Hey guys! The chapter everyone has been waiting for! This part is going to be super long like the last one because we won't go onto the first date yet but it'll be there. Here are some responses.
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Jack's POV
Mornings where nightmares come true. But not today, I went to our front yard and plucked a jasmine flower. My mom is an avid gardener. I then took out a piece of paper, wrote on it and taped it to the flower. Thanks Olivia. Now the mail comes around 10am. It's now….9.45am. I've got to hurry!
I quickly rushed in the shower got dressed and ran out to Kim's house. I carefully opened the mailbox and tried to put it in but I couldn't without smushing the flower so I just taped it to the mailbox.
After that I ran back to the house and ate breakfast. At that moment my brother Leo came down. He looked at me suspiciously.
"What?" I asked innocently.
"You're up to something." He replied still looking at me while he got a bowl of cereal.
"I have no idea what you're talking about." I said smiling. He will find out. Eventually.
"One of us knows what you're doing and soon it'll be two." He said plopping down in front of me and eating his cereal.
I just shook my head and cleaned up my bowl. When I finished my phone vibrated. I was about to take it but my brother got hold of it.
"Leo. Give. It. Back." I demanded holding out my hand.
"Hmm. Let me think about that." He stroked an invisible beard and shouted, "How about never?"
"Leo!" I shouted. I chased him around the table. I went left when he went right and vice versa. He managed to run past me and up the stairs.
"Leo. Come back or you'll regret it!" I said chasing him up. Leo then held out his hand and the other one other the stairs.
"Jack. I wouldn't. I can drop this thing." He grinned mischievously. Who else thinks he's is the male version of Olivia. Damn, why do kids have to be so sly? I don't know, conscience, I don't know.
"Fine, Leo. You win this round." I said giving up.
Leo smiled evilly and read the text aloud. "Aw, Jack. That was so romantic. Sure, I'll go with you out on a date. Pick me up at 2. Sorry I have a gymnastics meet. (Note, Rachel's request for a meet.) If you want to come, come to my house at 11. Heart Kim."
I groaned while he looked at me knowingly. On the bright side you're going on a date with Kim.
"So. You're going on a date with Kim. No wonder you looked happier than usual." Is it his mission to make me the most miserable person ever?
"Okay you caught me. What do you want?" He knew how much I didn't want our parents fussing over this.
"First, you tidy my room for a week and when it's my turn to wash the dishes you 'volunteer'" Leo said using quotation marks for volunteer. "Second, I have complete access to your room for a week and third you're going to take me on your date."
"What?" I hissed angrily. No, n- n- n- n-n- n- n- n- n- n-n- NO! Wait, what's your date plan?
Olivia didn't say anything about that. Wasted 20 bucks for nothing. Improvise then! Okay. Um. Let's see. After her meet we could to the carnival then go out for food at the café. Sounds good. Then yeah.
"You heard me I wanna know who this Kim chick is."
"You're too young for her but perfect for her sister Olivia. You have the same deviousness, attitude and well everything else."
Leo scowled at me. He was off guard so I took this opportunity to grab my phone. "Ha! Got my phone back."
"I still have a weapon." Leo said still looking mischievous.
"Don't say it."
"The parents." He whispered. I didn't want him babbling off about the date so I had to let him come.
"Fine. Just get ready and meet me downstairs before I got without you." I said going into my room to spray on some cologne. I took a different pair of supras and ran downstairs.
"Leo! Hurry up!" I said as I wrote a note for my parents when they'd either wake up or come back from work.
Leo came running down looking smarter than usual (like Luke's look from Jessie) and put on his sneakers. "What? I can still look good. Who knows she might be interested in me?"
"In your dreams Leo." I said opening the door. We walked down to her house and yes Leo was in awe on how big it was.
"Someone's living large and-" Leo just saw the BMW. "My dream car!" He ran up to it and hugged the car.
I rolled my eyes and rang the door. At least you're not late for her meet. It 10.50am. Making good time.
