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Loonaticslover13: Hi! Thank you so much for your reviews! Ace should have at least told her about it. Haha, I love them too, they are so cute. Thank you for also liking the 'Macarena' bit. Michelle's Operation: Annoying worked. XD. Enjoy this chapter!


She felt goosebumps rising in her arms as she hugged herself to warm herself from the cold atmosphere. As she tried to stand up, her knees buckled together as she fell back on the hard ground. Her body felt numb and weak from the constant abuse that she was getting. She didn't know where she was as she looked around the dim-lit room. She was back to a familiar place. His place. There was no door or windows for her to escape. She felt like she was inside a box with nothing but the cold air traveling up her body.

Someone save me s'il vous plaƮt she begged as she hid her face into her hands. She gasped when she felt two strong arms grabbing her wrists and clenching them. She let out a whimper as she felt his grip bruising her wrists. She looked from the hand and into the face of the owner. She gasped when she saw those cold blue eyes and a sick smile smeared on his lips. Where had a come from? How did he even get into this room? "M-Michael?" she whispered his name.

"Get up!" Michael gruffly said as he pulled her by the arms and onto her feet, "you cannot escape from me!" he pushed her towards the brick wall and looked at her.

"Please leave moi alone!" she begged as she closed her eyes to not see his face.

He grabbed her chin and made her stare at him. "I am not going to leave you alone. Never, ever," he said through gritted teeth as he squeezed her cheeks. "You, Fleur, don't deserve to live. You are nothing, you're worthless, you're a hopeless romantic, how you French people say, chienne who cannot even take care of herself." He put his hands on her hips and squeezed them as hard as he could.

Fleur cringed at his brutal touch. She squeezed her eyes shut from the pain that traveled to her body. Before she knew it, Michael tore her away from the brick and threw her on the floor as if she was a broken doll. Her body thumped onto the floor. "Le ow," she moaned as she grabbed the arm that she landed on. She looked up and saw Michael running towards her with a gleaming sharp object. She couldn't move. Before she knew it, Michael raised the weapon and flung it towards her. Then, everything went black.

Fleur gasped as she opened her eyes and found herself into the jail cell. She looked around and saw Hunter, Quinn, and Bridget sleeping by the wall. She couldn't blame them from being exhausted. She was exhausted herself in reality and in her dreams. What a nightmare. Everything had seemed so real to her but she was lucky that she was alive. "Michael why would vous do such a thing?" she said as she put her hand on her moist hair.

"Huh?" Hunter said as he shook himself from his deep sleep. "What happened?" he asked as he looked around the room.

"Oh nothing," Fleur said in a shaken voice. She could feel her heart drumming through her chest.

"You alright there miss?" Hunter asked as he walked towards her, "you seem shaken up like a bird that was chased by a cat."

"More like un chat chased by a chien," Fleur told him.

Hunter sat down next to her. As he got close to her, he could see the deep cuts and the bruises that were covering her face. "Is it okay if I ask what has happened to you?" Hunter asked. He thought it was better not to ask since she had come in this condition.

"Je n'est want to talk about it," Fleur said as she shook her head.

Hunter gave her a nod. "Understandable," the cowboy said, "but whatever or whoever had done this to you, they are goin' to get what's comin' to them. Don't ya worry your pretty little head on that."

"Merci Monsieur Bunny mais eet eez going to take a while for moi to get through eet," she answered as she looked down at her hands.

"My little filly told me that you are related to a soft yet feisty cat," Hunter told her, "you will get through it. Don't ya worry."

"Je wish je could say ze same," she let out a defeated sigh. She felt that help was going to come to late for her. If it did, she hoped for her teammates to be saved before her. They were more important than she was. She thanked Ace for teaching her how to be a good leader. Her teammates came first and she came last. This was how she felt right now. She felt like the last and the least important. As she thought about this, a tear slowly escaped her eyes and streaked down her bruised cheek.

