I was thinking that this chapter might sound a little bit like Star Wars. Example:

"What does that mean?" Abaven asked bravely.

"That's right, Abaven, I am your father." Naruto answered back awaiting the reaction.

But then I was like, naaa, that wouldn't work. So here's a redo:

Back to the story:

"Daddy!" Sayuri exclaimed running to her daddy expecting to hug him. Naruto bent down to hug his little darling.

"I refuse to think that this … this… murderer could be my father," Abaven yelled. His outburst was ignored as everyone focused on the reunion of a father and his daughter.

Sayuri was babbling now, "I knew he couldn't be my daddy, he didn't know anything about me like my favorite ice-cream, or my favorite game, or my favorite color or-

"Whoa, princess, how about we catch up another time, I don't think that this would be a good time, beside your brother doesn't quite believe as you do."

Sayuri turned to her brother with a pouting expression. "Abaven, stop being such a butthead and come meet our daddy. Only you would believe that someone like that imposter would be our daddy. He didn't know anything about us. He didn't know that you like playing jokes on people or that you hate leeks. Face it, this man is our daddy."

Temari interrupted the moment with a little tidbit of her own. "If that doesn't sound like Naruto. Abaven, I think you owe Naruto a apology."

Abaven's hands were shaking with the stress of finding out the truth. He couldn't handle it. He wouldn't. Abaven fled down the stairs, out of the hotel. He had to get away from it all. He needed time to think.

Sayuri looked crestfallen at her brother's reaction. She felt very disappointed.

One thing if you're like why is Sayuri like that, it's because she's several years younger than Abaven so she would have been around the imposter less than Abaven. So she wasn't as used to him being her father. Also I heard that sometimes younger children sometimes know what adults don't know. So right now Sayuri is like wiser. If I just confused you, then forget about reading this section.

"Hey kid, watch where you're going," a villager exclaimed as Abaven dodged from just hitting the villager's cart over.

Abaven didn't know where he was running. All he felt was he had to get away. He couldn't except the man as his father, he wouldn't. He finally came to the spot his own father loved, you know, the cliff over the faces of the hokages.

Next scene:

Temari cradled the young child in her arms. How could someone hurt such a young boy?

Temari had told Sayuri and Naruto she would try to find Abaven. As she chased him, she saw him run down an alley leading to another road. She turned to follow him. She paused in midstep as she saw what was lying near a trashcan.

It was a small boy, maybe about four or five years old. He was wearing a dirty shirt and dirty shorts. There were bruises and cuts all over him. Temari could see that his chest was going up and down slowly, almost hesitant, like he was afraid to breath.

She kneeled down to put him in her arms. She raced to the nearest hospital to check him in. While she was running, the little boy sensing the sudden movement slowly opened his eyes. He was surprised to see that a blonde stranger was holding him and running. Who was this girl? How did she find him?

She approached the hospital desk and checked him in. As she was walking away from the desk she heard her name being called. Temari whirled around to find Hinata pushing Lee in a wheelchair towards them.

"What are you guys doing here?" she asked curious.

Lee spoke for the both of them. "WE WERE DEFEATED IN A NOTORIOUS BATTLE AGAINST NARUTO AS HE HAS RETURNED TO THE VILLAGE HIDDEN IN THE LEAVES AND-

He was cut short by Temari. "That's all I needed to know." Going to Hinata she asked her if anybody else was here. Hinata pointed to a room where patients could go to talk to each other and hangout. Temari walked down the hall with Hinata and Lee following her.

She walked into the room expecting some other shinobi but was surprised when she saw nearly all the shinobi she knew from the village in the room. Kakashi looked up from his book when he heard her step in. "Temari, why are we here?" Everybody looked at the arriver with surprised in their eyes.

"Oh, I was going to check somebody in, but that's not the point, did Naruto do all of this damage to you guys?" Temari asked. At the mention of the blonde's name Sakura, Ino, Kiba, and Sasuke scowled.

"When do you guys get out," said Temari trying to change the subject after seeing the scowls and angry expressions.

"Not for a while anyway, since the stupid blonde decided to break everybody's bones," Sakura answered angrily.

"I hope you're not insulting me forehead-girl"

"Stuff it Ino, I wasn't talking about you for once."

"What do you mean by that!"

"What do you think it means?"

Temari interrupted the spat. "Ino, Sakura shut up, please and I'm pretty sure I'm talking for everyone."

Ino and Sakura looked around and everyone else was nodding as if to say that Temari was correct in her statement. Even Hinata was hesitantly nodding. Lee was not instead he shouted "OH POOR SAKURA, HOW COULD EVERYONE BE SO MEAN TO YOU, FOR YOU ARE MY BEAUTIFUL FLOWER!"

"Shut up, Lee,"Neji ordered rubbing his temples, "you're giving me a headache."

Temari decided to get back to the point. "Look, I saw Naruto and found out some stunning news, Naruto's a father."

At this announcement, the room went silent. Choji mouth was wide up spilling particles of food upon the floor. Shikamaru's head had snapped towards her in surprised. Kakashi had dropped his book. Everyone else just froze and stared.