Again it was Olivia who opened the door. She wore skinny jeans with sneakers and had a checkered shirt blouse.
"Hello, Brewer. I see you're early."
"Wait, Jack. I didn't know she was short." Leo said shocked. Stupid.
"I'm Kim's sister, doofus." She threw back at Leo.
"Nice to know." Well they're off to a bad start.
"Anyway Olivia, can we come in?" I asked before it took a turn for the worse.
"Sure." She opened the door wider and beckoned us in. "Last one closes the door."
It wasn't long before Kim came down. She wore an off the shoulder top with denim shorts with mid calf boots. She had a gym bag and another bag with a hand bag. Her hair was in a high pony tail with her side bang.
"Ok, first off Jack. This is my gym wear. My leotard is in the sparkly duffel bag, in the other bag is my actual date outfit and then there's my casual handbag." She explained as she put her stuff down.
Before I could reply my brother stepped up and said, "Hello lady, Leo's the name. You can call me the man of your dreams." He wiggled his eyebrows. Kim looked at me with a questioned look.
I replied, "Long story." She just nodded and stooped to Leo's height and said, "It's nice to meet you too Leo." She ruffled his hair and sighed.
"So let's get going. Come on Olivia." Kim said as she went outside.
"Don't tell me the idiot is joining." Olivia groaned as she made her way outside.
"Sorry, but I can't sit with her." Leo complained.
"Okay then, Leo. You can go on back home if you want." I replied smiling sneakily.
Leo got the message and we went in the car. I went in the front with Kim and Olivia and Leo began arguing through the whole ride.
"I don't see how we're alike Jack." Leo said.
"You don't but I see it." I grinned.
"Well you must be blind because unlike me, Leo is the most arrogant and stupid person ever!" Olivia said glaring at me.
"Excuse me but I happen to be the coolest person in my school." Leo countered.
"I beg to differ. I bet you're the only student there." Olivia retaliated.
"Better to be the only student that the meaner person at school." Luke replied.
"I now get why you prefer being the only student because you're obviously embarrassed by the fact your grammar is horrible!" She shouted back. Leo flushed red and they both gave each other a staring match.
Kim couldn't help but laugh. We did arrive at the gym and let me just say it was huge. The fighting between the kids didn't stop there.
"You're probably the worst gymnast ever." Leo muttered under his breath.
"Hey! At least I can do a back tuck it's better than being able to do just a cartwheel." Olivia replied fiercely.
"You don't even know what I can do." Leo said.
"Let me guess a handstand." Olivia smirked crossing her arms at him.
"Maybe." He said popping his collar.
It was obvious Olivia had won that battle and it left her smiling and feeling powerful. "Take the Crawford seats I'll be back you'll see me in a leotard." Kim said before leaving to go to the changing room. I led Olivia and Leo to the seats. I decided to sit between them before things got a bit out of hand.
It was obvious where Kim's team was when she came out all the other girls had shiny white leotards with blue streaks. They began stretching and doing warm ups. It was half an hour before the official competition began. I could just about make out Grace sitting next to Kim. I guess she preferred her hair in a bun.
There were these things called rotations and it was quite confusing because it was hard to keep track on the gymnasts. The most falls occurred on the beam. I would understand because you're walking/tumbling around on a stick thing so you have to try extra hard not to fall off.
*Results*
Kim came first with Grace closely behind then a random person from another team was third. Kim had a bit of trouble with the vault but she still came first. She hugged her coach and ran into the changing room. I got a text to meet her outside so I took off with the little maniac children. It wasn't a problem to occupy them I gave my phone for Leo to play with while Olivia tumbled around. She did stretch, I think. How am I supposed to know I was too busy doing something else? Which was? Waiting for Kim. Poor excuse. Shut up.
When Kim came out she waved goodbye to Grace. Her hair was down and curly. I'm guessing she brushed it. She wore a green asymmetrical overlap top with a belt, skinny jeans and black heels.
