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Chapter 3 (Rainpaw's POV)
As the cats walked away from the clearing to go to their dens, Rainpaw looked around confused.
"Hey Rainpaw," Graypaw called from the apprentices den, "come here so we can find a place for you to sleep!"
Rainpaw rushed over to her friend and mewed, "Maybe Pinestreak and Stonenose will let us train together."
Stonenose, having heard that, walked over to the two apprentices and meowed, "Or maybe Rainpaw can explore the territory with Tigerpaw and Featherpaw while I take my apprentice hunting." Seeing the apprentices lower their heads crestfallen, he mewed, "Then we might practice fighting."
With that, Stonenose pushed Graypaw over into the apprentices' den before running across the clearing to the warriors den. Rainpaw heard growling inside the den and rushed through the entrance to see Sharppaw and Graypaw standing face to face, staring into each others eyes, hackles raised.
With a voice like a leaders, Rainpaw growled playfully, "What is going on in here? I only went to see Icekit and the den is torn to shreds. What is wrong with you two?"
"This piece of fox dung crashed in-," Sharppaw broke off when he noticed that there weren't any warriors in the den.
"Stupid furball," Lightningpaw mewed as she flicked her tail across Sharppaw's ear, "always have to make trouble don't you?"
Sharppaw backed away from Graypaw and mewed calmly, "This piece of fox dung crashed through the wall and fell on top of me."
"If you want to complain to someone, then complain to Stonenose. He's the one that pushed me," Graypaw meowed stubbornly.
"Mouse dung," Sharppaw growled in reply, his fur bristling so he looked like a porcupine.
"No, he's right," Rainpaw pointed out, tail flicking irritably, "Stonenose pushed him over, I saw it all."
Sharppaw whirled around to face her and growled, "That's what you say. Stonenose is your father and you're best friends with this piece of fox dung, so of course you're go-muffled voice."
Lightningpaw swiped her tail across his mouth and mewed, "Hush or you'll bring all the warriors over here thinking a badger is attacking us."
Firepaw's head sot up and he mewed, "Badger! Where?"
"No where. Go back to sleep," Lightningpaw growled.
"Mouse brain," Sharppaw muttered under his breath.
"Come on Graypaw, you might want to get Larchleaf to look at those scratches. They look pretty nasty," Rainpaw mewed, obviously worried.
"But I- oh fine Rainpaw," Graypaw mewed before leaving the den.
After Rainpaw knew he went to the medicine cats' den, she turned and looked for a place to sleep. Her brother and sister were sharing tongues in a heap of moss. She walked over settled down with a -huff- and mumbled, "This is the life."
Sharppaw is based on my brother's friend whom I call Sharptongue. The problem is, I can't capture his wistfulness and thorn-sharp tongue (hence the name Sharptongue). If you have a suggestion, please review and tell me.
