This is my first story so please go easy on me with the reviews.
Things I use often in the story:
Bolded Words = Author Notes or Title
Italic Words = Thoughts
Underline Words = Important Notes
POV = Point of View
One Last Thing: I just watch the anime, I didn't read the manga so please don't complain if everything isn't accurate.
Dinosaur King: Destiny!
Chapter 6: The Hurt Max
Max #2: Damn, that took longer than expected!
-Back to the dark room & Max laying on the floor-
Max: -Gets up from the floor- This shall be fun! -Goes outside-
Zoe: Max! Your alive!
Max: Why wouldn't I be alive?
Rex: We just thought Light killed you...
Max: So nobody came to check up on me?
Zoe: Uhh...
Max: You guys wanted me to died didn't you?
Rex: It isn't like that...
Max: You betrayed me...You went behind my back and made a deal with Light for her to kill me...
Zoe: We didn't!
Max: -Shows them an contract-
Rex: -Goes closer to look-
Max: NOW! -Punch Rex in the stomach-
Rex: -Falls- Ow!
Zoe: Max! What are you doing?
Max: Trying to kill you... -Goes inside the dark room and grabs a knife and goes out-
Rex: What are you doing?
Max: -Points to Zoey- Shall you go to hell first?
Rex: DON'T TOUCH HER MAX!
Zoe: Max...This isn't you...
Max: Yes this is...The truth is...I always wanted to kill you...I always wanted to betray you..So I been waiting for my move...And now is the time! -Tries to attack Zoey-
Rex: ZOEY!
Max: -Stops halfway- -Drops knife and falls to the ground- -Starts to bleed in the stomach-
Zoe: MAX!
-In Max's mind- (Setting: Dojo)
Max: -Gets up- Do you think i'll let you hurt my friends that easily?
Max #2: -Turns into Light-
-In reality-
Light: -Comes out of Max's body-
Rex & Zoey: -Both confused-
Light: You sure are a piece of work!
Max: I don't let loser like you, kill me or hurt my friends...
Light: -Piss off- WHO ARE YOU CALLING A LOSER!
Mr. Hunter: -Comes in- Would you guys be quiet? Someone trying to sleep here! -Yawns- Light why don't you take a break for today...Its getting late...
Light: Argh...Fine! -Leaves with Mr. Hunter-
Max: Wait! -Blood drops from stomach- -Falls & coughs out blood-
Zoe: MAX! -Runs over to him- Are you okay?
Max: -Smiles weakly- Ye- -Pass out-
Rex: -So shock he can't say a thing-
DUN DUN DUN!
What is going to happen to Max?
Is Max going to live or die?
Find out next in DINOSAUR KING: DESTINY!