"Sure you're not overdressed for a first date?" I asked.
"Sorry for wanting to look my best." She said as she sat down. I took the wheel and drove off to the carnival. Why the carnival? The sun was out and it was really warm and I really didn't want to waste this day by being in a dark room.
"The carnival?" Olivia asked.
"There's an arcade." I said.
"I'm in!" Olivia and Leo both replied at the same time. They then both looked at each other weirdly.
"Why would a girl like an arcade?" Leo asked as we stepped out the car.
"I don't see what the problem is." Olivia said crossing her arms.
"Guys, here's some money knock yourselves out and meet us back here at 4." I said reaching for my wallet and giving Leo some money.
"Whatever." Luke said taking the money. He turned to Olivia, "Race you to the arcade."
"You're on!" Olivia said. They both raced away.
They'll be okay right? Don't worry games will help lessen any competition. Hopefully. Oh well.
We first went to a whack-a-mole machine. I paid the guy and we tried to beat each other scores. I won but Kim didn't seem to mind. She dragged me to a rollercoaster. The line was quite long.
"Are you sure you want to go onto the rollercoaster?" I asked unsure.
"Are you underestimating me, Jack?" Kim questioned nudging me.
"No, but if you're scared just tell me." I cockily said. Kim crossed her arms at me. It was our turn to go on the ride. We handed our tickets and made our way to the front. We brought the seatbelt that was overhead and dragged it down.
"Ready Kim?" I asked.
"I was born ready." She nodded back at me. The ride was slow at first as it went up to the top. It stopped tilted back and forth a few times stopped for some seconds before racing down. The whole lot screamed. We went upside a couple of times, did A's (going up and down really quickly), the cart twisted around a lot before slowing down at the end.
I took mine first off and Kim shortly followed. I held out my hand for her to hold. She was quite dizzy and tripped.
"Bad day to wear heels." She said holding my hand and making her way down.
"If there wasn't me you'd probably fall countless times." I joked.
"I am not that clumsy." Just as she said that her ankle gave out. I caught her in time and gave her a told you so look.
"Don't judge, Brewer." She got her balance and we made our way to a stand of where we had to knock down bowling pins with balls. Let me just say I completely failed. When I threw the ball I couldn't knock down ANYTHING. Kim did well and won a big plush teddy bear.
"I think I'll name it Barry." Kim said in a baby voice.
"Why Barry?"
"I would have been called Barry if I was a guy." Kim said. She blushed pink.
"Aww. Is Kimmy blushing?" I mocked in a baby voice.
"No! Don 't call me Kimmy or else?"
"Or else what?"
"Do you really want to know? I'm not afraid to demonstrate." Kim cockily said.
"I'm going to go with no." I said with a bit of a high voice.
"Wise choice, Brewer." She smiled.
We then went on the ferris wheel. 'Barry' was left down there guarded by the ticket attendant. The view was really nice.
"Hey look! We can see our school from here." Kim said pointing off into the distance.
"Oh yeah. Looking as school as ever."
We both laughed and made eye contact. Her brown eyes were sparkling and her hair was blowing in the soft breeze. Our hands have touched and it was a good time to kiss her. No hestitation. I moved in.
"Ride's over." The man shouted.
Kim and I jerked back and stepped off holding hands. How many 1st kiss chances have I missed? Lots. That really helps, conscience! We didn't let go which didn't bother us and we decided to go to the arcade.
"Let's try that 2 player dance game." Kim suggested.
"Are you crazy? I can't dance. I'm really bad." I said. No seriously I am probably one of the worst dancers in history.
"All you do is follow the dance moves." Kim pleaded. "Come on, Jack."
"Fine." I groaned as she dragged me against my will to the game. We didn't do so bad. Are you sure? Okay Kim wasn't so bad, compared to her I may have looked like a retarded walrus. Thank goodness Leo wasn't there because he would keep nagging on and on about it.
