yet again thanks to all of you who reviewed.


Bellas POV

This is going to be good.Alice is dressing up as a slut and going out in public.

I really did hate shopping, but this is something I had to see.

She came down stairs wearing a really short skirt and you could pretty much see everything, a really small tee shirt and big high heels.

Once I saw her I started laughing. I couldn't help it. It was great.

"It's not that funny, Bella." She is starting to get mad.

I look up and start laughing more.

After a few minutes my stomach started to hurt. I decided it was probably time for me to stop laughing.

"Come on, Let's go" We start walking out to the car.

It takes about 10 minutes to get to the store.

Once we got there, she went crazy.

She was taking every dress she liked and started to throw them at me.

Every guy was staring at her and it was hilarious. I started to laugh again.

"Bella go try these on and stop laughing." She hands me the dresses.

I walk into the changing room.I quickly put the first on one.

I instantly fell in love.It had a blood red strapless corset top and the bottom got bigger and fluffy and was white.

It was beautiful.I stepped out of the changing room.

Alice was standing there with the biggest smile anyone could have.

"Bella! It's beautiful, this is the one I had in my vision!" She started to jump up and down.

I looked at my dress "I want this one"

I go back in and take it off and get dressed.

When I step out Alice is being surrounded by a whole bunch of guys.This is disgusting.

I walk over to her. "Alice, I got my dress, Lets go." I take her and and start to walk away.

A guy grabs my arm."Listen, I'm getting married and she is married, so just leave us alone." And with that we payed for the dress and left.

When we got in the car I leaned my head up against the seat.I sighed. Today was a busy day.

Alice dropped me off at my house. I went upstairs and took a shower.

After I got dressed and stuff I went to my computer.

Edward and the rest of them were on. Good.

BellaMarie:Hey.

FiftiesForever: Hey Bella.

EmoControl:Hello.

Strongerthanyou:Sup.

Shopohater: Hi!

FiftiesForever: So Bella, How was your day?

BellaMarie: Even though it wore me out, It was fun.

BellaMarie:A lot of guys were after Alice today.

Shopohater: I KNOW! they wouldnt leave me alone.

Shopohater:Luckily Bella was there.

EmoControl:Did they do anything?

Shopohater: No, Bella came before they decided to do anything.

FiftiesForever:Wow, Bella are you okay?

BellaMarie: I'm fine.

Strongerthanyou: Guess Bella is stronger than she looks. HA HA!

BellaMarie: Shut up Emmett.

Shopohater:The wedding is only in 4 days. I have so much work.

BellaMarie: GAH!

Shopohater: I will do most of it, But I might need some of your help.

BellaMarie: Okay, thats not so bad.

FiftiesForever: Okay.

StrongerThanYou:Maybe next week I can finally wrestle with my sister!

BellaMarie:Great..

Shopohater: Bella, Im coming over. Edward you cant see her tonight, Its about the dress and what not.

BellaMarie: Okay, See ya Alice.

Shopohater has signed off.

Strongerthanyou: So Now what?

EmoControl: I'm going to be in my study if anyone needs me.

EmoControl has signed off.

Strongerthanyou: im goin 2 go

Strongerthanyou has signed off.

BellaMarie: Alice is here. I have to go, I love you Bye

BellaMarie has signed off.

FiftiesForever has signed off.


okay, well i am thinking about making 5 or 6 chapters more.
but if i do i will try my best to make them longer than my normal writings.
but i have new stories in mind and other chapters for "Show your inner self"
tell me what you think.
and thanks again to all who read my story and review it.
-bitexbrittany