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Killer bee 8: Your story, but the whole Kami working for Naruto as a side kick to progress the story along isn't working for me. Kami is kami, but in this story you treat her like some OC to and insight to the readers and move the dialogue forward. Why would Kami allow herself to used in this fashion? I will continue to read to see where you take the story.

Silver: I guess you was trying to say "I like your story", Trust me Kami is more then just a O/C, I probably didn't make it clear but she was sent to help Naruto, The reason she allow herself to be used like that is because, she isn't their on her own free will, if you read chapter three she saids " Their is always someone stronger." If you want to continue my story pay attention to every word my character saids, I don't just say them to say it. Besides that, this was my favorite review, gave me things to think about.

Anonymous: Some spelling mess ups but otherwise good... And u swapped between Yugito and Samui.

Silver: Yeah I know, but I'm still flying solo since my Beta still working out some kinks in his computer. ( Face palm.) Yeah I notice I'll fix it later on, thanks for pointing it out.

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Silver: I don't know how to respond to this. I'LL CAPITALIZE MORE NEXT TIME. HAPPY?

Lednacek: You definitely need a beta. your English is bad.

avoid putting stupid things in brackets in the middle of the chapter. it upsets the rhythm of the story.

Silver: Sorry about that. I won't put any more pointless brackets[I promise], would you like for me to put the name translation of the Jutsu at the bottom?

Gold Testament:You're right about how Sasuke and Sakura make bashing them so easy, and there's so much of it that it gets a bit old after so much of it.

Silver: Yeah, I'm really big on being as random and different as possible. I've read a good fifthy stories with Sasuke and Sakura bashing. I admit at first it was really cool and bad ass now its, mehh.

That's all the review I got. If you have a problem with anything leave it in the review, I'll read it and I'll try to fix it. This is of course for your enjoyment, I most make you as comfortable as I can.


"I hate doing does review things." Silver said. Silver had a small notebook out and was taking notes of complaints. Naruto came out the kitchen with a cup of ice-cream in his hand.

"Then why do they? After all why do you care what they think?" Silver raised an eyebrow.

"Since when do you care what I do? Anyways I enjoy reading Fan-Fiction and believe me it drives me crazy seeing mistakes. I know how they feel." silver said. Silver once again began to write down. He had about 20 different things he had to fix.

"Sounds like your problem, so what are we going to do today for the author story?" Silver groaned. He completely forgot to write a small script for this part. Silver got up walking up to a cabinet, Naruto watch as he began to pull out a nice size portion of papers.

"What are those?"

"Different Omake I write during class when I'm bored. Okay let's see, Naruto and Silver go get a dog... No, Naruto gets a snip-snip..."

"No"

"Fine..." Silver kept digging. Silver found a paper at the bottom of the stack. He read through it first, a smile came to his face.

"Hey, Naruto I got it!"

"Finally," Said Naruto. Naruto walked up to Silver snatching the paper from Silver hand, which earned him an elbow to the ribs.

"What was that for?" Said Naruto. Rubbing his injured side.

"Don't snatch its rude." Said Silver snatching the paper back, Naruto turned his head.

"Hypocrite," Naruto said mumbling.

"What was that?" Said Silver his face turning red.

"Nothing, are you going to tell me what we gonna do?"

"Yes, here it is." Silver handed the wrinkle paper to Naruto. He waited as he saw Naruto face become more and happier as he kept reading.

"When do we start? Man finally something good! You've been doing all these gay video games."

"Okay, go get ready. It's," Silver looked at his black G-shock." 12:27 you got ten minutes to shower and get ready." Naruto grumble talk about cutting it short.

10 minutes later.

Naruto was finish. He was on his way towards Silver room. Trying his best to walk through the narrow halls, which were full of vases? Naruto curse,

'Why the fuck dose his moms have all this shit anyways?'

Naruto reached Silver room walking in without knocking. He found silver sitting down putting on his sneakers before standing up.

"Ready to go?" Naruto looked at Silver out-fit. Silver was wearing a white and black Chicago bull snap-back. He had a blue and white plad shirt from Hollister. He was wearing white cargo Levis with pockets on its side. Silver had the new Jordan which Naruto and he had to wait almost 6 hours! To get at foot-locker.

