Hi guy s. Like I said in the last chapter, I m going to put in an oc chao in this one. Well, I ve got plenty of room for ocs, so I going to put three in.
The blue rays of the teleport machine where spinning fast. The machine its self was making a very load clanging noise.
"Who s going to test it out"? Asked chaoko, standing up to make himself look big.
"It might be too dangerous to test it out on one of us", said chaosky. "We should try it out on something nonliving, like a fruit. In fact, that would be perfect. Mark, test it out on a fruit". With that, mark picked up a small fruit, and threw in into the portal with all his strength. The fruit froze in the air, and then started getting smaller, until it was out of sight. The portal then showed hero garden. The fruit had landed on the ground, and the chaos were beginning to gather around it.
"So it works!" Said Goo goo.
"That settles it", said chaosky, "we are going in that portal and taking those fruit for ourselves".
"But wouldn t that be taking away their fruit"? Asked mango.
"No it wouldn t. They have more than enough trees there. We ll just take some for ourselves, and then come back. Just a little bit so they don t get suspicious".
"So who will go first?" Asked mary.
"We ll all go. Just don t get caught". After they had finished discussing what to do, they all got in a line and walked one by one into the portal. When they arrived, they were all speechless. They had never seen hero garden before. It looked amazing. There was a pond, much bigger than the one at regular garden. There was a stone tower, bigger than the little cave they had. And there where far more trees, most because the owner had bought more seeds. As they gazed around, all the chaos stared gathering. They were fat, over fed, chaos. Chaosky was the first to step up.
"Hi, we come from regular gar "
"What are you doing here"? said a young chao, interrupting chaosky. "This garden is not for dirty, ratty, fat chaos". Chaoksky laughed at this. The though of another chao who was as fat as could be, calling him fat. But he was right; they did look ratty, and underfed compared to these fat chao.
"It s not are fault were like this", yelled mary. "Are garden was abandoned. We have been trying to survive".
""Well your not stealing any food from us rats", yelled a young chao. He was a dark swim chao.
"Who are you, and what gives you the right to call us rats?" Shouted mary.
"My name is milo, and I only said that because it was true".
"Chaosky, we don t have time for this", said mark. "The portal won t last much longer.
"Then were going to have to fight for the fruit", said chaosky, almost so quietly that it was hard to hear. Then he got onto a fallen pillar in the corner, so that all the chao could see him.
"Listen, if you do not give us fruit, then we ll have no other option but to fight". With that, all the chao ran as fast as they could for the trees. Each chao grabbed a fruit and tried to run back. It wasn t that hard to out run those fat chaos. But as they were running, a few of the chaos that were that fat caught up with some of them. They were punching and kicking. A few of the chao dropped their fruit to go join in the battle. Finally, the chao stopped when a familiar voice called their names from the entrance. It was a blue figure, holding an armful of seeds. Sure enough, it was the owner, returning from the black market.
"R-regular garden"? He hissed. "What are you doing here?!" With out waiting for a response, he charged at them. A few ran into the portal, but a few didn t. Mango was trying to find a place to hide, when a hero garden chao came over. She was a beautiful chao with red tips. She had hedgehog paws and feet. And a tiger tail. She ran beside him, and showed him a place to hide. They waited there together. The other chao were also trying to hide. A few of the hero garden chao helped them as well.
"Why are you chaos helping us"? Asked chaosky.
"Because", said an old chao, "we can t let another chao die. Even if they deserve it". Without trying to say that they didn t deserve to die, chaosky just went along with them.
"And don't call us chaos", said a young chao. "We have names. Mine's Tylerus".
"We can talk names at a latter date", said chaosky.
Meanwhile, the owner had pined mary down. He was looking for something sharp, when he found a shovel. He held up his hand, and brought it down with such force, that it pierced though mary s head like paper. Mary started squirming as the shovel was pulled out. The hole was still there, and blood ran down her face until you couldn t see what color she was. Finally she quit squirming, and lay there motionless. She was dead.
"Nooooooooooooo" Shouted Robert from the hiding place. He ran out and sat beside her motionless body. His hands were covered in blood as he stroked her head. "Why did you have to kill her, why? I-I hate you". With that, he got up and carried her for the door. Her body leaving a line of read across the ground. He carried her though the portal, until they were both gone out of sight. A few of the other chaos were running for the exit too. They were afraid that the same thing might happen to them. Chaosky led a group of chao, until they were out of sight. The only chaos left were mango, chaoko, and Goo goo. Chaosky and the others ran for the portal, which was now getting smaller and smaller. When they came close, the portal vanished. Now they were stuck in hero garden with a group of chao that hated them, and an owner who was trying to kill them.
Thanks guys. Okay, You may hate me for killing mary, but I needed to kill a chao off, and mary, in my opinion wasn t a character needed for the rest of the story. And sorry for the cliffhanger. Okay, like I said in the beginning, there were three ocs in my story. Okay, so here's who came up with them.
Buddy: Created by krystalfan1313
Milo: created by crystal the cat
Tylerus: created by crystal the cat
Thanks to all who sent in ocs.
Okay, hero garden chao list.
Milo: A boy chao, and a Dark swim
Tylerus: a girl chao, and is a hero swim.
Buddy: Love square fruit, and can swim, fly, and float. Is very energetic, and is angel chao. Has loving and reviving powers, but takes two days to charge up. Is a pink chao with red tips, and is mixed with a hedgehog (Paws and feet) and a tiger (Tail) Has orange and yellow halo, and rainbow angel wings. Is also very beautiful.
Jake: The skinniest chao in hero garden. A dark green chao.
Pepper: A fat brown chao. Hates the water.
Crater: A young blue chao, with hedgehog paws, feet, and tail.
Silver: (Remember the chao at the beginning who replaced regular garden?) A shiny silver chao with a big smile.
Heather: (Remember the chao who was turning into a hero soon, so the owner took it, at the beginning?) A fat older chao. Very beautiful. Has raccoon ears, and feet.
Okay, well that s it for now. Remember to review. Thanks for reading.
