Pokémon: The betrayal


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This is the next chapter of my betrayal story. I felt an itch to write this so here it goes. What did you think about Ash´s Magikarp? Too OP? I felt that I did a good job but that's probably just me :P.

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Chapter 7


Cilan´s POV: "Iris, don't be so fast, we are not in a hurry!"

"But, come on Cilan. I really want to check out all the strong trainers around here. I hope they have some dragon-types!" Iris cheered on Cilan.

"Now when you're talking about it, do you know something about that mysterious Satoshi guy?"

"Actually, I don't. I bet he has a lot of strong Dragon-types! Can we go and check him out?"

"Why not, Iris?"


Satoshi´s POV: Some days have gone behind us and we only have about two weeks to prepare for the tournament. Max has been making good progress. His Kirlia even evolved into a Gallade and his Lairon evolved to an Aggron. He was going to be evenly matched with other trainers and he will be stronger than many trainers when he's done training with me. I also feel ready to reveal myself to him. He is absolutely sure that the others did this and I know it's true. After all, I can't recall seeing Max that day. I also thought about revealing myself to Iris and Cilan. They didn't seem like they knew about the plans even. I didn't see them lately though. I hope nothing happened to them. As I walked out of my tent, the sun was already in the sky, and was shining brightly against me. This was a perfect day to ride my Charizard; I bet he would like it too. I walked up to my Charizard and mounted him. He realized what it meant and shot a powerful Flamethrower into the sky, just by happiness. He shot away right into the sky and almost forced me to fall off. There was a slight tremble too so the wild Pokémon looked in confusion up in the sky.

"Let´s get into town, shall we Charizard?" He looked at me, like he was asking me something.

"You mean that I shouldn't reveal you?" He nodded. "It's ok. I just didn't want the traitors to know, everyone else should know what they are up against in the tournament."

He shot forward at amazing speed and turned to the direction of the town. With Charizard´s amazing speed, it didn't take long before I was there. We landed right outside the Pokémon-center. The tremble was huge this time and some people even fell to the ground. Everyone laid their eyes on Charizard and there was complete silence.

"Return, Charizard." I said and started walk to the Pokémon-center. Soon after I went in, I heard that the smaller crowd started to talk about my Charizard. As I entered, I saw that Iris and Cilan were talking with nurse joy.

"Hey! If it isn't Cilan and Iris." I said. They turned against me and they looked amazed.

"Hey, Satoshi. How do you know our names?" Iris asked.

"I know you, you just don't know it." I stated.

"What do you mean?" A confused Cilan asked.

"I'll tell you if you follow me." They looked at me, then at each other and said ok.

I went out of the center, totally forgetting about the crowd. The crowd rushed to me and started to ask me load of questions. I picked out Charizard´s Pokeball and threw it, releasing the fire lizard. The ground shook once again and the crowd went dead quiet again. I gestured to Iris and Cilan to get on Charizard. They understood and hopped onto Charizard. I went after them. "Hold on tight. You seriously need it." They nodded and at that moment, Charizard launched to the sky. Charizard had a slower pace so Iris and Cilan wouldn't fall off, but they seemed to have some problems anyways.

*TIME SKIP*

We finally landed and all of us went off Charizard. I told him to get Max. He nodded and leapt off once again.

"So what did you mean earlier?" Cilan asked.

"Wait a sec; I want Max to join us."

They waited patiently waiting for Max and after a while they saw Charizard in the sky. It didn't take long before it landed.

Max said, "Hi, Satoshi. Why did you send your Charizard after me and who are those two?"

"Allow me to introduce Iris and Cilan. I used to travel with them like I used to travel with you." I said. They started to look at each other and then at me. Iris started to talk.

"But the only one I travelled with was a trainer that was called Ash Ketchum and he is dead."

"But what if I told you that he isn't dead."

"Ash, is that you?" Cilan asked, catching on to what Ash was saying.

"It's good to see you again, Cilan."

Max and Iris came and engulfed me in a hug. Cilan was still standing, as polite as he was. As soon as they had been done hugging me, he started to talk.

"But Ash, we all thought that you were dead. Would you tell us what really happened?"

I took the word and started to tell them about that day. I told them everything, from how Pikachu had deserted me to that my mom had died. Then I told them how I went off training at Mt. Silver for all the years.

"How terrible!" Iris said. "How could they do that?!, and I thought that they were your friends!"

"I was there when it happened." Max said with a sad tone. "I couldn't do anything and I still can't look at my sister in the same way." We all understood him.

"I don't want you to tell anyone else about this, even your friends. Is it understood?" They all nodded.

"Did you become strong since we last met?" Iris asked.

"You bet he became strong! Try having single battles with him under the circumstances that you can use three Pokémon but he only one. I'm sure you will lose."

"Let's do it Iris. There's a battlefield nearby."

"Sure, Ash."