"Where's the party?" Silver raised an eyebrow looking at Naruto. Silver refused the urge to face-palm; no way was he going outside, on New Year's! With Naruto wearing bright orange and sandals!

Silver curse, Silver walked up to his closet, silver scratch his head as he looked around. He nodded when he found something that caught his eyes. Reaching in, he brought out a red True-religion skully hat, before also pulling out black skinny-jeans; Silver walked towards his cabinet and got a plane white-t shirt. He walked back towards his closet and pulled out plane red and white sneakers.

"Here go put that on." Naruto raised an eyebrow but went and put it on anyways. Walking back in a couple of minutes later.

"Here let me look at you." Silver said looking at Naruto from different angles. He fixed Naruto skully for that it was a little bent backwards and his spiky blond hair popped out in the front, giving him some wild looking bangs. Silver nodded before looking at the pants he gave him. Silver tried not to laugh, but had to let out a small chuckle. The skinny-jeans were a little tight on him because Naruto was a little more bulky then silver. Silver walked up to him and pulled the pants down just a little for that he looked like he was sagging but not enough to show boxers.

"Now we're talking! I hate to say it but you look kind of bad ass!" Silver said smiling at his own creation. Naruto looked himself in the mirror and nodded, he did look kind of bad ass didn't he.

"Come on Naruto, and whatever you do don't dirty those sneakers. After all I got to work for all my cloth and spend my own money." Naruto nodded.

Silver and Naruto left the room, Silver walked back in minutes later. He forgot to put on some colon. Naruto shook his head, he always forgets something. Silver walked back out.

"Let's be out." Said Silver.

"So where are we going?" Silver smirk.

"My friend having a small party at this club, I wasn't going to go but... We need a story."

"Yeah, you're doing this for your story." Said Naruto giving him the double-bunny ears. Silver didn't reply just gave a small smirk.

"Hey, there's no shame in making work fun." Silver said. Pulling out his keys, he closed the door behind him.

"So, you want to cut it here and continue it next chapter or in the Omake?" Silver thought about it.

"Yeah let's do that, in the meantime enjoy this chapter-"

"A fitting conclusion!" Finish Naruto for silver. The screen slowly turned black as both teenagers walked down the stairs.


Naruto batted Kisame samehada for what he felt was the twentieth-time. Kisame was heavily battered his cloak was long gone and he had a small gash going from his shoulder to his stomach where he was sliced earlier by Naruto. Naruto saw Kisame jump back to avoid having his arm amputated. He was a little put-off by his opponent. Naruto saw that the man's sword was like a hungry fat boy it would keep eating, till it couldn't eat no more, it will stop eating; just to eat again later.

Naruto didn't really care much for that as his chakra was not dwindled in the slightest. Naruto had long put his blades back on his back, as he found Kisame un-fit to clash swords with him.

"How you're holding up over their gyo? (1)." Kisame bristle at the name. Kisame cursed. He's been at it for a good five minute which was already long for a shinobi fight, but he hasn't landed a single blow to his opponent. Kisame knew he was holding back a great lot. He smirked when he felt samehada start feeding him chakra as his wounds slowly started to heal.

"I got to admit, you're good." Said Kisame. His shark teeth smirk didn't do anything to hide his goofy grin.

Naruto got ready for a attack as he felt Kisame chakra spike to un-imaginable levels. He was mad at himself, how couldn't he notice earlier. Every cut he has given him, is slowly but surely disappearing. Naruto filed it off to something to do with that sword of his.

" You notice huh? This thing right here gives me the ability to heal almost anything. To be honest I got to thank you to as this wouldn't be possible without your chakra." Kisame said holding his sword in his right hand. Naruto tilted his head a little to the right.

"Weird, giving me your sword secrets. I thought I was cocky, anyways I don't think you should thank me after all you just threw your whole life away."

Kisame took a step back. Positioning his sword in front of him Kisame barked out.

"Explain yourself!"

No way was Naruto going to tell him, for what for he could try to counter it? Deciding he'll just drag the fight on until Kisame drop dead in front of him.

