I'm sorry Toms and She-cats but I just have been suffering from writer's block,Im currently beating it back with a kendo sword,not sure for how long it will last though.

Chapter 6

Goldenpaw got up from his moss bed,his bones still tired from sleeping.

As Goldenpaw slowly walked into the clearing of Thunderclan camp he saw Firestar,Graystripe and Sandstorm Firestar's mate.

Goldenpaw took his place near Bramblepaw,he also expected his brother to fill a place next to him but then he saw that his brother was headed to Highrock,Goldenpaw through the crowd of cats he saw his brothers nearing Highrock,His brother slowly got up on the top near Firestar.

"All cats of Thunderclan,as you know I welcomed two loners toThuderclan,Goldenpaw and his Brother."Firestar seemed to be looking especially at Goldenpaw.

Dustpelt stood near Goldenpaw and mewed to him "Don't worry im sure the clan understands that you and your brother can take care of yourselves,after that display of courage you gave the clan I don't expect them to."Goldenpaw nodded.

Goldenpaw heard the familiar ritual of the apprenticeship ceremony,solemnly he watched Firestar name his brother "You kit,shall be known as Scarpaw until you recieve your warrior name."

Scarpaw eyes shining with pride,Firestar continued "Dustpelt,will you take Scarpaw as your apprentice,tou have shown great determination to serve the clan,i hope you will pass on your best qualities onto him"Scarpaw looked puzzled but he still approached Dustpelt and touched noses with was glad that Scarpaw's ceremony wasn't like his own,but he didn't like that Dustpelt had become his brother's secretly hoped that both of them would be mentored by Graystripe even though he knew it was didn't like Dustpelt at all but he respected him,the only cat he knew who spoke against Firestar,obviously Firestar wasn't one to punish one to express their opinion,but still that required a lot of guts.

Graystripe nudged Goldenpaw's head with his muzzle,Goldenpaw looked at him with a jolt "Relax Goldenpaw,anyway,were going hunting with Scarpaw and Dustpelt later,get some rest until then,you had a hard day yesterday."

Goldenpaw looked at him darkly "Is she going to be okay?"

Graystripe nodded at him with a smile "Yeah sure,remember that Cinderpelt is a great medicine cat,you should have more faith in her,but still go over to the medicine den"he pointed at it "If you want to check on her."

Goldenpaw calmly walked there,saving his strengths for hunting with his brother and their mentors.

As he entered he saw the kit lying down,her pelt not red and bloody,but white with a rose red tail,green eyes and a the very end of her tail a green tip,near Cinderpelt both talking,as Goldenpaw entered the kit looked at him and spoke "Hey,you're the apprentice who saved...Sorry for the problems,and the blood."

Goldenpaw looked at her surprised,after looking at her,searching for word "No problem,I was just glad you are still alive."Goldenpaw then looked at Cinderpelt and spoke "Cinderpelt,when will she be able to walk again?"

Cinderpelt simply looked at him,seeing the sorrow in his eyes mewed "Yes,she'll be fine,but from what I know she is a loner,like you used to be."

Goldenpaw looked at her,so she wasn't from a clan? That meant that maybe Firestar would let her stay,but all Goldenpaw could do was hope.

Goldenpaw was walking across the clearing when he noticed two apprentices talking.

As he got closer he recognized his brothers white pelt and Bramblepaw's brown tabby fur.

"So,how about we go hunting?"Graystripe mewed as he crossed the clearing.

The apprentices stopped talking and looked at Graystripe.

Goldenpaw said "Yeah,im going to catch more than these two combined."

Scarpaw's eyes flared with the excitement of a challange "Sure,if you two can even get out of camp."

Bramblepaw countered to both of them "Well,make sure you both don't get lost."

Their mentors approached the exit of the camp.

Goldenpaw ran in their direction,beside his brother and his best friend,even if he barely knew Bramblepaw.

Goldenpaw was stalking a plump mouse,as he slowly dragged himself across the forest floor,he felt its heartbeat,getting closer and closer,getting ready to lunge at his prey.

As he killed his prey,he buried it nearby,Goldenpaw then saw a sparrow on the trees,as he slowly climbed up one himself,as the wind moved the branches,Goldenpaw moved,making sure not to cause even the slightest the sparrow flew to the ground,Goldenpaw sprung his claw,slowly moving forward,as the bird was just beneath him,he dropped from the tree,killing the new prey by biting its neck,as it slowly bled.

Goldenpaw was carrying the two pieces of prey back to camp when he scented Bramblepaw,coming back with prey as well.

Graystripe was also back,carrying two rabbits in his jaws.

Firestar came back with a crow in his mouth.

Scarpaw and Dustpelt each came back with two mice.

As the six toms left the prey on the fresh-kill pile,they each took one piece and started to settle around camp.

Goldenpaw took the mouse he caught himself,sitting next to Bramblepaw and they ravenously ate their food,they started to talk.

"Goldenpaw,I have to say,you have become a much better hunter then you were when i got sick." Scarpaw mewed in between bites.

Goldenpaw smiled,feeling happy that his brother could finally be back.

Bramblepaw then pointed"Well,you did bring back quite a bit of prey Goldenpaw."

Goldenpaw burst into laughter "Well,I have been hunting for the last moon all by myself to feed both of us."

Goldenpaw then got up and left for the apprentice den,leaving his friends to finish up their laid down on his moss bedding,he felt his eyes grow heavy,he slowly fell asleep.

Soooo SORRY GUYS,SCHOOL IS KEEPING ME AWAY FROM MY COMPUTER,I REALLY CAN'T WRITE much during the weekdays,so im leaving up for writing one chapter every free day i get,AKA mostly weekends