Hunter noticed the tear. He flung his arm over her shoulders and slowly pulled her closer to him for some comfort. One of his weaknesses was seeing girls cry, especially his girlfriend. "What's the matter?" he asked her.

Fleur only shook her head. She couldn't tell him. She couldn't tell anybody. They were going to think that she was crazy for saying such things like this. "Nothing," she said.

The door suddenly flung open as Quinn and Bridget jumped from their sleep. "You have a new cell mate," Irene's voice said as she flung Andrea by her ears into the room. Andrea crashed onto the floor and looked at her friends that were trapped in.

"Man that crazy lady has a tight grip!" she complained as she rubbed her ears to soothe the pain. "Howdy ya'll," she greeted her friends as if it was just a normal day.

"Andrea!" Hunter yelled as he jumped onto his feet and flung out his arms at her.

Andrea turned around and looked at Hunter with a confused look. "Someone pinch me right now 'cause I'm seeing double." Bridget walked over to Andrea and gave her a hard pinch on her arm. "OW!" Andrea yelped, "not that hard!" She looked back at Hunter. "Enlighten me why ya'll were out there, capturing me, and ya'll are back here."

"Because I am the real me. That other one was my evil twin, meaning a robot," Hunter told her, "did that ninny hurt you in any way?"

"Only my feelings," Andrea said, "and the rest of by spine!"

Hunter approached her and gathered her in his arms. "Well now you're fine," he said as he rubbed his nose with hers, "into this cowboy's soft arms."

"Mushiness, mushiness, mushiness!" Quinn yelled, "I wish Tech was here!"


Ace and Lexi crawled through the dark tunnel. He felt as if he had been crawling together just to get to Tech. He stopped in his tracks as he let out a sigh and continued to crawl again. The silent treatment from Lexi was driving him crazy. Please say someting he begged I want ta hear your voice! he wished that Miranda was here so she could hear his thoughts and she could tell Lexi what he thought. Too bad Lexi didn't have that superpower.

He suddenly stopped when he saw three figures that were waiting by the end of the tunnel. "Tech!" Ace yelled.

"Ace!" Tech answered back as Ace saw his silhouetted arm waving, "over here!" Ace and Lexi quickly crawled over to Tech. Once they arrived, Ace looked over the end of the tunnel and saw the crocodiles swimming in circles as they waited for either of them to fall into their mouth.

"Man," Ace shook his head, "those tings are huge."

"Yeah, big," Slam said with a nod.

"I say nous build a bridge," Pierre suggested.

Everyone turned their heads and looked at him as if he had suddenly lost his mind. "From what?" Tech broke the silence.

"Je ne sais pas," Pierre shrugged, "je was, how you say, offering some suggestions."

"It is a good idea but it would take a long time to build and we don't have the right to supplies to make the bridge with," Lexi told him.

Finally she talked Ace said. "Den what are we supposed to do? We can't just jump in dere and walk through without dem chomping us to pieces."

"First thing to think about," Lexi said, "are you sure that this is even Croc King's hideout?" she asked Tech.

"I think so," Tech told her, "since your tunnel didn't lead to a specific location, I think that this could be his place since there's an abandoned building over there and a lake filled with crocodiles."

"I say dat we give it a shot," Ace said, "maybe we could be right."

"Ahem," Lexi said as he looked at her, "hungry crocodiles in the lake, if you haven't forgotten or maybe have forgotten to tell me!" she reminded him as she pointed down at the lake.

Tech, Slam, and Pierre looked from the pink bunny to the yellow bunny with confused looks.

Ace felt hurt from the attitude that she gave him. How long was she going to be mad at him? He hoped that she would get over it as soon as possible because this new attitude was driving him crazy. "Look Lex," he calmly said as he looked at her, "can we please forget about dis whole ting and focus on what is goin' on right now."

"If you say so," Lexi said, "you seem to know what you're doing even if the plan backfires might I add!" she said in a gruff voice.

