So Aria (guest that reviewed) first of all only a little bit, also Toriel uncinscience is explained, alphys put a magical sleep spell, Undyne was told to get the human any way possible so she did what she was told, and i don't care what those people said, it might be a rip off of sans but who could truly know (me), also Chara can't hold them back because of a someone else

Just one monre we are starting off in San's Point of view (POV)


"aaahhh it's good to get away from everything for a bit" Sans was nearly home when he heard yelling from inside his house, he could recognize it as Undyne's. You prepared for the worst and barged in through the door to see Toriel lying down, and you atop of the stairs also asleep.

"hey guys what are you doing back here" Sans had murderous intent behind his words waiting for a response

"Oh shit. Hey Sans I knew you had the human here and be orders from the king himself I order you and the human to come with me." She knew Sans wasn't going anywhere but she could at least try to make him come.

"U-U-Undyne d-don't y-you re-re-remember what Ch-Ch-Chara j-just s-said" Sans knew Alphys was scared shitless, she never stuttered so much in one sentence even when she confessed her love to Undyne

"Yeah I remember but, they're asleep can't hurt to take him in now rather than later" she was confident that she could get past Sans. But he had already grabbed Tori and teleported up to you.

"Now Undyne i don't wanna have to do this but, if you take one more step you won't be leaving here alive"

"BROTHER YOU CAN'T TRULY MEAN THIS? CAN YOU?" Papyrus looked really disappointed in his bro, he was actually threatening to kill one of his friends.

"Sorry Pap but they ain't taking the human, me or Tori, and if any of you try, well lets just say none of you will even get close to hitting any of us.

Now Undyne being the way she was decided to take that challenge and secretly charged up a very small bolt and shot it at you.

"tsk tsk tsk, now Undyne what did i just say" Sans grabbed her and teleported her to the edge of a cliff, holding her by the throat, ready to drop her, he could see fear in her eyes.

"you shouldn't of tried that" He pinned her to thee ground with multiple bones through her clothes only making her take a little bit of damage. Undyne was left hanging there.

"YOU BASTARD SANS. I'LL GET YOU FOR THIS. AND THEN YOU WILL PAY." and that was all he heard before he appeared back at home.


(Back to your POV)

"Really, fainting again, god it is so boring when you faint, I mean i can't even take over your body." You had finally awoke.

"heh well then i better faint a bit more often then, and hey at least you don't feel the pain from the throbbing headache that comes on afterwards" when you opened your eyes you saw a furious Undyne teleporting away with an even more furious Sans.

"uuuhhh what the hell just happened" the remaining two people in the room. Seems as tho they thought you'd be out for a bit longer

"ah s-so y-y-your a-a-awake, t-t-thats g-good." she seemed scared

"Chara what the fuck did you do"

"hey i didn't do anything she's scared because of what Sans did"

"and what did he do"

"threatened to kill them if they tried to kill us"

"huh makes sense" it was at that moment Sans had gotten back

"Ok now that your awake kid how about a few answers"


After about 15 minutes of him asking you what Chara said and you responding with the same 'I got no fucking clue' he finally let up

"why don't you let me out and I'll tell him myself"

"nah i'm good i don't really feel like passing out again"

"So kiddo, since you can't answer me that question how about this one, what do you want to learn first with your magic."

"teleportation" you had got the answer out just as he had finished the question

"Ok but I'll have you know that this is the hardest to learn."

"oh well lets start then"


"*huff* *puff* heh guess you were *huff* right this is pretty *puff* difficult" you finished the sentence as you sat down in the snow, you didn't care that it was freezing cold.

"heh well I'll give you a 5 minute break before we continue"

(5 minutes later)

"Ok lets get back to it" you were eager even tho you knew this would take a while..

"ok so remember, just pour as much magic as you can into your hands and imagine pulling open a hole that leads to where you want to go" you laughed sarcastically

"God you make it sound so much easier than it really is" this was your 50th attempt at the trick, so far you were only able to move about 10 meters which was very good in 1 hours work. you were shown a photo of Hotland and Sans kept telling you to teleport there. In one attempt you landed in a strange place called Temmie village, you knew you had to go back there later on.

"ok here we go" you had started to pour as much magic as you could and when you felt yourself hit the limit you closed your eyes and imagined ripping the hole and going through it when you opened them you were at Hotland right were you wanted to be in the photo.

"Yes finally, god that was so hard to learn" little did you know about the people behind you

"HUMAN HOW DID YOU GET THERE" scared by the sudden voice you turned around to see Papyrus, a very sore Undyne and Alphys

"Oh shit" and in a few more seconds you were back at snowdin

"woah were'd you end up this time buddy, you seem like you saw a ghost."

"I ended up where i was meant to for the first time, but Undyne Alphys and Papyrus was there." you were exhausted from using so much magic that day you were close to going to sleep

"AW man i wish i was there to see the reactions on there face's, haha it would've been priceless." he seemed happy with you.

"thanks Sans couldn't have do-" you saw your vision was starting to go blurry and you ended back in the void, How did you get here, you knew one thing for sure you didn't teleport here and you couldn't get back until Sans came and got you, you had used up way to much magic.

"hello again, how was your lesson, also i have another question... how has your life been since i set you free"

Knowing who's voice that was, and that Sans would come for you filled you with DETERMINATION!


Oh damn plot twist, we learn how he did this in the next chapter, also next chapter will be a little bit of talking but mostly fighting

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