If anyone wants to grand theft with me, my 360 gamertag is jackultron. just in case guys, im here most nights. oh and this chapter was helped made by yinyang754
Jack and Tracey were ready to leave the house and walked out the door
"how we gonna get there?" asked Jack
"we'll take my car" replied Tracey who showed him to her yellow Issi
"now we're talking" he said then hopped in the front of the car.
They pulled up at the mall and began talking about the latest Fame or shame, Tracey practically raced up to the clothes store "this is cute" she said then looked at the price tag "nevermind" she said "I'll pay for it" said Jack" "I couldn't, I just met you" "no seriously I have too much money to know what to do with anyway" "what a gentleman you are" she said excited, kissed his cheek and ran to the counter. Jack touched his cheek with his hand and blushed, he noticed someone he hadn't seen in a long time and he knew seeing him could only mean trouble.
Author: just to clear up, this was the guy on the other end of the phone in chapter 1, his name is Clive.
(start playing the song Everybody wants to rule the world (the cover by Lorde))
"so Jack do you like it?" asked Tracey
"Tracey, go over to the counter and hide"
"why?"
"trust me"
Tracey did as she was told and Jack walked to the man, who started to pull out his gun but was cut short when Jack... shot him in the face then five other people pulled out hand guns
"alright gents, bad news is I've only got six bullets but good news is there's enough to blow your faces off then he took of his glasses and his eyes shone red with black targets (this is how I think entering deadeye works) he then proceeded to shoot four in the head and one in the side. "Hey man!" said another gang member, Jack turned around and saw the thug hold Tracey at gunpoint but Jack easlily shot his eye out then Tracey collapsed on the floor and Jack walked over to the guy he shot in the side "you'll get to live for now, tell Johnny that I'm fair game but if he goes after the people I care about I will burn everything he holds dear, now leave!" the guy got up and ran.
(end the song)
Tracey and Jack arrived back at the De santa house and went in through the front door and into the kitchen, the family were there
"oh my god Tracey, I was so worried" said Michael hugging her "I saw what happened on the news."
Amanda's make up was smudged because she was crying "you bastard!" she shouted at Jack then back handed his face so hard he dropped to the table
"take it easy Amanda!" shouted Michael "he didn't know what going to happen"
"that's not the point, he put our daughter in danger Michael!"
"he would have protected her with his life"
"you don't even know him!"
"I know him well enough to know he wouldn't put our family in danger"
"hey everyone" said Jimmy walking in
"not now!" shouted everyone
Jimmy raised his hands and slowly backed away back upstairs.
Amanda turned to Jack "you are an obnoxious bastard and I don't want you anywhere near my family, now get out of my house!"
"mom!" shouted Tracey
"it wasn't his fault a gang was shooting up the mall so lay off"
"your mother's right" said Jack as he slipped on his shades
"I'll be going now, Tracey, mrs. Desanta" he said nodding his head but Amanda kept looking at him with contempt then he silently walked out the door and met Franklin in his Buffalo
"hey man, what's wrong?"
"nothing" replied Jack sniffing and trying to hold his tears back.
this chapter was because i've had the idea to get Jack to interact with the Desanta family.
