Hey guys, This is an update on Dan's Story. What I am essentially going to say is, I'm starting over.
This story has been plauged by problems, mainly revolving around the ideas of there being two SAO servers. The more i thought about that, the more plot holes that came up with me wanting to keep this as close to possible as canon.
Another reason is because of books. I have recently finished A Bridge to Wiseman's Cove and am currently reading First Person Shooter. Both deal with protagonists that are very closed and need to unfold to start experiencing life and even saving those around them. I figured, this would work very well in a SAO setting.
My next reason is because I want to give this story a fresh start. As the first reviewer, CassusFacade has sayed, those ealier chapters are poorly written, and those early chapters I reckon give of a negative vibe about the story, making them stop reading or telling thier friends to avoid it. Now, the chapters have gotten better, but those first two chapters are like the plauge for this story, near impossible to get rid of.
So, you maybe wonderig where I plan to go with this story in the future. For one, I'll set the location to Japan, so I can keep it as close to canon as possible. Secondly, I will be rewriting Dan's character to be a more closed person who as the story goes on, starts to open up. Lastly, I will also be borrowing the writing style of Stee1 & Sw0rds, another SAO Fanfiction which you defintly should read.
Anyway, thank you to everyone who stuck around this long wait, and I hope to see you come over to the next one. I imagine It'll come out in about a month. So bye.
-Adro02
