Goood morning people!
Now, here's the latest chapter of my latest fic xD! tadaaah
It didn't really take that long to write, but mabye it's too short?
I haven't gotten any complaints about the chapter lengths yet, so I just assume you think they're okay..
Now, I don't own the original naruto characters. The rest belongs to me alone! If you want to use my plot, tell me.
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pov - point of view
I couldnt think.
I couldnt see.
For a brief second it felt like I wasn't existing..
Then I got back to eart
And realised that
It was time to take responsibility
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"It may be pain-full right now, Sakura. But later you will understand and you will be very gratefull."
Even though no body could hear her, she still closed her icy eyes as she spoke it out in the wind. knowing it would bear her message to Sakura somehow.
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SAKURAS POV
I turned around, only to be met by the dark, brown surface of the front door.
Behind me lay the body of my older brother, Nori. In a sec I was by his side. Tears welled up in my eyes, as I bent down to check his breath and pulse.
I sighed in relief as I felt a weak wind against my cheek. Then I grabbed mt backpack, desperatly trying to fin my cell.
He looked just like if he was sleeping. No blood, no pain in his expression. Just a calm, peacefull look.
Finding the phone, I tried to controll my fingers. They were shaking, and caused me to hit the wrong buttons. swearing and crying at the same time, I managed to press the right 3 buttons, and a beep rang in my ears as I pressed the green "call" button.
"h-h-hello?" I was trying my hardest to keep the sobs silent. A lady answered in the other end "This is konoha hospital, what can I do for you?"
"You have to help" I half shouted, half cried out. "my.. my brother! I din't know if he's alive or.." I couldn't make myself say the word..
"just.. just please co.. come to slettaunet 9 in south konoha, it's.. it's the white house with the black gates outside"
A few swconds of silence. "A car is on it's way. Now I need you to stay with me on the phone until it arrives" the lady spoke.
FROM OUR POV
Sakura nodded, forgetting the nurse couldn't see her.
"What's your name?" she spoke in a kind tone. Sakura knew she was trying to calm. But why weren't the car here allready? didn't they take her seriousily?
Ha.. haruno sakura" she replied, her voice shaking and her words nearly drowned in her sobs.
"what a pretty name. Now, Sakura. Can you tell me the condition of the patient?"
"he's.. he's unconcious and breathing quite heavily."
"That's great. Now I will ask you to follow my instructions"
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during the minutes it took for the ambulance to arrive the nurse guided Sakura through them. And when the doctors arrived, after what seemed to be hours, Nori was lying stable and Sakura had given all the nececarry information to her.
They got Nori in the ambulance and drove off with sakura next to him, holding his hand.all along, muttering words to herself.
At the hospital Sakura met the tearwet face of her mother.
The rest of the day would stay like a blurry series of hectic pictures in sakuras head. She remembered parts, and scenes but nothing gave any sense.
Then the mornign came once again. konoha had woken up, and slowly the streets filles up. Sakura, who sa by a window in the hospitals top hallway, looked down at the streets. wondering how people could act so normal.. how could this be just another day? didn't they realise someones life was in danger? how could they not feel her pain?
She looked down the hallway. They had yet to be allowed to come in and see Nori, yet. next to her, her mother was resting her head in her hands. Sakura knew for a fact that she hadn't been sleeping the whole night. She'd been on the phone with her mother and she'd been trying to talk with the doctors all the time. eventually, she seemed to have run out of energy, and all she could do was to cry.
Sakura wanted to put her arm around her mother to comfort her, but something stopped her from doing it.
the whole hallway was silent. you could hear a needle fall to the floor, like it was an elephant falling over. Then, a piercing click broke it. And the emergency room opened, and out came an obiousily worn out doctor. He was drying his forehead with a little piece of cloth.
Sakura saw her mother looking up, then running owards the doctor, wanting news. They talked for a fewseconds, but it was all mumbling so sakura didn't get it. Then her mother wawed for her to follow into the room.
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The first thing that hit her was the smell of sereval medications and strange potions. They tore up her nose, but she couldn't care less.
Her mother were allready at noris bed, when sakura walked in. she stared in shock.
She'd expect him to greet her with his great grin.. or mabye say something like "Hey shorty, what's with that face?"
But Nori looked just like in the hallway.
He was lying on a bed, ready to be pushed into another room. was he dead?
No.. he had some colour to his face. And she could see his chest going up and down. Then she terrefied looked up at the doctor beside her.