"I didn't think a fish could live after being taken out of water, apparently I was wrong." Kisame sweet-drop. What was wrong with this kid, but for a minute he felt that sentence was more than an insult, like it actually meant something.

Naruto wasn't good on sublimital hints. He really wanted to let Kisame know of his predictament, but that would not help him. Naruto lowered his head he didn't want to come off as Cocky... Naruto easily backfist a speeding Kisame as he tried to attack him when he believe he wasn't paying attention.

Kisame came to a skidding stop. He spat-out some blood on the water.

" Itachi-san will be bleeding from his eyes if he saw this." Said Kisame.

Naruto eyes narrowed at the last part. That name... Before Kisame knew it he was being gripped by the throat the air forcebly being denied from his begging lungs. Kisame tried desperally to free himself but it was of no use the grip was steel.

" Where is Itachi? " Kisame made a hand gesture signalling Naruto he couldn't speak. Naruto loosen the grip, but was kicked away as soon as his grip got loose. Kisame was rubbing his neck where a imprint of Naruto hand was before-hand.

Kisame smirked. " Only thing you can value is information. I'll die before tellng you where he's at." Kisame smiled. When he saw the murderous glint in the kids eyes. He had to keep pushing all he needed for the kid to mess up once.

" Itachi told me something about a kid he once fought. How he faced the kid in battle.." Naruto eyes where flashing red. " How he easily defeated the kid, and captured the kid in his most powerful technique, made the kid watch as he stabbed the person the kid valued the most... I think he said the kid called her... What was her name again?" Kisame racked his head for informaton.

" Don't!" Naruto voice was noticibly deeper being influence by the Kyuubi chakra. Kisame smirked he had him.

" Oh yeah, I think it was was... Nami, or as you called her Nami-chan." That was it red liquid chakra exploded out of Naruto. Without warning Naruto attacked. Kisame lifted his sword, flipping over Naruto head he grabbed the kids collar forcebly smashing the kid against rocks from one of the fallen bridges. Naruto smashed into the stone.

Kisame waited patiently for the kid to recover, he jumpes away as a red chakra arm came at him making clawing motions. He used his sword to try to absorb the hand but everytime he cut a piece it will reform again. Realising it was useless.

" He told me how he stabbed her, again, again and again!" Kisame kept on with the taunting. Naruto chakra spiked to new levels he came at Kisame now with two-tails behind him. Naruto attack were more wild and lest organize and it was causing him as Kisame was picking at his defenses instead of attacking he just waited for the wild swings before lifting his sword. Naruto was now down to 1 tail from the amount of chakra kisame took but the secound one quickly regrew.

Naruto jumped back, apparently he notice this even though Kisame wasn't sure if it was the kid or the tailed beast inside him.

" What you must of not love her? I just insulted her, he even told me he was planning to rape her! He was going to make you watch too, as he entered her, I bet she would of like that." He frowned when Naruto didn't respond infact he notice the kids red eyes where dilated and flashing black everynow and then before settling on red.

Kisame jumped away as he was force to avoid the chakra explosion from Naruto body. He saw Naruto was now on one knee holding his head before raising his head and releasing a giant roar!

" What the fuck is up with this kid?"

Naruto was holding his head after all, his mind was the battle zone of two holy being.


Inside Naruto mind.

' Hakai, Kyuubi stop it.' He hears Tsukune shout.

" Hakai, gve it up its no use." Screamed Tsukune as Hakai again smashed against the crystal barrier.

Naruto was infront on the kyuubi cage. Their was dark-red chakra surrounding him. Their was a large amount of youki behind him forming a large barrier, which only allowed you to see whats happening but almost inpenetrable to get in and actually try to do anything. She hated this, the kyuubi was using Naruto hate agains't him and if their's one thing Naruto has is hate. Tsukune and Hakai have been trying to desperally break in, the last thing they wanted was for Naruto to lose control.

" Haha, give up its useless. Naruto is mine for now!" Kyuubi said. Their was a malicious growl escaping his throat. Hes been waiting for this, this very moment, the time somebody will be stupid enough to piss off Naruto enough to give in, to give in to his hatred... The kyuubi smile bearing his sharp teeth, he could feel the hate everywhere, it was almost over-whelming, to think this kid could posses so much anger, for a minute Kyuubi almost felt proud to be sealed inside the kid, the key word being almost.

