Okay peeps, I'll be honest with you all:

a) I have never written a fiction story that I have published

b) I am not from an English speaking country, hence every error I have written

c) If you have some constructive criticism, I would be pleased to hear it, OR if you have some questions or ideas for this story

d) Chapters will be posted after I am done writing and re-read it (I am not a future editor so you will see some more mistakes)

Now I will start writing some more!

Thank you all Warriors