*Time skip*

"I will serve as a referee of this battle. Iris will use three Pokémon while Ash uses one. It is single battles and substitutions are allowed. Cilan said.

"I want you to meet one of my most trustworthy partners. Charizard, you're up."

Iris saw Charizard once again, but was surprised. She didn't see the black flame so it was a huge surprise.

"Go Lapras!" She said, throwing a Pokeball.

"Whoa Iris. I didn't know that you had a Lapras!" I said excited.

"I caught it about three years ago."

"Begin!" Cilan said.

"Lapras, use Hydro pump!" Iris said while pointing at Charizard.

"Charizard, get your tail in front of the attacks." Charizard let his tail in front of the attacks. To everyone's but Ash´s surprise, the flame just absorbed the attack.

"What!" Everyone was wondering about what was happening.

"You see, Charizard´s black flame lets it absorb any water- or ice-type move."

"It's so strong! Don't give up, Lapras use dragon pulse!"

"Counter with a Solarbeam." Iris looked triumphant at first, knowing that Solarbeam was a move that had to charge up but got terrified when Charizard shot the attack directly. The two beams collided but the dragon pulse easily got overpowered and the Solarbeam scored a direct hit on Lapras, resulting in a knock out. Iris and Cilan seemed shocked by the powerful attack.

"How did it use Solarbeam directly?" Iris asked me.

"Its black tail powered the Solarbeam. Its black tail is driven by aura. Aura is the essence of each living thing. As long as my Charizard is alive, its tail can power anything very quickly. Also, it was powered by the hydro pump it absorbed and made it stronger."

"Wow Ash, I didn't know a Charizard could have such abilities. Let's go Hydreigon!"

"Nice Hydreigon over there."

"Thank you Ash. Hydreigon use dragon pulse!"

"Use Solarbeam."

Both attacks went of directly and collided in the middle, creating smoke.

"Try to see where Charizard is, Hydreigon!"

Iris started to look around and saw Charizard. She pointed and said;

"Shoot a dragon pulse in that direction!" She said. Hydreigon obeyed and shot a dragon pulse at Charizard. When it hit Charizard, it just… disappeared.

"Use fire blast." Multiple Charizard's appeared around Hydreigon and shot pitch black fire blast´s at Hydreigon. Hydreigon tried to dodge it but it got hit in the end and fell to the ground, swirls in its eyes. Everyone stood there stunned except for me.

"I didn't know that your Charizard knew double team." Iris said.

"There's a lot that you don't know about me."

"I guess so. Go Haxorus!"

"I see that your Axew actually evolved. I started to think that it wanted to be an Axew forever."

"Haxorus lets show our strength with outrage!"

Haxorus started to get angry and then started to leap against Charizard with fury in his eyes.

"Double team."

Charizard just simply duplicated yourself and avoided the strong hit. "Now use fire blast."

Charizard opened its mouth and shot a pitch black fire blast at Haxorus. Haxorus had no chance to react and the battle was over as quickly as it started.

"Haxorus, take a good rest. Great job Ash, you are really strong."

"It's not me, Its Charizard." I went over to Charizard and praised it. It shot a flamethrower into the sky and then returned to its Pokeball.

"How did it get a black tail?"

"Max, could you tell?"

Max started to tell the story about Charizard´s black tail as we walked back to camp. This was a great day. I felt a weight leave from my shoulders when I could tell someone who I really was. I hoped that my name wouldn't be explained early in the tournament so I could shock the audience with me being back. I'm sure that I would see some surprised faces.

As we came back to camp someone was there. When I came closer I saw that it was Gary Oak. I wondered what he was doing here.

"Hello Oak."

"Well, well, well, if it isn't the strong trainer that everyone is talking about. I wondered when you would show up."

"What is your business here Gary?"

"I want to challenge you to a battle and win."

"I'm sorry but my Pokémon here is tired so it will have to wait for tomorrow."

"What Pokémon did it battle?"

"It battled my Lapras, Hydreigon and Haxorus." Iris replied. Gary raised an eyebrow.

"He took down three Pokémon with just one?"

"Yeah, hurts to say but he crushed me."

"Have we ever met, it feels that way?" He asked both me and Iris. We both said no.

"Well, I guess I will be looking forward to tomorrow. I'm sure about that it is going to be one great battle. Smell ya later."

When Gary left I said; "Gary hasn't changed one bit."

"Did you know him?"

"Yes, he used to be my rival, actually my first one, but then he decided to become a Pokémon professor.

It's getting a little late, ill see you guys tomorrow."

We waved to each other and then we all left in separate directions.


How was it? Please review or PM me and tell me. I want to improve my writing skills and I want you guys to help me. Please review or PM and write constructive criticism!

By the way; how is the story behind Charizard´s tail? I tried to make it different than from other stories. What did you think about it?

Other than that; Till next time!