Hello guys! The first writing was crappy so I decided it was best to scrap the old one and make a new one. I'm not sure if this is that good but at least I think it's better then the first. So enjoy the rewritten version! :D


Dipper shifted nervously, eyes sometimes glancing at the ice machine then would flicker back to the door. He was surehe had seen something, first the brain thing in the machine then their skeletons in the door's reflection. Add in the fact the phone wasn't working and that newspaper he had saw, he was getting seriously bad vibes...but what can he do about it? It's not like he could tell the others how he felt, they would think he was just being a scared little kid and mock him the rest of the night.

He had enough of that at home he didn't need it here.

Biting his lower lip he weighted his options, none of them really favorable, but if something was here he couldn't stand by….

" Hey come look at this, guys!" Robbie says smirking, looking over the casher counter.

"Woah!" The others mutter in awe, staring down at the chalk outlines on the ground, shaped like two elderly people.

"Dare you to lay on it.' Lee chuckles, bumping Nate jokingly.

Nate snickers; stepping forwards and wiggles his fingers mockingly. "Oh look at me I'm a dead body!"

Dipper twitched as Nate got closer to the outlines, what if there was ghost here and Nate angered them?! Before he could stop him self he jumped forward, hands out wide. "Stop!"

The others looked at him with confusion and annoyance. Seeing this he winced internally, pulling on a strained grin he hoped to resolve this without any thing happening. "I-I mean let's not do this."

Lee grinned, pointing a finger at Dipper teasingly. "Hey, this guy's scared."

Dipper looked off to the side hoping this wasn't going where he thought it was. "I'm just saying is: why tempt the fates? I mean what if this place really is…haunted?"

He tensed, waiting for their reactions.

Already he should have expected the 'Boos!' but it still hurt, after all hadn't they seen the weird going-ons in the town? All the supernatural things happening around them? Guess not.

"Ha, just take it down a notch Captain Buzz-kill." Robbie scoffs.

"But I thought I was Doctor Fun-times." Dipper mutters, he was really regretting saying anything. Maybe he should have let them do it…

"Well you're acting like Captain Buzz-kill.' Robbie says annoyance in his voice. He turned to the others. 'Right?"

Lee, Nate and Tambry, even if she was looking at her phone, nodded readily. Wendy hesitated for a moment before looking away from Dipper. "Yea, a little bit."

Dipper felt his heart contract, squeezing painfully in his chest. Wendy was agreeing with them, she wasn't going to defend him?

"Status update: Trapped in store with insane 9 year old." Tambry says flatly, typing noisily on her cell.

Dipper grid his teeth, he would show them. He stepped back and flopped him self into the inside of the chalk lines. "I'm not a 9 year old! I'm 13, technically a teen!"

They waited in silence for a moment, but nothing happened.

Come on! I was sure there something supernatural about this place why isn't it showing up?! Dipper tighten his jaw, he could feel the others looking at him likely waiting for something to happen.

"See.' Robbie scoffs, folding his arms. 'Kid's lame and a scaredy-cat. We should have left him back at your work Wendy."

Dipper waited for her to say something, to speak up for him, pull attention away from him, anything….but she just stood there.

"Maybe…maybe you're right." She mutters, leaning on her left leg and looked anywhere but Dipper.

Dipper stood up quietly, head hanging low enough for his hat to keep his face from view, he moved around the joking teens, which had already forgotten his existence, and went to the darker back part of the store. He could hear the others laughing and yelling, Mabel snoring softly in her crash-induced-nap from eating too much smile-dip, and the machine's whirling hums…

But the erratic beating of his aching heart was the loudest.

How could Wendy…how could she do that to him? Sure he could understand that because they are her friends she might side with them, if it was the other way around he might have done the same thing but it wasn't. He didn't have friends to joke with or be defended by.

He was alone.

His teeth grid again at the sound of the other's obnoxious laughing. 'Stupid teenagers, I hate them!'

He shivered suddenly and felt his body go numb. He tried to lift his arm but it stayed at his side, he wanted to scream but his mouth refused to open. 'W-What's happening?!'

'Oh that would be us, deary!'

'Wha-?'

'Oh you see dear we hate teenagers too!' The voice was that of a elderly woman's, gentle but it had a harsh tone when she said teens before turning back to normal. 'And since they are messing around in out store we are going to kill them! Isn't that lovely, child?'

'No! No it's not, my sister and fri-' Dipper paused for a moment. Was Wendy still his friend? Was she ever? No he couldn't think like that, he would solve that late right now something was wanting to kill them and a bit of embarrassment wasn't worth them dying. 'You can't kill them. Why not let us leave and we promise to not come back?'

'That just won't do, sweetie, teens are horrible and we have to punish them the right way.'

'I won't let you!'

The lights flicker violently before going out, making the others gasp.

'Sorry kid,' An elder man's voice says, though he didn't sound that sorry. 'But you won't stop us.'

Dipper felt his body lift off the ground, it was weird like when Gideon had levitated him the week before but he didn't have any way of even moving his eyes. He realized his body was glowing and watched fearfully as what he guessed was the ghosts used his body to scare the others.

He internally screamed as the others were taken one at a time, some facing a painful end.

Tambry was sucking into the security system, looking around frantically but unable to see them.

Thompson was pulled into the dancing game, the arrows slicing and piercing though his skin, soaking the bottom of the screen red.

Lee was eaten by a bird on the side of a cereal box, the bird laughing happily as it did so.

Nate was turned into a hot dog and cooked, screaming the whole time.

All that was left was Robbie, Wendy and Mabel (who had woke up at some point), all standing in a corner staring at his possessed body fearfully.

"D-Dipper! Come on Bro-bro I know you're in there, fight them!" Mabel cries, shaking as Wendy shoved her protectively behind her.

"Big-D I know you can do it, fight back dude!" Wendy says encouragingly, but even her voice had a nervous tone.

The ghosts voices just gave an echo-y laugh though his mouth.

'To late you filthy teenagers.'

Blood.

Bright red blood smeared the walls.

He couldn't move, wouldn't move. The ghosts had left his body a while ago but he still had a numb feeling in it that made it so he couldn't move.

So he just lay there, surrounded by red.


That was bad. :/ Anyway hope it was at least better then nothing (sorry for not updating in a while guys! ;-;) so R&R plz! Ta.

GWDG