Authors Note:
Yes I am alive unbelievable as it may seem. Srry for the long wait its just college last semester(and this one .) is taking a bit more of my time and thought pattern then it used to. When I finally came back remembering I wrote a story I realized a couple of things. 1. It started up a little to slow for what I wanted. 2. I sort of free versed to much of the story. 3. The chapters were a lot shorter then I really wanted. After realizing that brainstorming on paper actually works ive decided to re-write this plot. One of my previous problems was looking to far ahead to certain scenes I really wanted to write(wind naruto vs gaara, some plot twists ect). And thus tried speed writing through the build up. This is the main reason for the rewrite. If you have any constructive advice, such as style, plot ideas, common grammar mistakes ect please do tell, I want as much as possible to make the rewrite a success. Hopefully I will have it kicking by the end of the week or even tomarrow night. Till then !!!
