AuthorsNote: Many people have been telling me this has been moving too fast and I'm not exactly happy with the story anyways. I propose I take down the story completely, rewrite it to make it smoother, and then put it back up. Its name wouldn't change or anything nor would most of the plot. I have even been thinking of taking Tory out of the story. There will be a phoenix helping Harry but it won't be his sister because he wont have one. So the real question is... Should I take it down, rewrite it and put it back up. Or should I leave it up and put the rewritten chapters up as I write them. And then the third option is to leave it alone. Not change anything and continue to struggle to write it. I'm angry with myself because I know I could have made it better had I given myself more time. So I'm leaving this up to you... The reviews. Please give me a review with what you think should happen. As a reminder here are the three options.


Take it down, rewrite it then put it back up.

Leave it up and put rewritten chapters up as I write them.

Leave it alone. Not change a thing.


One other thing... This is something I want to do. I am willing to leave it alone but I also really want to rewrite it because I don't really like it. If I take it down would you like me to PM you to let you know. If or when I take it down I will have the first chapter rewritten already. All you would need to do is find it. Please let me know what you think. If no one says anything then I will assume its fine. So let me know what you think. Ciao for now.

Karone

PS: If I don't change the story I will be deleting this "chapter". And just so you know... I've had the next chapter written for awhile but I have been having second thoughts about the story. Also know I accept Anonymous.