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Chapter 6 : Kisses and Crying sessions
Oliver's POV :
I did it. I actually told her! I can't believe it…! Ha… I did it!
She seems to be taking this rather… er… I don't really know, she hasn't said anything… at all. I mean she spat her Coke all over me and it was pretty disgusting, but after she helped me clean it… she pretty much shut up.
She's just, sitting there… looking at me… not saying a word…
"Lilly, please say something. Your really starting to freak me out.."
She sighed.
She closed her eyes, then sighed again. She seemed to be doing that a lot lately…
I had a very worried look on my face. She hadn't said anything all this while and I was really creeped out.
"Lilly please say something, anything, just talk."
She opened her mouth and then closed it again. She seemed to be talking to herself, although I couldn't hear anything she said…
Silence was all I could hear. Ironical, isn't it?
And suddenly… she kissed me…she actually kissed me…
I think I'm in heaven… oh no, wait… I'm still at Ray's Pizza… damn.
General POV :
Lilly closed her eyes and leaned in…
Oliver, being the lovable doughnut he is known to be, didn't know that she was about to kiss him.
She was coming closer and closer, and comprehension slowly dawned on Smokin' Oken.
"She's going to kiss me. She's going to kiss me. She's going to kiss me. She's going to kiss me. She's going to kiss me.", was all he could think.
Inside he was doing that happy dance Lilly used to do.
He leaned in too. He cupped Lilly's face with his hands and sent his lips crashing down, into hers.
Now you should know, that there was a table separating the two of them, so their kiss had to be cut short… sad, I know.
The two teens quickly pulled away. "Damn the stupid table.", Oliver cursed to himself.
He quickly looked at Lilly. She looked shocked. Her face was paler than usual, her eyes so wide that it could have easily been mistaken for dinner plates… her breath was short and uneven, rough and wispy, forced and gasping like.
She looked like she was about to cry.
"Lilly, a-are you alright?"
"I'm fine Oliver.", she whispered.
And without warning, she got up and left.
Lilly's POV :
That kiss, it was amazing. I could see fireworks everywhere, I could feel sparks electrifying my entire body… it was just so perfect…
And I being the famed dumbass I am, got up and left.
Why, oh why, was I cursed with such stupidity?
Apparently it's not enough that one of my best friends happens to be Hannah Montana, the coolest teen pop-sensation EVER, said best friend has moved away, leaving me alone with Mr. Doughnut himself, who happens to be the poor boyI'm currently crushing on, and who also likes me back.
Going back to something I had said earlier, I am a very confused soul, so please bear with me (A/N: or is it the other bear? As in bare..?)
I didn't know where I was going.
I was just walking around, going wherever my feet took me.
I tried not to cry, but sadly the tears came.
Why was I crying anyway? That was one of the few questions that had suddenly popped in my mind.
I mean, didn't I want this to happen? Didn't I want to kiss Oliver? Didn't I want him to pledge his undying love for me? Didn't I want him… period?
So when it did happen, when I did kiss him, when he did pledge his undying love for me ( though not in that way, granted) … why the hell was I crying?
Ugh, I'm so ungrateful… when I die, I won't be surprised to see Satan or Lucifer greeting me, deep down in the everblazing bowels of the earth, or in other words… hell .
I was suddenly brought back to reality when I bumped into somebody.
I looked up, trying, and failing miserably, to wipe my tears.
"Whoa, Lil, what happened to you?", my older brother David exclaimed.
"N-nothing. Dave what are you doing here?", I tearfully replied.
"I'm taking Scrat for a walk", he said, pointing to his 2 year old cocker-spaniel. "What happened to you? Have you been, God Lilly, have you been crying?"
I broke down, then and there.
I was sobbing so loudly, that all the little kids who were running about playing tag looked at me, and ran away.
David on the other hand, hugged me and tried shushing me.
Miraculously, it worked…
and there it is.. chapter 6.
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