"Stop it!" Ace shouted, "please just stop!"

"What is going on with you two?" Tech jumped into their fight.

Ace turned his head to tell Ace but Lexi beat him to it. "Nothing Tech," she said as she crossed her arms over her chest, "he just thinks up of secret suspicions about others, doesn't tell me anything about it, and something happens to one of us!"

Slam looked around the group and saw that two rabbits were missing. "Andrea? Hunter?" he said.

"Exactly Slam," Lexi said, "Hunter took Andrea with him and we don't know where."

"Why would Hunter do something like that?" Tech asked.

"Because he turned out to be a robot," Lexi told him, "Ace knew all along and he didn't tell me about it. Not just me but neither of us."

Ace sighed as he put his hand on his head. "Lexi please," he begged her, "this is no time to fight. Our friends lives are at stake and we are just wastin' time fightin' about something stupid."

"That wasn't stupid Ace!" Lexi shouted as her voice thundered through the room, "that was something important that we had to know. What you did was stupid!"

Tech and Slam gasped when she said that. None of them had ever said something like that to Ace's plans or ideas. Not even Duck. "Lexi," Tech said in a authoritative tone of voice, "Ace is right, we are wasting time here. Can we discuss about this at a better time than now?"

Lexi inhaled some air through her nostrils. "Fine," she said in a monotone like voice, "I will, but don't expect that anything changes Ace. We're through."

Ace's jaw dropped. Through as in bein' togeder he thought. "Why are you bein' dis way?" he asked her, "what I did was not a crime."

"It was to me Ace," she said, "my best friend could be hurt because you never said anything!" she finally screamed her inner feeling. Yes she was hurt about Ace not telling her about it, but she was more hurt at the thought of her best friend being hurt by that stupid robot clone.

Ace took a step back from her. "Are we gonna keep fightin' or are we gonna find her?" Ace finally said in a harsh tone.

Lexi shut her mouth and looked at him. "We are going to find her," she said through gritted teeth, "and when we do, we are through."

The whole team stayed quiet as Slam and Tech looked from one rabbit to the next. Slam raised his arms in the air in confusion while Tech only shrugged at him.

"Ahh, amour and its little fights," Pierre commented as he hugged his golden cane closer to him, "love is like a roller coaster, no?"

Tech looked at his cane and was about to blow but he kept his calm. "Pierre," he said in calm voice, "how long have you had that cane with you?"

"All zis time," Pierre answered.

"Does it, by any chance, make force fields that can trap things in there?" Tech continued to ask.

"Oui," Pierre answered.

"Then why didn't you SAY SO IN THE FIRST PLACE!" Tech yelled at him as Pierre immediately backed away from the enraged coyote.

"Take it just don't eat moi," the French man whimpered as Tech took his golden cane.

Tech let out a frustrated sigh as he walked over to the edge of the tunnel. He turned the red ruby ring on the cane and pointed the cane towards the crocodiles where he yellow force field shot out of the ring and trapped the crocodiles in there. "We could have been in that building and saving the girls by now!" he yelled as he threw the cane back at Pierre.

"I was going to suggest eet after I said about building a bridge until zey interrupted me with zeir little amour fight," Pierre defended himself.

"Don't you dare start with me!" Lexi threatened as a small pink orb formed between her ears.

"Please non, je suis, how you say, tres frail and je suis break easily," he quickly said as he held up his cane in front of his face to protect himself.

"STOP FIGHTING ALREADY!" Tech yelled. Not only was he getting annoyed but after being with Quinn for such a long time, he had picked up some of her mood as well. "Now let's go and save them before something happens to them," he said as he jumped off the tunnel and splashed into the water.

The crocodiles snapped their jaws at Tech but the couldn't move, let alone break through the force field. He was followed by Ace, Lexi, Pierre, and then Slam who created a big splash. After they were gathered together, they ran towards the abandoned building.


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