Heya! Well, Emotional shit. I might delete that... Sorry it took so long! But my mom and dad are fighting again. Not many creative fanfic Ideas when all you hear is "YOU SON OF A BITCH!" or "YOU ASSHOLE!" or occassionally, "GO FUCK YOURSELF!"

But... thanks to...

HP MR FOREVER 0807 -haha. Thank you.

The High-Fives For Nothing- I may just PM you :) You seem to have a lot on your plate as well, so I hope your coolio. Haha, another great word. :D

LarkaTheWhiteWolf- thank you for the luck and for less sympathy, most people give me too much, so its nice to hear less. :)

Fax is forever- thank you! And texting typos are horrible... :P

I AmTheThirteenthOlympian- haha. Sorry for the cliffy! And thanks for the support. :)

smartypants83- maybe I should take up something. It may be art because I suck at sports... haha. And, thank you, I was hoping the cuteness would satisfy... :P

StormyCloud83- THANK YOU! I FELT THE NEED TO REPLY IN CAPS CUZ YOU DID! HAHA.

gigglesandbooks- though I've never lost anyone, I can relate to the not doing anything. I am currently trying to... kind of cover up and get back to normal. I can tell that no one can recognize me... but at times I just can't. I'm thinking about telling my mom but, my parents are still fighting, and I'm trying to help in any way. Soon, it'll just be me and my little sis, so I'm trying to be there. Trying... but thank you very much. :)

TalktotheHalo- Yes ma'am *salute... pokes eye with finger- damnit! Anyways, thank you! Your story is quite great as well! Its a good start, don't give up on it!

BritPit- excellent...-Bill and Ted's Excelent Adventure moment! Haha. But thank you for the purely awesome awesomeness review! :)

NOW...

Case Attraction

Just as I think everything is perfect, one name ruins it.

And its mine.

"Fang!" Max screams just as I get dressed. Theres a crash as I run out. And I can tell our previous perfection is ruined...

Because there in my kitchen stands the Erasers Max wrote about- surrounding her. And the very-hard-to-miss Dr. Gunther-Hagen, right outside the circle of wolf creatures.

"Ah, Fang. So nice to see you after so long." he smirks. I'm instantly in fight mode.

"I try to please, Doc." I snarl.

"Fang! You have to get out, you don't understand-" Max is cut off.

"Oh, sweet Maximum... of coarse he understands- right, Fang?" Dr. Gunther-Hagen turns to me, as well as Max.

"You liar!" she yells at the scientist.

"He's... he's not lying Max." I look at her appologetically.

"What... what do you mean? Were you in on this the whole time?" she looks so broken.

I shake my head. "No, Max. I'd never-"

"I don't have time for this little romance story. Take her!" Dr. Gunther-Hagen yells at the Erasers' leader. That one face is very familiar. Ari.

"Rematch!" I yell just as he's about to command the Erasers to attack. He turns to me.

"Hmm... for what, and why would I do that?" he asks.

"You win, you get me and Max- I'll be your killer." I say ashamed- now Max will know what I am. "You lose, you leave us alone."

"Well, I doubt I'd lose, but if I do- I don't get anything? That's just unfair. Atta-"

"Wait! If you lose, you take me and leave Max alone- forever." I say.

"No, Fang!" Max yells. "They wouldn't do that! You can't! Your not a mu- your not like me"

I give her a long sorry look and take off my shirt- revealing my own black wings. "I'm sorry, Max. But it's for you, okay?" now the Erasers have vanished from they're circle.

"Go ahead and say goodbye," Ari smirks.

I walk over and take her face in both off my hands. "You'll be safe- I promise. When I'm gone- stay here, okay? You'll be fine, Max. I- I love you." and with those words I give her one last kiss- my last kiss from this amazing girl. She's crying, shaking violently, and trying to form words. I kiss her again and walk to Ari.

"Hold her!" Dr. Gunther-Hagen yells. Two Erasers hold Max's arms. She's completely braking down now. I feel so much. I feel loved by Max, I feel depressed I have to leave, and I feel grateful I had some time to share with her.

I wipe a tear that had somehow came from my eye without me even registering it. I rub my hands on my black jeans, preparing for my fight. Ari lunges out toward me, his claw-like hands ready to kill. I dodge, landing on the floor- but kick him in the gut. He grunts, and moves toward me. I get up in one swift motion and begin throwing punches. One finally knocks him down- and I take my opportunity, straddling his waist, his claws above his head.

"I win." I snarl.

"Not by much, Fang." he sneers.

"As long as Max is safe." I say and look towrds her, where five Erasers have to keep her down.

"A little crush on my sister, eh?" Ari smirks. "Jeb is a sick bastard. I can't see how you don't remember me, Maxie."

Max's eyes grow wide, as she finally rips an Erasers hand from her mouth. "I can see how you tell he's a bastard. You are one yourself!. All these years. What happened to you, Ari?"

"Dad was always just too focused on you, Maxie. Always this and that about your greatness. Your destiny," in seconds, I'm is against a wall- Ari's knee digging into my back. "Well, now heres mine. To kill the great Maximum Ride"

Another Eraser grabs me, holding me back- making me watch as Ari strikes Max in the face with all his strength. Max falls to the ground, wipes her mouth- then looks at Ari with a wicked smile, blood dripping from her lips. She sends a high kick from the ground to his ribs, sending his head to hit the oven.

"You know, bro, I feel a little bad for you," she kicks him again, to his neck. Max bends over, effectively snapping his neck with one swift crack!

Ari gasps. "You hurt me... I'd never do this..."

And in mere moments, the Erasers are gone, and Dr. Gunther-Hagen is locked away, dead. Max turns to me, her face pale. "We have to go..." I nod, knowing it's best not to talk right now, and we both fly away.

But as always, I have a feeling things won't be easy for long.

They never are.

They never will be, I suppose...

Especially with the great Maximum Ride by my side-

But I'd never have it any other way.

I would kill for her, forever and always.

Because I love her-

Forever, and always.

Hey guys! Did you like it?

AND YES, IT WILL CONTINUE! :D