"comatose" he replied to her piercing, glare filled with horror.
Her eyes turned to Nori and his lifeless body again. Then she walked over to him, and reached out to touch his hand.
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SAKURAS POV
It had been a few hours since I saw Nori in the emergency room, and now he had gotten his own room. I was sitting in a chair, next to his bed, looking out the window, waiting for mom. She'd gone to the doctor to talk with him about Noris current state.
I looked out of the window. "grea view Nori'" I spoke, remembering that the doctor had told me that he might would be able to hear me.
"too bad you're not awake to see it".
I didn't know if I should've been reliefed or sad.
KNOCK KNOCK
I turned to the sound, only to find an uniform dressed police officer in the dorrway. "can I help you?" I spoke.
"yes, my name is Arne Andreasen and I'm here to ask you a few questions about what happened last night" the offices spoke in a formell tone.
last night.. the girl! I'd forgotten all about her. As thethoughts went through my head I felt a wind of guilt going through me. How could I have forgotten her? "Yes. please find her!" I spoke, feeling a mix of anger and fright building up inside me, by the thought of her.
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The interview took about an hour. during it I realised, I hadn't even gotten a good look at her. The only think I could say for sure was that she had some incredible eyes, long hair and that she looked rather pale. I couldn't even recall a name.
First I thought of Hinata. The girl from the first day... But at a closer thought I was sure it wasn't her. The girl I saw was much taller, and she just had this complete different aura.
when I walked out of the room where Arne had interviewed me, I met my mom. She told me about Nori. Showed out, they couldn't explain what happened. He didn't seem to have any visible damadge. They also told us there was a chance he might would bee brain dead if he woke up.
Once again I found myself staringout of Noris window. Describing the landscape for him, piece by piece.
He's always been nice to me. Acting like an older brother should, and I just felt like it was my turn to take care of him.
Later on, Nobu came by. without his girlfriend for once. Never ever have I seen any of my brother cry. But as Nobu saw Nori lying there, his tears streamed down.
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I stayed home from school the following two days. I spent all my time at the hospital with Nori, Nobu and mom.
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SCHOOL
Yup.. my third school day, and my life was more fucked up than ever.
for the third time I was looking up at the ridicilousily large buildning. wondering why it was so big.
For the third time I walked to my locker.
And for the first time the past three days I felt happy.
Seeing Ten-chan, Dei-chan, fish cakeboy, Hinata and Lee coming to greet me, made me feel very special.of course they all knew about what had happened from tenten whom I'd told.
"welcome saku-chan, yeah!" Deidara grinned, and pushed the others away to give me a hug. When he let go, I noticed another person, standind behind him.
I stared at her, shocked.
"oh, this is my cousin that I told you about, yeah" he spoke. though, his words went in one ear and out the other.
I screamed.
"IT'S YOU!! "
"eh.." she looked at me with a strange look.
"YOU DID IT!"
"excuse me.. what are you talkingabout?"
"oh you know " i had to stop just to dry my eyes "pretty damn well what I'm talking about! you almost killed my brother!" I spat at her.
"sorry.. no.. I've heard about your brother. And I'm very sorry, and I understand that you're confused. But you shouldn't let your feelings out on others" I heard her say. Her voice sounded innocent, but her eyes told me different. Tey spoke of guilt and sadness.
Realizing, I had no proof, I turned around to walk. And as I took the first step, I turned back and tried for a direct hit in her face, but when I opened my eyes, I saw only air where she had been standing a second ago.
I noticed people were staring. 'have to be smart'.
"I'm sorry" I boved to her. Thinking that I just had spilled my last drop of honour. "you're right I let the anger get the better of me"
I didn't know why I reacted as I did. normally, I'd go crazy. beat her to a pulp and laugh of her. But something told me I needed evience.. I needed facts. And I needed to know what happened to my brother!
"Sakura, may you give me an answer to my youthfull love letter of youth?" a voice interrupted me.
Thank you all for reading the 7th chapter of my fic!
Now, I hope you'll stay with me to the very end of this! (wich seemes to be pretty far away right now... way to many roads to close to end it in a fewchapters)
as you popably noticed, I updated kinda fastthis time!
I don't know how often I'll be able to update now, because we're having this grand project coming up. But I'll write whenever I have the time :D
Now, everythings really starting, and it'll be a reason for everything. I know, the ending sucks, but this is a strange chapter.. and I said it wpuld be humor in this.. so I tried to put in some at the very end xD..
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