Snippets
By
Landon Richardson
Disclaimer
The characters of Steve McGarrett, Chin Ho Kelly, Kono Kalakaua and Adam 'Toast' Charles and anyone else who might sound familiar do not belong to me in any shape or form, I am merely using them for my own entertainment purposes
The character of Danni Williams is probably mine by now. Even though she was originally based on male Danny Williams I think it's probably safe to say that's she her own individual character by now, especially since I've created a back ground for her which is different to male Danny's background in the show. This also affects Grace who is different from the show as well in ways.
The character of Jack O'Connor and his sister Natasha do belong to me though
I should also add that if a character is mentioned who you are not instantly aware of then that character belong to me as well
Author Note
Here's the next snippet for you all!
This snippet is ever so slightly different to the others. As you can see from the title it is referred to as part one which means that there will be further parts coming up later. These will also be included in the snippets story so it will be almost a mini story within the others. I'm not sure when the next one will be which is why I haven't put it up as its own one shot. Doing it this way takes the pressure off of me and means that when the inspiration hits me I can write it and put it here. It might be the next snippet, it might be five snippets down the line. I'm not too sure yet, all I know for certain is that I will definitely be coming back to it.
I'm really enjoying writing these snippets and the freedom they give me so I'm hoping that you are all enjoying reading them as much.
I've been going through a rough patch recently questioning my writing skills and whether this is something I should be doing so trust me when I say your support means a lot to me. Every review or favourite or follow I get keeps me going!
Anyway please enjoy!
Overall Summary
Little Snippets into the world of the McDanni saga featuring plenty of Ohana moments and a look into the McDanni relationship.
Chapter Summary
A lads night out doesn't end quite the way they were planning it to.
Overall Romance
Steve McGarrett / Danni Williams (McDanni)
Others though they are currently a secret which no one knows bar me!
Chapter Romance
None mentioned in this chapter….
Other note
Nearly all the places I have stated are either made up or I've got from the internet so I'm sorry in advance if I get an address wrong or anything. My geography on Hawaii is very poor having never been there before!
Other, other note
Please feel free to check out my other ongoing stories:
~Burn
~ Holding Hands
~ You're in charge.
I also have some McDanno stories where Danny is Danny so if you want to check those out then you know where to find them!
Thanks
Chapter Seven
December 2010 part one
Steve groaned, slowly opening his eyes and stared groggily into the surrounding darkness, his head throbbing uncomfortably as though he had a severe hangover, even though he couldn't actually remember having more than one beer the night before with the other guys on his team.
He breathed out slowly, pushing the thought away as he came up onto his elbows, his gaze flickering around him, noting shapes now that his eyes were growing used to the surrounding gloom. Either he was in a small containment box of some kind or it was the middle of the night which he severely doubted.
"Steve, thank god you're awake, we were beginning to worry."
Steve blinked slowly, turning round and found himself looking directly at Jack O'Connor. The other man was sitting with his back against the wall. He looked in pain, his right eye almost swollen shut while the other side of his face was grazed as though someone had grounded it hard against the pavement.
"Jack?" He queried. "What happened? Where are we exactly?" He demanded, coughing through the words. His voice felt rusty as though he hadn't used it in a while.
"I think we were in the wrong place at the wrong time." Jack answered him, shifting on the floor as though he was uncomfortable. He probably was if he had been sitting there for a while.
"Great" Steve said, pushing himself into a sitting position and scooting back so he was facing Jack, resting against the other wall. He waited until the room stopped spinning before he focused back on the other man. "What do we know exactly?" He questioned. He heard Jack sigh before he spoke.
"I don't know much. You, me, Chin and Toast were out for some drinks on a lad night out. We were leaving the second bar and I think we were going to find somewhere on the island which would do a curry before we carried on because Toast was desperate for one and sort of infected us with the same desire for a curry." He stated tiredly. "Somewhere between that and looking for the place we were jumped and I'm pretty sure from the burn on the back of my neck that we were tazered." He explained.
Steve frowned, reaching up with his hand, ignoring the pain that shoot through his shoulder at the action and touched the back of his neck, wincing when his fingertips encountered the tender, hot skin.
"Tazered" He said with a sigh as he slowly shook his head. "That explains a lot."
"Yeah, I woke up in here about thirty minutes ago and here we are." Jack ended, leaning his head back and closing his eyes briefly.
"Where is here exactly?" Steve questioned, looking around him again.
"No idea. All I know is that we're in some kind of container box like they have at the docks."
"Is it just us in here? Where are Chin and Toast?" Steve pressed, ignoring the look that Jack shot hit, a look which screamed that the other man just wanted to rest and build up his energy reserves again.
"They are in a container next to us, I heard Toast yelling at the top of his lungs when I came to. I've managed to calm him down slightly but he's about an hour away from a major freak out. Turns out that he's not too fond of enclosed spaces." Jack informed Steve who nodded slowly. "Toast said that Chin was in there with him but that he was still out cold. Hopefully he'll wake soon and be able to calm Toast down before he does something stupid."
"Let's hope he does, the last thing we need is to deal with a panic attack" Steve agreed, his eyes moving to and fro as he absorbed the information that Jack had given him. "Do we have any idea how many people are out there?" He asked, frowning when Jack shook his head with a shrug at him.
"No idea" The other man stated "But we can assume it's more than one. We're not small men Steve, Chin is the smallest at five nine but you and me are six foot one and Toast is freaking six foot four and all of us apart from Toast work out on a daily basis. There had to be at least eight of them to get the drop on us so efficiently and then to take us here." Jack remarked, sounding thoughtful for a moment before he sighed. "Now we just sit back and wait." He said. "Try and gain back as much energy as we can for when we need it."
"Sit back and wait" Steve repeated, opening his mouth to tell Jack what he thought about his plan before the other man held his hand out, palm facing Steve as he continued to speak.
"Yeah. This was a lad's night out." He remarked pointedly, his eyes focusing on Steve.
Steve stared back at him, his brain refusing to make the links that Jack was clearly trying to give to him.
"And?" He said finally, his eyes narrowing when Jack sighed.
"And Kono and Danni are not lads which means that they weren't with us when we were taken. They are both still out there. It is six AM now according to my watch and I can guarantee that my sister Tasha has already contacted them when I didn't come home last night, it won't take them long to realise that you and Chin and Toast are missing as well. They are already going to be looking for us already and I've got every faith in the world that they will find us. So yeah Steve, we sit here, we regain our energy and then when Danni and Kono find us, because they will find us" He repeated confidently. "Then we help them kick the ass out of whoever took us in the first place."
Steve froze, his thoughts focusing on his partner Danni Williams, a trickle of relief going through him at the thought that she was still out there, completely safe from whatever had happened.
"We still need to come up with some sort of backup plan" Steve remarked, a slight smile curving his mouth when Jack snorted at him.
"Be my guest" The other man stated. "While you do that, I'm going to try and catch up on some sleep. I feel as though I've gone twenty rounds with Muhammad Ali during his heyday so sleep sounds pretty good right about now." He stated. Steve watched as Jack pushed himself slowly from the wall and instead lay down in front of it, cushioning his head in his cross arms as his eyes closed.
Steve sighed wondering not for the first time how they ended up in these mess.
At least Kono and Danni were still out there. If anyone could find them it would be them.
Author Note
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