Hello everypony welcome to chapter 7 of the adventures of raze silverwing. Now I have a complaint for fanfiction. Net because when i posted chapter 6 I'm pretty sure it was longer than it is now. But for some reason words are missing from it and same for chapter 5. If anyone knows what's happening let me know. Any who lets all give a hand for our guest, applejack!
Applejack: howdy yall.
me: now let's check the reviews
lonethedarkheartedwolf: Torture lets see get kicked In the head by rainbow ,get KOed by me or scare her by doing gang set which is where you set up friends at every door way and when she comes in pop out and block her then have pinkie who is awesome dressed up as an evil priestess and act like she puts a curse on her so she runs off and then I Lone get knocked over and she tells me and I get scared and start acting likes she cursed it would freak her out
me: yeah all great and i did two of those in the last chapter. So yeah. Thanks.
-bell rings-
me: well apparently we need to start the chapter. AJ would you do the honors.
Applejack: thank ya kindly Raze.
Disclaimer: I do not own mlp or any of the songs in this chapter Hasbro does. I only own my oc raze and crystal plus sapphire shine.
Now let's start this puppy
Enjoy and please review.
Chapter 7 we arrive at a deathtrap
The limo pulled up to the school after long agonizing minutes in the heavily cramped car. As soon as we stopped I rolled the window down and was proceeding to jump out of it when everyone gave me a look that said clearly: what are you doing? I sighed and rolled the window back up and opened the door the boring way: pulling the door handle. As soon as we got out of the limo it started up and drove off in a hurry.
"Wow he's in a hurry tonight." twilight said.
"Yeah but he probably has somewhere he needs to be." I agreed. We slowly made our way inside. I held the door open for them as they walked in and we continued to the auditorium. My jaw dropped at the sight. It was beautiful. Decorations were everywhere. Pinkie pie really outdid herself, speaking of which she was raiding the snack bar of sweets. Out of the corner of my eye I saw sunset shimmer sitting in a corner smiling and my mind put up a red flag. She's up to something. I then noticed her look toward the stage at the crown smile some more and then she turned my direction. I quickly looked away but I knew she saw me.
Later on
So far the fall formal was the most fun I've ever had. All the girls wanted to dance with me (much to the annoyance of sapphire) and they were surprised when I knew their names. I decided to get something to drink and started to go to the snack bar when the band onstage started to play some music. It was okay but it wasn't that great. So I decided to make my move and let everyone know how awesome I was. I reached in my bag and pulled out an electric guitar colored ash black and headed to the stage. Flash sentry saw me come on the stage and gave me a confused look.
"Sup, mind if I take the stage?" I asked. He shook his head.
"Sup everyone, I'm Raze Silverwing and I'm going to sing a song. Feel free to dance or sing…or both, but I hope that you enjoy it." I told them. I then handed flash an acoustic guitar and some sheet music.
"Ready?" I asked with a smile. He smiled back and dismissed his drum player. I moved and stood in front of the mic and bowed my head. Flash then began to play.
"I See Fire"
Oh, misty eye of the mountain below
Keep careful watch of my brothers' souls
And should the sky be filled with fire and smoke
Keep watching over my brother's son
If this is to end in fire
Then we should all burn together
Watch the flames climb high into the night
Calling out father oh
Stand by and we will
Watch the flames burn auburn on
The mountain side
And if we should die tonight
Then we should all die together
Raise a glass of wine for the last time
Calling out father oh
Prepare as we will
Watch the flames burn auburn on
The mountain side
Desolation comes upon the sky
Now I see fire
Inside the mountain
I see fire
Burning the trees
And I see fire
Hollowing souls
I see fire
Blood in the breeze
And I hope that you remember me
Oh, should my people fall
Then surely I'll do the same
Confined in mountain halls
We got too close to the flame
Calling out father oh
Hold fast and we will
Watch the flames burn auburn on
The mountain side
Desolation comes upon the sky
Now I see fire
Inside the mountain
I see fire
Burning the trees
I see fire
Hollowing souls
I see fire
Blood in the breeze
And I hope that you remember me
And if the night is burning
I will cover my eyes
For if the dark returns
Then my brothers will die
And as the sky is falling down
It crashed into this lonely town
And with that shadow upon the ground
I hear my people screaming out
Now I see fire
Inside the mountains
I see fire
Burning the trees
I see fire
Hollowing souls
I see fire
Blood in the breeze
I see fire (oh you know I saw a city burning out) (fire)
And I see fire (feel the heat upon my skin, yeah) (fire)
And I see fire (uh-uh-uh-uh) (fire)
And I see fire burn auburn on the mountain side
As we finished there was silent. A saw a lot of young couples stop dancing. Immediately people clapped and cheered. I smiled and we bowed. I turned to flash.