Hakai curse this wasn't good at all, Naruto always had a tendency to be unstable, who knows what will happen if the kyuubi influence him any further. She knew it wasn't only Kyuubi causing this, no, the beast was only taking adavantage of the situation. Hakai knew who she really needed to stop, was out their, not in here.

" Stop this at once, Kurama!" The kyuubi eyes enlarge, the beast youki spike to un-imaginable levels. His massive tail's sprung through the bars on a straight path to brutally break the goddess. Before the attack can go any further a blue shield was form before the tail's smacked agains't a barrier made of blue chakra giving the Kyuubi a small electrical shock, he pulled his tails back.

" I swear to Kami, if this seal didn't interfere, I would've killed you."

" You don't got to swear to me, anything." Hakai responded. Kyuubi raised a eyebrow.

" You know what Kami I'm talking about, the real Kami. The real creator." Kyuubi said.

" What is he talking about Hakai?" Tsukune. Hakai stayed quiet for a minute.

" Your more of a nuisance then I made you out to be. To answer your question Tsukune," Hakai jumped down from her spot on the barrier. " I am, Kami, I created earth, but I didn't create everything, their are many being like me, some stronger then others, then their's the Kami hes talking about, he was the true creator he invented everything, when I mean everything I say everything, he created me and all the other Kami, I didn't believe anybody knew about him, to tell you the truth I myself thought he was a myth, till he personaly came to me and ask me to come to earth, the planet I myself created, Apparently he believe their's a disturbance here, plus some other things..."

" Which are?"

Hakai didn't answer instead turning around and once again smashing against the chakra wall. Tsukune sighed knowing the conversation was over. She looked closely and saw that while Hakai was telling her the story, Naruto was becoming more and more wild. His hair looked more spiky and longer, his nails were growing before turning into claws and his once black mesh shirt was ripping from the pressure. Tsukune narrowed her eyes when she saw the tubes that carried the Kyuubi chakra glow red and shooting in a random directon. That was before she broke the pipe and bending the front for the chakra was stopped.

" Where do you think your going?"

" It doesn't matter, Naruto would soon give in." Said the kyuubi hes been playing mind game with the kid, sending him the images of that faithful night, where the blood red sharingan was over him, before Itachi began to cut off every single limb from the poor girls body before switching it to slitting her throat and cutting her head open and grabbing the girls brain the juices drpping from his hand. He had to admit this Itachi kid was a real sadist when he wanted to be.

' No, please don't do this.' Naruto would mumble everynow and then, the Kyuubi could here the fear and desperation in the voice and take pleasure in the sound. The sound of a person begging and wailling for forgiveness or to show compassion, something that was ironicaly something ninja barely ever show.

Tsukune frown, she knew what the kyuubi was trying to pull. She had to agree with Hakai the kyuubi was nuisance. This was basically the basic lay-out of Naruto mind. We had her room which was located near the back of his head where his dreams were located this she controled not to say she can influnce them but she can toy with them a little to provide Naruto so information he overlooked. Tsukune also made sure that no bad dreams, with Nami got through or that will be trouble.

Then it was the kyuubi room which was located in the front which controled Naruto senses and will, even though the fox didn't care much for it, the kyuubi was forced to provide for Naruto with the seal, which explains Naruto better sight, hearing and smell. What she really feared about that was that he was a giant influence on the kids will, this was a huge problem with the kyuubi picking at it for years, who knew what the beast was planning.

The last one, and the most important. This room was a mystery to her, she never been allowed to come withing ten-feets of it. Everytime she came near it, all she heard was, strange screaming and loud crying it was mind boggling her to what can be in their. What ever it was, their was nothing good coming from it as it had many chains surrounding it and a giant weird skull seal on it.

Tsukune got up, and walked a couple of feets away. " Hakai, come here please," Hakai jumped off the barrier again and landed infont of her. " I have away to retrieve Naruto, we only got one shot, don't ask question as soon as I make the opening you'll jump in and get the kid. Is that understood?"

" Hai."

" Okay." Tsukune jumped back before getting on one knee, taking in a deep breath and slowly releasing it. Lowering her head. Hakai could of swore she heard chanting but didn't give it much thought and focused on getting Naruto.

