Hey guys, sorry it's been a while. Don't worry, my ideas haven't disappeared, it's just that I haven't had the time to articulate them in writing. Here's something from the next chapter:

"I don't want help from a mudblood like you." Sneered Severus. After saying these hurtful words, he stalked off, not turning back. He turned the corner into another long corridor and paused as he regained consciousness. What just happened? He thought.

He ran back, black robes flowing elegantly behind him to see where his Lily had gone. He entered the hallway that he had left her in, and spotted her walking in the opposite direction with her chin up and her red hair steraming out behind her. He admired her ability to bounce back when someone (aka himself) pushed her down. He wished he could do the same.

I know it was short, but I'll be back with more soon. I promise. For real. Only if I get at least...ah well, I'll come back anyway. But, review please? Maybe give me some ideas. Or do some Severus bashing?