Okay no reviews it's fine -cries in a corner- well I did get two but 1 from a guest

Guest: thank you for the review. I don't if you could explain what you mean by clunky that would help. Um I'm not good with details and I'm a crappy writer but to answer the other questions, Axel's den is more like a cave made to look like a very opened space house on the inside. He calls it a den because wolves don't normally live in caves.

The others, as in Cloud's group, they are normally in their wolf forms. They live in dens that lead into the ground.

Yes you could say they are like wolf rain's wolves. And I keep forgetting but while they are in their 'human' form they maintain their tails and ears.

I'm sorry for the confusion. As I said I suck at details. Forgive me.


Oh oh and I you guys didn't notice, but Cloud's group is always in wolf form.

Next order of business I want to thank my friend Leven-the-Valkyrie for helping me get excited to write more for you guys.

If you like this story then you'll love Abandon. I know I love it.

On to the non edited sorry with most likely a butt load of mistakes.

The beta thing is still opened.

Enjoy


Axel's POV

"Nyah." Roxas moaned and gingerly clawed at my back making me groan. His body a trembling mess as he threw his head back against the pillows. His eyes shut tight, cheeks a rosy pink while his mouth hangs open to let out another moan. His creamy skin even smoother than I thought I would be. It was still baby soft for someone his age. His tail swayed wildly and his hips bucked with a twitch of his legs. One of his hands found its way into my hair to which he yanked and cried out in pleasure.

I growled against his length as I sucked him off. His body shuttered in bliss. He tried to buck again but I held him down with one of my hands. The other traveled down his thigh, sliding around the sensitive flesh to tease him. I gazed at him through slightly closed eyes to watch his facial expressions as my tongue dipped into the tip of his head. The reaction I got was more than pleasing. His eyes snapped open while letting out a silent cry.

"A-Axel." He moaned and looked down at me to meet my gaze. His eyes were glossed over with lust and want. I knew he was close to his climax as his eyes begged me to take him and make him mine. I however just started to bob my head and deep throat the blond. And that's was all it took before he screamed out my name in released his essence into my mouth.

I swallowed as much as I could before pulling back with a cough or two. I wiped my mouth with the back of my hand while panting for air. The blond lying on the bed hand his hands digging into the covers beneath him as he too was panting for sweet oxygen. His chest kept rising and falling and his body was covered is a light coat of sweat. His hair was a slight mess from him tossing and turning his head. And with the look on his face its safe to say he has never experienced this kind of pleasure.

Its not that surprising really. Our kind always mate for life after all. None of us, not Terra, Riku, Demyx, or I have ever mated with anyone. In all honesty I've never done what I've done to Roxas before now. I've never had this taste in my mouth before. It's not like I like or hate it.

I lick the back of my hand and stick my tongue out to clean around the edges of my mouth. I look back down at Roxas and he's still a panting mess. He is probably thinking about what just happened. I wonder if he regrets it. I wonder if what I did was the right thing to do and I hope it worked.

"That should help for now. You should go take a bath and cool off." I say getting off the bed. He doesn't say anything back. "I'm going to go finish making a path with the others."

"Wh-What about you?" He asked between heavy breaths. I looked down at my own problem and shrug.

"It'll go away. I need to go get some air." I quickly walk out of the room.

Once I'm out of his sight I hear him sitting up. His breathing slowing down to a steady rhythm. I stand by the door way trying to hear what he's doing in there but it seems that he is just sitting there.

I close my eyes with a tired sigh and move on to the opening of the den. I don't see the guys anywhere so I step onto the cold ground and look around. I haven't been outside during the snow fall in a long while. I'm always snowed in so this is a nice sight. The snow blanketing the ground, the bare trees with random patches of white on them. The clean fresh air was really helping me and my problem calm. The now burning sensation on my bare feet helped too.

It was really giving me an itch to transform and run around. Maybe go hunting for some snow bunnies or something. Then it just accorded to me that my friends aren't around. "Hm maybe they're hunting?" I say and walk down the path carefully. Nobody wants to slip and fall.

I'm a few good feet away from the den when I pick up the scent of wolves. It's not the guys but that brown and yellow wolf again. It also smells like three more have joined them. My eye twitched and I growl in the back of my throat. "Damn it." I let out a howl to alert the others to get the hides back here. I then ran back toward the den trying to calm myself.

I reached the opening and let out another growl. I turned and faced the others. They could smell the intruders too even if their muzzles are covered in blood from what looked like a fresh kill. All of them stood before me in their other forms.

"What do you want to do Axel? This is the perfect time to send Roxas home. Just like you wanted." Riku said tilting his head to the side. His silver fur made him almost blend in with the snow.

"Riku's right Axel. What were you planing to do if they never even came this far? Send him home by himself?" Terra asked me with his eyes shining with knowledge.

"Of course I wasn't. I was going to lea him to the edge of my territory and let him go from there as whatever happens happens." I say taking my pants off so I could change forms.

