Hey guys, remember me? Yeah I'm so sorry for not updating in so long, but I have a valid reason! We have three computers at my house, one in the dining room, one in my parents' office, and my mom's work laptop which I barely get to use. (I'm on the lap-top now out of the goodness of my mom's heart.) :) Well, first, the computer I normally use broke for some reason (we had to sent it in) and the other one I use, it's older than the other one, wasn't working either and I already had most of the chapter on the other computer. My mom doesn't want me to use hers because she doesn't want it broken. (Which doesn't really make sense because she lets my sisters use it but I'm a middle child so it's understandable.)
Anyway, I don't really have a mini preview thing for you but I will tell you that it'll be in February, Sonia's devious mind reigns again, and Tony feels like everyone he knew from the US is turning against him, his parents included.
I also have a few questions for you and I really want everybody who reads this to give your opinion:
Is this too much like my first one?
I think there should be a twist to it, please tell me if you think so too and if so do you have an idea of what it could be?
I would like to put more of Nick in it, kind of like Sophie's guy to talk to, what do you think?
And lastly, I know I am not the best writer, that would be like Ally Carter or someone, so I would like to know what I can do better. The only thing is I don't like mean criticism, constructive criticism is fine but I don't need things like,"Does it get better? Because seriously this writing is pretty bad." No one deserves anything like that. So please help me make the story better.
And if you just want to tell me you like my story and/or you want me to update soon, please tell me. :)
I love all of you guys who read my story and I hope to update soon.
!Merry Christmas! (Or whatever holiday you are spending this time of the year)
Liz~Beth :)
p.s. The example I gave you of what I don't like is actually what someone said to one writer xMiracleRain, who I personally think is a great writer. If you wrote a story and got a review how would you feel? I hope you can answer that yourself. Anyway her story, I'm With Him, has a lot of reviews, but not all of them are nice. But most of them are :) I would like you guys to read her story and tell her what you think, but please be nice. :)
Thanks and please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please review. :)