"Okay, Kim. Now that you have killed me can we go do a game I like?" I said.
"Sure." She replied. She took my hand and I lead her to a shooting hoops game. Kim groaned and said, "I can't shoot."
"I'll show you." I took a ball and went through a step-by-step tutorial and everything else possible. I made the shot and had a mini victory dance. Kim took a ball and struggled as hell. So I went behind her and supported her. The cheesiest move ever! What how else was I supposed to help?
"Yay! I made the shot!" She said happily. We gave each other a high ten and hugged. I could have sworn her hair smelt like strawberries. Strawberries are nice. We made a couple more shots.
"My choice now, Brewer!"
"Oh God." I quietly said.
"Don't worry. It's kind of a sport." She replied. I gave her a thumbs up as we went to the air hockey. We went for 5 games. I won 3/5 games. Okay I did use the chance when she was distracted to win but hey! A shot is a shot. You can't exactly remove the point now can you?
My stomach rumbled and I said, "I'm feeling hungry. You in?"
"Don't need to tell me twice. I think there was a café just nearby." Kim said.
With our entwined hands we walked to a café. We exchanged a few jokes as we waited for the food.
"If I am in any food place I always happen to finish ¾ of my drink before my food arrives." Kim said between sips of her lemonade.
"Same here. My mom says I should only drink a bit or I'll fill myself up." I said.
"She also says that!" Kim exclaimed. We had a bunch of laughs. When our food arrived the waiter winked at Kim.
I said, "B-Bye!"
"Someone's jealous." Kim cockily said before taking a bite into her sandwich.
I blushed deeply and ate my sandwich. Cheese, ham and salad have never tasted so good together.
"Don't worry about it." Kim said putting her hand on my arm. "It's nice to know you care about your date." We smiled at each other. Cute moment. Got that right.
"Kim. What kind of music do you listen to?" I asked.
"Well. As much as I love today's modern music I do miss the old songs by The Black Eyed Peas, Shakira, Christina Aguilera and yes, Britney Spears. Those old songs and so many more." Kim replied.
"I didn't think anybody went back to that old music." I said then realizing how weird that sounded, "I mean. Wait! Not that the songs are bad. I just thought that no one else listened to them any more with all the new songs taking over."
"Another question, cheerleading or gymnastics?" I asked.
"Gymnastics." She replied immediately. "Don't get me wrong cheerleading's awesome but gymnastics is brilliant."
"Now, Officer Brewer. It's time for me to ask you a question." Kim smiled with a bit evil. I just sighed ready for the question.
"What's your biggest fear?" Kim asked sipping her smoothie.
"Seriously? Why don't girls ask normal questions?" I said putting my hands up and leaning back on my chair.
Kim raised her eyebrow at me as if to say 'answer it'. I gave out and coughed, "Clowns." To be fair you couldn't hear it, you must have impeccable hearing to have heard that.
"What?" Kim asked confused.
"Clowns." I said barely whispering it.
"Pounds?" Kim said. "Weird but okay. Weird is good."
"No. Clowns." I said. Kim tried to keep in her laugh but I told her to laugh and she laughed so hard. After probably 5 minutes of laughing she calmed down.
"I'm sorry. No seriously I'm sorry. It's just you're hi-ya! And the clown is all ha-ha. It's a bit weird." Kim explained with occasional chuckles. I did laugh at her attempts of trying to re-enact the sound effects.
"Well. Even amazing guys like me have weaknesses." I said flipping my hair at amazing.
"Hey! Cockiness is my job." Kim said as she threw me her napkin. We both laughed. I was having really fun on this date and I was guessing she did.
"On my first day Jerry said that it's essential for me to make way for the cheerleading squad for me to be on your good side. What was that about?"
"Well. First what kind of girl doesn't want to be showered in attention and two I have many sides. Sometimes my inner snobbish 'queen bee' comes out and I can't help it." Kim explained flicking her hair at the end for emphasis.
