A big thanks to:

Rivergoddess16

DemonRaily

your-brown-eyed-angel

Lyra Nezvanova

Empress Kiritsubo

Liz-Kaguya

Nao Hashiba

Note: I kind of forgot to tell you all that spelling and grammar are kind of out the window in these chapters… cuz I feel like almost adds to the story, if you disagree please just tell me :D

Also I'm suddenly in a rut!! It's driving me nuts but I'll try to pull myself out of it.

-------------------The Evil Evilness--------------------

The mine was a huge smelly caveish thing which the teens needed to inspect. As they walked in Hannahko clung closer to Edward, memories of her angsty childhood suddenly coming back.

"No I don't want to do into that dark room…"

The man laughed as he pushed her into the room. "You'll be in there until you give me the power I want"

"What power!!!! Let me out!!!"

Hannahko had been in that dark room for hours with lot's a horrible things happening to her. which she is now remembering…

"Hannahko are you ok?" Edward suddenly asked seeing that the Icefirewaterbutterflyprincessandallprettythings Alchemist crying. Biting her lip Hannahko looked up into Ed's eye, her eyes a deep blue green filled with fear and sadness.

"I…I'm ok"

"Well if it isn't the Icefirewaterbutterflyprincessandallprettythings Alchemist" a voice boomed suddenly (man I've been saying suddenly a lot). Hannahko let out a gasp and all the Teens looked up to see an elder man standing in front of them holding up a lantern.

"I see you have the Fullmetal with you, no matter I shall capture you again and use you for my own dark purposes" he then laughed in a very evil bad guy laugh. Ed growled putting his hand in front of Hannahko.

"You're not going to be getting HER!!!"

"Ed…" Hannahko whispered in shock at the boys defective attitude, could it be…. That he loved her?

Probably since they made out only 2 or so chapters ago…

The man laughed evilly since he's evil and evil men laugh in a evil way that only evil men can do. Is that enough evil for you? I mean he's evil in case you haven't notices yet so you're getting a large shovel of evilness shoved your way.

Evilly…

After being evil, or laughing evil, or what ever evilness this evil guy was doing, the evil guy snapped this fingers and 13 (cuz it's unlucky and unlucky stuff is evil) chimeras that all looked very creepy (and hade mostly human body parts with some sort of animal stuff on them) jumped out surrounding them. Ed and Alphonse to positions in front and back of Hannahko ready to protect her with their life.

After long fight that the author doesn't feel like writing the kids had gotten into a stand still.

Three chimera jumped out at Hannhako, giving a short yap she blasted them away with alchemy but didn't see the 4th running up behind her.

"HANNAHKO!!!!" Ed yelled jumping in front of the chimera. Pain shot threw Ed's body as the chimera handed on him.

"EDWARD!!!" Hannahko screamed as Ed lost consciousness.

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Oh noesssssss Edo is hurt o!!! he's hurt by an evil Chimera who was made by an evil man who is so evil he uses alchemy for his own evil dark purposes.

Evilly…

Ahem… ok well next time…

Songs and Singing

Broken automail (no idea how you spell that and to lazy to look it up)

Winry knows who?