" Here I go." Tsukune voice was cracking changing from angelic to demonic. Hakai covered her eyes as a explosion cause her to loose her vision for a minute, when she re-opened them she was mesmerized at what she saw standing. Tsukune gold hair was now a dirty red that reached behind her knees, her creamy skin has now turned peach black with red scripture going from under her neck to her lower torso. She grew to bat like wings that were spread out widely behind her, her eyes went from gold to a dirty silver color and her mouth was open showing off two large fangs and a nice row of sharp teeth. Hes lips were painted red which gave her a very evil apperance.

Even after that her clothes was still on only that the Kimono had to large tairs in the back from the wings that grew.

" Stop looking at me, and get ready! I can only hold this form for so long." Tsukune said. Hakai nodded.

Tsukune took out a kunai cutting her neck a little and let the blood flow down her torso. Everytime the blood reach one of the scripture it'll light up before the blood was absorb into the strange writting. After the blood was gone the wound would close before the words began to move about. They spread to her wings, over her arms and crawled over her legs, then the words sizzle before being absorb into her body.

" Mondaiji:Akuma Noroi."(1)

Hakai jumped away as she felt what ever that thing was isn't something she wants to be near with. How right she was, Tsukune raised one hand, her wings turned and pointed forward. Three black balls of concentrated energy began to gather at the tip of her wings and her finger.

" This is nothing." With those few words the beams shot out before connecting with the barrier it fought with it for a minute before braking through and it continued before reaching the kyuubi cage and hitting the fox, the beam was strong enough to blast the kyuubi to the rear of his cage, a huge bang was heard before a very puppy like whine was heard and a huge vibration echoed across the dungeon, the Kyuubi most have fallen.

Hakai was wide eyes at the display of power the phoenix girl showed, it was amazing its true you cant judge a book by its cover. Hakai not waisting any time dashed forward grabbing the still comatoes Naruto. She jumped back just as the barrier came up again before a loud roar was heard followed by the sounds of something big running. The kyuubi big head smaked against the cage. Hakai looked closely and saw the kyuubi had a large cut near its shoulder which was dripping crimson blood.

" How dare you! Mark my words I will kill you! Then I'll eat you, no I'll rip your flesh little by little and let you feel the pain," Kyuubi said a grin coming to his face. " Then I'll yank your head off and sink my canines into your skull, oh yes, I can almost taste you."

Tsukune didn't bad a eye. Walking forward she easily enter straight through the barrier. She walked right up to the beast looking it straight in the eyes.

" Sit." She said it low but the Kyuubi heard. The kyuubi raised a eyebrow, who did this little fly think she was!

" Listen hear, only because you manage to injure me-" He was cut off.

" I SAID SIT! " The kyuubi tremble before laying down on both its hind legs. Tsukune gave a nod her eyes still glowing.

" The next time you try to take control of Naruto-kun, I will do more then just give you a flesh-wound. Is that understood," The beast didn't answer but the slow decline of his head, told the whole story. " good, now be a good boy and take a nap, I'll take control of the fight."

Tsukune walked away from the beast. She walked straight up to Hakai.

" How is he?" she said the transformation still up but her voice still angelic. Hakai was working on Naruto body, he was trembling and his heart was beating quickly his eyes wide and un-blinking.

" He's fine just, just in shock. What is this I hear about you continuing the fight?" Hakai asked.

" Yeah, I'll take control of the boys body, kind of like what the kyuubi did only I'll be in control instead of just a wild monster."

" You'll think Naruto would approve of this?"

" He lost the right to approve anything when he let his anger get the best of him. In the mean time you work on him, and I'll go finish the shark-boy off, this shouldn't take long." With that the woman disappeared.

" Wake up Naruto." Said Hakai forcing her energy into his chest. The pure right chakra entered his chest. Naruto gave a cough, then another, before finally gasping for air. He was awake.

" What happened?"

" You lost control."

" I see, where's Tsukune?"

" She went to go finish your fight, you should rest after all you did just come out of mental shock, its a surprise this place is still up anyways." Naruto ignored her getting up.

