In this tie breaker, you have to choose one person from your team to compete.' the teams whispered to each other. They then pushed one of their teammates out in front, those two were Maylene and Zakk. 'Ok, I will ask you 3 riddles and you must answer without any help from your team.'
A series of 'what!'s' and 'c'mon's' were groaned by the campers. 'Unfair much.' May stated under her breath.
'Ok, the way it will work is that when I ask the riddle, you will either shout "S" for Shopaholics or "M" for Mallrats. Got it?' the two teens nodded. 'Okay then, on your marks, get set, GO!'
'What thing goes on and annoys the heck out of people?'
'S!' May yelled just as Zakk opened his mouth. 'An alarm clock.'
'Correct! Next, what do you NOT run with that could litterally cut your head off?'
'M!' 'S!' they seemed to call it at the same thought for a second.
'I'll give this one to Zakk,' he told them. The Shopaholics groaned.
'Easy, scissors.' he answered.
'Yep. And the last one, what can you catch, but not throw?' the two campers had to think for a minute.
'S...' Maylene said uncertainly. The girls crossed their fingers. 'Glue?' she tried. After a long silence Chris spoke.
'No, sorry. It's all up to you now Zakk.' the skaters team was saddened but still comforted Maylene for trying.
All eyes were on Zakk. Chris especially bore holes in Zakk's head just to add to the pressure. Suddenly, the boy's face lightened up.
'A cold!' he grinned.
'Yes! And that means today's winners are none other than the Mallrats! Congratulations on second time in a row.' Chris smiled.
The winning team cheered while the girls just frowned. 'So is anyone getting eliminated? Or worse, are the blorgos going to get us?' Klaira asked worriedly, but the second part of the question made the rest of her team smile.
'No need to worry, there's no elimination tonight, the boys just get a prize. And secondly, uh, definitely not because, frankly, your crazy and there are no such thing as blorgeese.' Chris told them and walked away. The Shopaholics let out a sigh of relief.
'BlorgOs!' Klaira called after him.
Jasper: We won! Yes!
Thunder: We'd better win next week, or I think we'll have to vote someone else.
After dinner, the girls went to their cabin while the boys stayed behind to collect their prize. Chef burst back into the mess hall with a shiny bike. The Mallrats looked confused.
'Don't worry, it'll come in handy some time, I'm sure.' the host smirked. Eddy raised his eye as if to say "I doubt it". But they took it anyway and headed to their cabins.
-In girls cabin-
'We really have to step out game next week.' Neveah stated. the other girls nodded in agreement.
'Yep, sure do, but until then, Truth or Dare!' Klaira squealed.
-In the boys cabin-
'Second week in a row! We rock!' Zakk smirked.
'Totally.'
'Aint that true.'
'Next week we need as well.'
'Party!' Hex announced and pulled out a secret stash of party food from his suitcase.
Chris stood in front of the camera to end the show.
'Today was full of surprises, but in the end, the Mall rats won. Can the girls make a comeback or will the boys make third time lucky? Tune in next week to find out right here on Total,' the camera zooms so it shows more of his surroundings. 'DRAMA,' the whole msll is shown. 'ISLAND!' a bird flies past and the picture that Jessica found flew into it's face.
So this update's done. Next time it won't take me almost 3 months! oh and if you havent checked out xXCookieGiverXx (which you better have because she is an AWESOME writer!) i suggest you do, but you probably already have.
sorry for the LONG wait and i'll update soon i promise! see ya!