"What if he got hurt or attacked again. He can't change right now so it would be worse. Who knows how far his home is." Demyx, the voice of reason, made me rethink things.

I sighed and transformed. "I wouldn't let that happen to him. Would you stop sniffing me Riku!" I backed away from him not liking the way he was looking at me. "It's not what you think."

"Oh? So you didn't have fun with a certain blond?" Riku and Demyx tittered.

"And your going to send him away after taking him?" I'm sure if he could, Terra would be raising an eye brow at me.

"Of course not. I just gave him some relief that's all. Not more." I said feeling slightly embarrassed for telling them. I needed to change the subject back to the intruders. I cleared my throat after letting them all have a short laugh, which I will kill them for later, and get down to business.

"Alright here's what's going to happen. You guys go stop them from coming any further. If possible no blood shed." I chuckle and continue. "I'm going to go get Roxas and follow after you guys."

"And if they want to fight for the area?" Demyx asked knowing that since it was mine alone, then they really couldn't do anything but stall.

"Then I'll give them a fight. I know you guys will have my back if anything goes wrong. Hopefully though it won't come that." They all nod and hurry to stop them from coming any further. To stop Roxas' pack from leaving their unwanted scents here.

I make hasty and run back into the den, going straight into my room. Roxas had just come back from taking a bath. The smell of his heat wast as strong as it was before. That's a good thing but at the same time disappointing. It's good that what I did actually worked but I miss the smell.

"Hey er Axel." He says with a light blush on his face. He stood there looking awkward and shy. If I wasn't in a hurry I'd probably tease him about it. But it wasn't the time for that. "What's going on? I heard you howling." He took in my form with a quizzical look.

"Just get on my back and when we get outside you'll be able to smell for yourself kiddo." I saunter over to him and nudge his leg. "Come on, we have to hurry." I bite his (my) shirt and pull him along with me.

"Hey! Axel wait!" He pulls back and yanks the shirt out of my hold. "Why are you acting so weird? Why can't you just tell me?"

"Why can't you just listen and get on my back?" I said feeling irritated. This kid was stubborn. I gently bit his hand and started to pull him again. With a reluctant moan, the pup followed me out of the room and straight to the outside. He shivered and it was then did I realize he wasn't wearing pants. With a roll of my eyes I lowered myself and motioned for him to get on.

He rolled his eyes back at me and got on. He practically buried his body against my fur to keep warm. This maybe harder than I thought it would be. I'd have to run but be sure he didn't fall off. "Hey, don't fall off. I'm going to be running at full speed."

"Axel why won't you-" he leans back and takes a whiff of the air and gasps. "M-my brothers..."

"Yeah so um I'm going to run now." I say and take off with him.

3rd person POV

"This is it. The place we saw all those wolves." Sora said scanning the area. The blood that had once left a small trail was now covered in white sheets of flakes. The smell of their brother was no more. It was blown away from resent storms of snow.

Cloud looked around the area. He could smell the scent of a strong wolf. His smell was everywhere even with the wind blowing everything away with the white powder. Who ever it was, they had lived here for a long time. He was feeling uneasy about this but nothing would stop him from getting his baby brother back.

"How many we're there again Ventus?" Zack asked as he too looked around with his eyes. His ears twitched to hear a howl a long distance away.

"When we got to this point there were two. One red furred wolf with green eyes. The other was a dirty blond with blue eyes." Ventus could still remember the way the two looked at Sora and himself. They were about the same size as Cloud and he knew that just the two of them could take them down but they could hurt them. But them the other two had to show up. Ventus growled at the memory. He hated not being able to to do anything then. He looked to Sora who had the same look in his eyes.

"The other two, we don't know what they look like. We just know that we wouldn't be able to do anything on our own." Sora finished for his brother. The brunette gazed at the ground ready to do whatever it takes to save Roxas. Even if he had to welcome a new member into the family by force.

"So there's four of them." Zexion said rather than asked. He was picked up when the others retuned from finding Zack. The bluish gray wolf closed his eyes and let his sharp nose take over for sight.

"What do you smell Zexion?" Cloud asked his cousin.

Zexion elevated his nose into the air and took a few sniffs. He hummed to himself, analyzing the number, strength and size of all that he could smell. Keeping his face pointed up and his eyes closed he answers Cloud. "I can smell three large wolves coming this way. There is also the scent of blood from a fresh kill. They must have been hunting. All three of them are strong."

"Then that means one of them is missing." Zack said taking one last whiff. "I can smell them now."

"But which one isn't coming?" Sora asked. His ears twitched and he instantly growled and bared his teeth.

"It's them. It's the ones we didn't see before." Ventus got into a fighting stance. His tail swayed as Sora stood next to him.

"What's this?" Zexion muttered. "I can smell Roxas and...oh no."

"What is?" Cloud asked with a hint of worry.

"He's reached his heat."

"No." Cloud whispered in disbelieve. "Are you sure?"

"Yes. Cloud I'm sorry. We may be too late." Zexion said, facing the leader with his ears down as eyes sad.

"Roxas." Ventus and Sora both quietly said.