Hi everyone got some more stuff to keep you amused, big thanks to those following the series and weren't put off by chapter 1... I know the chapter is messy and noticed that like 50 people out of 500 views seemed to keep reading on after first chapter... which is annoying.

Now then the next chapter to Shattered Mind will be around soon, I got an awesome friend having a look to fix up the chapter cause she awesome writer. Check out 'Why so Blue' on Fanfiction to see some cool and impressive writing.
Well enjoy!

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Omake Charlie

Always remember the importance of pack, for the pack is everything. It is family, strength, comfort and protection, without pack you cannot survive in the universe.
Never venture alone, always stay with pack and you'll always be strong. Or at least this is what Charlie Grady remembered from her conversation with her sister Blue before she left, Charlie was still puzzled by Beta Blue leaving the pack years ago and venturing into unknown space.

It was strange that Blue had left pack behind, went by self when she knew dangers of being alone. Away from the strength, harmony and loving care of the pack, of the family they belonged too. Her alpha said Blue left to be stronger, so she could make pack safer from dangers.

But now, Charlie was regretting her choice to follow her sister's example, she left so stupid for leaving the safety of the pack and going to this other world. And most of all, she felt so stupid for stumbling upon a pack of Varren.

The green velociraptor with black, vertical stripes and proto feathers running down her neck. Darted across the hard stony ground with all her speed, glancing back briefly at the alien predators perusing her. Using the nano fibre strands in her suit she suddenly pounced into the air, leaping with ease over an ancient, fallen pillar of stone.

Gracefully she landed on the other side and continued to run, cautious to avoid pockets of radiation. Charlie wasn't sure why she chose to visit Tochonka, the radioactive desert planet was an awful place to be.

A growl escaped her lips as more Varren appeared ahead of her, she didn't know ancient ruins could be swarming with so many predators. Using her Infiltrator abilities, she activated her tactical cloak and momentarily turned invisible. The varren snarled in confusion as they sniffed around for her, growling and twitching with eagerness to kill.

But Charlie wasn't skilful in her abilities and her cloak suddenly deactivated meters from her reaching safety, she squeaked cutely in shock before darting down a hallway as the Varren once more chanced the velociraptor.

"Stupid hunters go away!" She barked loudly in fear as she ran, suddenly she tripped on the uneven floor and tumbled into a low wall.

The young velociraptor shook her head in confusion, using a claw to adjust her head set so it sat properly on her head and muzzle. A snarl quickly reminded her of the danger and she scrambled to her feet, activating her Omni tool weaponry. Around her jaws, claws and sickle claws glowed sharp, orange exoskeleton like forms of her natural weaponry.

With a shrill shriek she crouched low ready to attack, hoping to scare the Varren away. But the predators were stubborn creatures and slowly stalked closer, cornering her against the low wall.

As the largest varren, likely the Alpha of the Varren pack. Prepared to attack, there was a small commotion behind Charlie and several gun shots split the air. The alpha toppled over dead and the others scatted suddenly in fear, confused. Charlie turned her head to look behind her and saw several creatures standing slightly higher than herself, what she thought was a low wall was actually an opening that lead out into the dry wasteland.

Standing there were two, bulky creatures Charlie wasn't familiar with. They looked reptilian with scales and large flat plates on their heads like hats, on their backs was a large unusual hump and they were both covered in armour. Charlie noticed one of the aliens point a weapon at her and she hissed angrily, turning to face this new danger.

"I got this" said the other alien suddenly, pushing his companions gun downwards away from her.

Charlie examined this individual, the immediate feature that struck her was the large scars crossing the right side of his face. And those confident blood red eyes, the way he spoke and acted made Charlie wonder is this was an Alpha figure or possibly a Beta, he had a commanding authority around him she saw from those in other packs.

"My name is Urdnot Wrex, Chieftain of clan Urdnot" said the Alien confidently as he tried to look big and powerful, his words confirmed Charlie's suspicion of him being an Alpha.

As per her species custom, Charlie bowed low to Wrex holding her arms out to the side almost like a curtsey. Wrex looked a little surprised at the action and glanced at his companion to see the same confused look, Charlie slowly rose and deactivated her Omni weaponry before holding up her nearly human like hands.

She was about to sign to Wrex, but figured he didn't know the raptor sign language so she tapped at the translator around her neck instead.

"Show respect to Alpha of this land…. Name is Charlie Grady" Charlie dipped her head slightly as she spoke before continuing.

"I'm thankful for chasing strange hunters away" Charlie wasn't sure she said that right but didn't want to look to weak before an Alpha, she defiantly wasn't going to tell him about her old pack and her old rank.

"Well a little respect" said Wrex nearly sarcastically as he shot a look at his companion.

"Maybe you could learn something from her" he grunted at the other Alien who looked offended, Charlie fidgeted nervously unsure if she was actually safe.

"So Charlieee… what's your business here on Tochonka" questioned Wrex bluntly, eyeing her with a serious expression, in response Charlie tried to look confident and powerful by puffing out her chest and said.

"is exploring so I become stronger for pack, was tricked by Turin in coming here" she hissed the last part bitterly, Wrex mouth seemed to twitch slightly with a smile.

"A Turian tricked you… hahah those plate faces can never be trusted" sneered Wrex in amusement then anger as he glanced at his companion who nodded in agreement.

"Now know why pack stays close to earth" she muttered in annoyance, Wrex gave her a calculative look before stepping closer.

"So you wanted to get strong you mentioned?" said Wrex cautiously, Charlie eyed him sceptically for a moment but chirped confirmation.

"Well there's no one stronger than a Krogan… except maybe Shepard" that name caused Charlie to coo softly in recognition and she tapped her sickle claw in excitement.

"Spectre Shepard?" she chirped, Wrex narrowed his eyes a little.

"yes that's him, toughest human I've ever met" said Wrex cautiously.

"Sister was part of Shepard pack long ago, is strong alpha" said Charlie proudly as she remembered the man, he was nice to pack but left with Blue for special Alpha school.

"So you're a friend of Shepard? Hmmm wait I heard of your kind" Wrex huffed as he took another step closer as he looked down at Charlie.

"Didn't expect a raptor this far from human space" Wrex looked oddly amused by something as he spoke.

"Wants to be stronger for pack… but is weak" she finally confessed feeling shameful, she could even defend herself against several smaller hunters.

"Strength huh, Clan Urdnot is the strongest umm.. 'pack' there is on Turchonka" proclaimed Wrex as he looked down at Charlie, the raptor fidgeted slightly before glancing up at him.

"Could… join Urdnot pack?" question Charlie with a soft, innocent voice. Wrex grinned and glanced around.

"Don't see why not, you might be useful" Wrex watched as Charlie pounced forwards and landed before him on even ground, nearly looking him in the eyes with her height.

"So is pack?" the raptor was shaking slightly with excitement at the idea, if she had pack then she would be much stronger, even if she knew a clan was comprised of a large network of other packs listening to one main Alpha.

"We'll discuss that on the way" Wrex gestured with his head towards a large vehicle in the distance with a turret on the back, Charlie chirped happily and had to refrain herself from jumping on Wrex. She knew other species didn't understand her culture or customs and could act aggressively in response.

"So happy, Charlie Grady of Clan Urdnot" she mumbled to herself softly to see how it sounded, she couldn't wait to send messages to her old pack but first she had to see Wrexs 'clan'.

"I follow your command Alp… wrex" she cooed cutely, Wrex looked mildly amused and began heading towards the vehicle with an excited raptor following him closely.

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Okay so...

Blue is a 'Soldier'
Charlie is an 'Infiltrator'

What should I make Echo and Delta? Any ideas?