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Loren:"what are you doing up here Duran?"
Eddie:"well i intended to come up here and think but then i saw you and you started playing that song so i just stood back and watched the magic happen." he said smiling.
Loren:"well okay but that's not what i meant Eddie."
Eddie:"then what did you mean?"
Loren:"how are you up here? how do you know about this place
Eddie:"oh, that what are you doing up here?."
Loren:"yeah"
Eddie:"well when i was little me and my dad use to live right over that hill and one day i felt like going for a hike and then i found this place. how about you?"
Loren:"i don't need to explain myself this is my secret spot"
Eddie:"i don't see your name anywhere up here",he said jokingly.
Loren just laughed and pointed to the tree she was she was laying against.
Eddie looked up to where she was pointing and saw what she was pointing at and laughed.
Eddie:"that doesn't mean anything that just means you have your name on a tree. not even your name it just has your initials L.T. on it.
Loren just stuck her tongue out at him and said "whatever your just jealous i did it 12 years ago.
Eddie:" you've been coming up here for 12 years?"
Loren:"no 14, i just decided to do that when i was old enough to have a pocket knife and pepper spray with me."
Eddie:" oh that makes since. so really why are you up here lo?
Loren took in a deep breath and replied with "this is where i come after i write down a song and decide if its going to be heard by anyone or i keep it for myself."
Eddie:"well if its worth anything I thought it was amazing." he said as he was looking down not wanting to make eye contact.
Loren:"thanks Eddie, that means a lot to me especially coming from you.
Eddie looked up into those deep brown eyes of hers and got lost in them. When he finally pulled himself out of the trance that he was in he realized she was waiting for an answer.
Eddie:"I'm sorry what?" he said blushing
Loren:"I asked what are did you come up here to think about?"
Eddie:"oh, I came up here to think about if im really ready to leave L.A.
Loren was shocked.
Loren:"WHAT?!" she yelled. "i mean what?"
Eddie:" I got into Baylor."
Loren was shocked, this man that she was starting to fall for was going to leave without even giving her a chance. She started to say something but then noticed he looked upset about something.
Loren:" You don't sound as happy as I thought you would be was it not the school you wanted to go to?"
Eddie:"No that's not it. Baylor was my first choice school."
Loren:" Oh my god Eddie! That's amazing! do you know how hard it is to do that?!"
Eddie:"Yeah, I know but I don't know if im ready to leave all my friends and family behind just yet.
Loren:"Eddie its okay to not be sure of something. This is a big thing this could change your life forever."
Eddie:"yeah I know but there's something else."
Loren gave him a look telling him to go on.
Eddie:"Well there's this girl that I haven't known for long but every time I talk to her even just look at her I can feel myself falling for her and I know she doesn't feel the same about me as I do for her."
Loren cared for Eddie and was upset by the thought of him with another girl but if they couldn't be more, then she would be there for him as a friend.
Loren:"Well how do you know, have you asked her?"
Eddie:"no but-"
Loren:"I want you to do something for me Eddie"
Eddie:"what?"
Loren:" I want you to walk up to this girl and tell her how you feel, and find out how she feels about you."
Eddie:"bu-"
Loren:"Eddie, if you really care about this girl let her know and don't hide your feelings from her. If she's a smart girl then she wouldn't let someone like you go. True love only comes once in a life time Eddie. Don't let it slip away."
At that moment she got a call from Steven telling her she was late for her 11:30 meeting with the label.
Loren:"Sorry about that, it was Steven I have to go, but Eddie?"
Eddie:"yeah Loren?"
Loren:" If shes smart she wont turn you down. I know I wouldn't." She got up and walked over to him gave him a kiss on the cheek and just like that she was gone.