"Not bad." I smirked. He laughed.
"You're not a bad singer." We both shook hands.
Suddenly there was a crash then a scream then a flash of light and what I saw was the ugliest thing in all of history
It was sunset shimmer but she was 3 feet tall she was red with bat wings and ears and her eyes were demonic. Her mouth had grown fangs and I immediately saw what had caused this gruesome transformation. Twilights crown was perched neatly on her ugly head.
"FINALLY I HAVE WON AND NOW YOU WILL ALL BOW TO ME!" she said evilly. The crown glowed with magic and some of the students went into a kind of trance. Suddenly something blue and small flew onto her face. She screamed in pain and ripped it off her face and threw it against a wall. Upon closer examination it was... no...It was crystal. I could feel the rage boiling inside of me slowly rising. My headphones appeared around my neck brand-new and in perfect condition. I put them on and played a song that would cause fear in those around me. The song itself was called nightmare night by the livingtombstone and it was transforming me slowly. I could feel my bones breaking and moving my skin bubbled and fangs grew from my mouth, my hands grew into claws and a claw came out of each of my arms making it look like I was wielding swords. When the transformation was done I was a massive dark black dragon with one real wing and one metal. Wait one real wing ...I'll check it out when I'm done beating sunset shimmer to a pulp forget what my mother said.
"How...dare...YOU!" I roared. I was so mad I couldn't hear twilight screaming at me to calm down. I grabbed sunset by the neck and proceeded to strangle her. If she didn't know fear before she certainly knew it now. She tried grabbing my arms trying to get them away so she could breathe but my grip was too tight. Then I felt something against my leg. I looked down and saw sapphire hugging my leg (as much as her arms could reach) and crying. She looked up at me and I instantly understood... I let sunset go. Sunset fell on the ground breathing in deeply. I started returning to normal slowly until I was sapphires height then she embraced me in a hug and cried. I didn't know what to do so I just stood there and let her. While I was occupied sunset had gotten up and was summoning all the power in the crown into one massive ball of green energy. She threw it at me and sapphire but something blocked it... a magic barrier?
"Huh? Twilight?" I said and looked. What I saw made my mind explode. There she was in front of us except...she had wings and a horn?
"You're welcome raze now get HER OUT OF HERE!" she yelled. I did as told and picked sapphire up. I ran to the school and set her down. She looked at me with confused and frightened eyes.
"r-raze?" she said in a timid voice.
"Yes Sapph it's me" I confirmed. That's when I noticed how I looked. I was normal enough except I had a horn on my head and wings had appeared. Yet my right wing which was supposed to be metal... wasn't it was real. I could feel the air on it ...it felt...nice.
Suddenly I heard a bang and I looked to see where it came from. The main six were battling sunset and failing miserably. Suddenly my element (which I forgot I had on my wrist) started glowing. I was levitating closer to the main six and they too were levitating. Another glow came this time though it came from my other wrist. There sitting upon it was my sisters element how it got here I don't know. The amethyst glowed a bright purple and mine glowed a dark black. We levitated around twilight whose eyes... we're glowing white!
I knew what was about to happen and sure enough stripes of colors appeared from our elements and formed into a rainbow which proceeded to make its way to sunset shimmer and wrap around her. Sunset looked around her in fear and screamed as she was transformed back to normal. What I didn't expect though was for her to be crying. I felt sorry for her so I stepped into the crater and held out my hand. She looked up at me and slowly a smile appeared…but it wasn't an evil one… it was a smile of happiness. She took my hand and I pulled her up.
"You know there is a saying: treat others as you wish to be treated." I told her and she nodded.I then remembered crystal and ran over to her. She was heavily bruised and she had several cuts. I quickly grabbed my bag and reached in it. In my mind I was wishing for anything that would help her. I felt my hands grasp something and I pulled it out. It was a small vial about the size of my finger And it was filled with a golden liquid. I opened it and dropped some in crystals mouth. Immediately she started to heal and she started to move slowly. Her eyes shot open and she looked around.
"Huh? What…what happened?" she asked oblivious to me. I grabbed her and hugged her tightly and I just sat there and cried. Sapphire came up behind me and hugged me joining in on the action. I got up and looked up and noticed the moon was halfway into position meaning we had a couple minutes to have some fun.i smiled.
"Bring on the fun!" I shouted and everyone cheered. I couldn't remember the last time I had so much fun. I kept my eye on the moon making sure we didn't miss our chance to go home. When it was time to go we all stood in front of the statue. As the moon reached its position the portal began to glow. Twilight and I waved good bye and we stepped through the portal with spike.
to be continued...
finally that nightmare is over (hears evil laughter) no nightmare moon i didn't mean you. anyway working on the next installment and i have new stories coutesy of volts so be sure o read his stories/ my stories read and review
