Hi
O.k. I read the people who sent me reviews about my 6th chapter. The results are great! Not bad from my improvement. Xion69, I'll try to fix the past , present, and future tense. I usually put past tense then present. But I'll to fix it.
Here is the chapter that you have being waiting for.
Chapter 7: Meet The Herd
As Sid and I were walking in the woods, I felt safe not afraid. Its like Sid is protecting me but I'm taller than him cause I'm 5ft. The sun's rays hit me in the eyes as I put my hand in front of my face. When we continued to walk, I was thinking of my parents. I wonder who are they? What were they like? How wealthy are they? I stopped and looked up, thinking of them what their face looks like? Sid also stopped.
"What are you thinking of?" Sid asked.
"Well, to tell you the truth, I was thinking of my parents" I answered.
"Oh" he said.
I felt I was going to cry but I said to myself, don't cry it's in the past.
"Well Kyle, my family left me on migration" Sid said.
"That is mestup. I mean why would your family leave you behide. It's like you're a loser or a not favorite one or something" I said.
Sid made a depressing face that made me say that I hurt his feelings.
"Oh, sorry Sid" I apologies.
"It's o.k." he answered.
"No really Sid, I apologies cause I don't have any friends literally" I said.
"Well I can be your friend if it's o.k. with you" he asked.
"O.k." I said it with excitement.
Is this happening. I made a friend now my very first time! I forget about Extort and his dumb machine cause now I like this world or time. Sid and I continued to walk, then Sid ran to the woods. I followed him then he stopped.
"Kyle, I found my herd" he said.
"You did, that's great right" I said.
"But you have to stay here. I will tell them if they can let you join" he said.
"O.k. I'll wait here" I said.
Sid nodded and ran to his herd. His herd is odd actually because there is 3 mammoths, 2 possums, and the most terrifying thing a sabre-tooth tiger. I agree with everything except the tiger. Wouldn't the tiger eat them, weird. I saw Sid talking to a mammoth. I guess he is the leader. I heard the conversation and this is what they say.
"Hey Manny, can I talk to you a little bit" Sid asked to the mammoth.
"What do you want Sid, only 15 seconds to talk" said the mammoth.
"Can I invite a newcomer to the herd" Sid said.
"No, Sid we can't! We got to travel before it gets cold here." he said.
"But..." Sid said.
"Ah, 15 seconds past we got to go now" said the mammoth.
"I'll be right back, I drop something in the woods" said Sid to make an excuse.
I looked at Sid coming towards to me. I heard the conversation that I can't come and I don't have a plan. This is a problem for me.
I said "What do we do Sid".
"Um, you follow us, like your a spy or something" said Sid with an idea.
So, the plan has started. The herd moved on as I was following them. I hide behide some bushes and trees like a hero who is following the villain's secret hide out or something. I was hiding alright when I stepped on a dried up branch that made the male mammoth curious. The male mammoth looked around who made that noise cause it sound on the back. I was hiding behide a rock. Then the mammoth said something that got Sid and I scared.
"Diego, go find the person who made the noise" said the mammoth.
I was terrified at first then I had an idea. I open my backpack and take out my bag of rocks. I would brought out my sling shot but the tiger will follow where it came from. My idea is to throw rocks to the other side. That means I will fool the tiger that he will think the noise is coming from the other side. The tiger is at rage cause he is frustrated. Then he ran to my side. He jumped at me and I was knocked out again.
My eyes open and see a blur. I blinked three times and I see the mammoth. I got up ran then I bumped to the sabre-tooth tiger.
"Hello" said the tiger.
I ran then bumped to the mammoth. I lay down to mean I give up.
"What are you doing here" shouted the mammoth.
"Um, uh..." I said with fear.
"Answer the question" said the mammoth pointing at me with his trunk.
"Manny, it's my fault. I'm the one who let him follow us" said Sid.
"I knew Sid let you follow us. Now leave before you suffer" said the mammoth.
I got up and began to leave but another mammoth with a calf showed up.
"Manny, that's how you treat a child" said the female mammoth.
I turn around that she talking about me.
"Manny, come over here we need to talk" said the female mammoth.
Both of the mammoth talked and argue. I put my hands in my pockets. Once they're finished talking the male mammoth lost from the talking.
"Hey, kid don't leave yet. You can come with us only if you listen" the mammoth said.
I nodded.
"Welcome to the herd" he greeted.
I jumped up. Then Sid just jumped on me and hugged me also. It was awkward. The female mammoth came to me with a baby mammoth.
"Honey, whats your name" she asked.
" My name is Kyle" I answered.
"My name is Ellie. And this is Peaches" Ellie said.
I waved my hand to Peaches and she waved her trunk to me.
"Oh, name is Manny. And that guy is Diego" said Manny.
I looked at Diego but he didn't seem considerate. I guess I meet the herd. I think they're not so bad after all.
Finished! Wow! I guess I made a long chapter. Read and review how is this chapter an I'm going to start on the next chapter.