"I think you're a fun, beautiful girl." The words slipped right out of my mouth before I could stop them. I blushed red and looked down to continue eating the rest of my sandwich. I couldn't see her reaction but when I looked back up she was smiling and finishing her smoothie.
"So Kim. What sandwich did you have?" I asked. Okay, I probably didn't pay attention.
"Don't hate but I had a sandwich with cucumbers, tomatoes and lettuce. I have to minimize the amount of junk and fatty foods I eat." Kim replied thinking back.
"Being a gymnast kind of sucks then." I said.
"At least I can do cool flips, keep healthy and flexible." Kim retaliated with a smug voice. She couldn't help by laughing at how she sounded and I soon joined in.
Kim looked at the time and we both agreed to go and meet up with those little monsters. They were already there and both looked at us like we had killed someone.
"What guys?" I asked quite confused.
"It took you long enough. I had to wait here with Mr. Stupid for 10 minutes while you lovebirds enjoyed yourselves." Olivia answered quite angrily.
"Lovebirds?" Kim asked. Hmmm. Maybe Kim doesn't like you that way. Shut up. Can't I be happy for just this one date and can you shoot me down later. Nope, I prefer now to mess with your brain. Consciences these days.
"The hand holding." Leo said pointing to our hands. I hadn't even realized neither had Kim because we quickly stopped and let go of each other's hands. Kim went a bit pink, her hair covered most of her face as she looked away. She then smiled at me before looking back at the kids.
"Well I'm sorry." Kim said in a baby voice.
"Listen I know you took longer because you were trying to make me jealous." Leo said with 'swag'. "Don't worry babe I forgive you."
"Yes, Leo I was totally doing that." Kim said sarcastically before putting Barry in the car and going in the driver's seat.
Kim dropped Leo and I at our house. Leo was about to get out but Olivia pulled him back in. I could their conversation.
"Hey!" Leo shouted.
"SHHHH!" Olivia hissed.
"What was that for blondie?" Leo whispered spitefully.
"Can you not give them privacy?" Olivia whispered back returning the hate as if it was the most obvious thing in the world.
"Whatever."
"You're just jealous Kim will never be interested in you." Olivia replied.
I left them two to bicker while I followed Kim who was in the middle of the pathway.
"You know, Jack." Kim said confidently. " I had a really great time. That was an amazing date. I really enjoyed myself."
"Phew! So it wasn't a failure?" I asked relieved.
Kim laughed and replied, "No. It was a success."
I looked down in those chocolate eyes. The sun was setting, birds were flying And there was a small, cool breeze. Kim's hair flickered in the wind.
"Now, before the moment is ruined." Kim said. She went on her toes and planted a kiss on my cheek.
"I'm glass the moment wasn't ruined." I said as I held her hand. We stared at each other for a bit until Olivia honked the horn. "Unlike you I want to go home."
"Be right there, Liv!" Kim shouted back. She turned to me and waved "Bye Jack. See you tomorrow!" as she made her way back to the car.
I waved back as Luke came out the car and ran to my side and Kim entered the car and drove off. I opened the door with my keys and found my parents beaming larger than usual.
"You says that didn't you?" I said as I hung up my jacket.
"Yep." They both said simultaneously.
I went up to my room and logged onto the computer. Kim had accepted my friend request a while ago. I didn't mind because I preferred the experience in real life than a box confirming it. Social Networking is great and all but I'd rather have a kiss than a text.
After dinner, watching tv and bothering my younger brother I went to bed with a smile own my face. Seeing Kim tomorrow would be like falling in love all over again. Okay so what if I'm a bit of a romantic at heart?
Omg! They went on their first date! I was filled with butterflies when I wrote this chapter! It also helped with the fact that this obnoxious girl at my gym was humiliated by our coach. Apparently she wasn't focusing so th coach got pretty mad. Boom! Karma has blessed me!
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