" She doesn't have to do that, its my fight."

" Was your fight." Said Tsukune a couple of feet away from him.

" No still is, so who was the lucky bastard that caused you to you'se that transformation?"

" doesn't matter anyways. If you want to fight go ahead, I'm gonna go lay down, this think uses up a lot of my reserves." With that the phoenix goddes passed out. Naruto caught her before hitting the floor.

" Hakai, take care of her, I got to go finish some business." With that he flashed away in a bright light.

" Now I'm all alone," The kyuubi gave a small growl at the comment. " You don't count fuzz-butt." Said Kami before jumping on the fox head with Tsukune and healing the Kyuubi injury. She layed right behind the beast ears. " So boring, I need to get some action." Said Hakai with a blush.

" The kyuubi looked to where the goddes was at, he heard her small snoring and knew she fell asleep. He let out a huge breath out through his nose. " All I want is freedom." Said the Kyuubi falling asleep. He didn't notice the phoenix girl small ajar eyes, and the smile that came to her face after hearing that.


Outside world.

Kisame jumped back for the what seem like the twentieth time. Ever since that kid had that weird tantrum hes been coming at him more hungry and wild. He looked around and notice that they have done quite some damage to the surrounding. Their were many craters, all made by his body. Kisame akatsuki cape destroyed only some clothing were left. He looked at Naruto, he notice the kid hasn't attacked, that was strange.

Naruto jumped back, he was once again clutching his head in pain. The shroud began to recede back into his body. Kisame raised a eyebrow, whats wrong with this kid? One minute he's coming at him crazily, next he standing infront of him, his hair covering his eyes not moving at all.

" So you finally snapped out of it? I didn't think Nami would've like to be avenged by a mindless beast."

Naruto eyes glowed from behind his hair. Naruto raised his hand, kisame got ready to defend himself, only for Naruto to brush his hair backwards. He pushed his spiky bangs back over his head.

" You crossed the line, but my respect goes to you, I didn't think anyone would be able to get a hand on my emotion so quickly. But because of that you've just threw away your life. I have to kill you now, I got other places to be," Said Naruto raising his head. The bloody sight of the Sekai pearing back into Kisame eyes. " Trust me, you'll die quickly."

Naruto stood still, one of his blade in his hand the other still over his shoulder, kisame charged.


Sasuke & Team Gai.

Haku frowned behind her porcelain mask. She having a little trouble defeating the Konoha shinobi after these new people joined. To be honest she was running low on chakra, shes been holding the technique up for over thirthy minutes now and the affect was finally starting to show. The ice was beginning to melt and every time she jumped to another window her speed was slowler and the image was blurry. She dought she'll be able to last more then 10 minutes if she stayed like this.

" Uchiha, I think its working." Said Neji. The Uchiha name being said distastefully and with nothing but resent. Sasuke notice this but didn't care to comment. Hes been throwing nothing but fireballs at the mirrors trying to make it weaker. Then after that Lee will hit it with his strongest shot. They have been able to brake 3 mirriors that were all replaced in secounds, they knew the ninja couldn't keep it up forever.

" Huh, smart but I got things hidden down my sleave too." Haku said. The first time she spoke during the whole interaction and took Neji, Sasuke and Lee a good secound to realize it was a girl and another minute to get over the embarrasment of being on the losing end of a female.

Haku let the technique drop. The ice shattered all around them before they fell to thr ground in little freckles of snow. She appeared on the other side of them. The now identified girl was just standing their looking at them. She didn't move.

" It was about time really, I was getting kind of bored," Said Hanabi. She wasn't really doing nothing for the group just standing there un-fazed by anything that has been happening. Hanabi removed her arms from the positioned crossed around her chest, she begam to walk forward. " From now on I will be your opponent."

" As you wish," Said Haku, she gave the girl a polite small bow. Hanabi didn't bother to return the gesture knowing that the girl was just mocking her. Haku straighten herself. " That was rude, I thought you was from a noble clan, for you to not to accept my bow was very... Smart, because you see in the shinobi world their is no thing as nice gesture or honor."

" Thanks for the advice lady, but I was taught that in the academy. Now hurry up and get ready to fight." Said Hanabi she settle into a Hyuuga junken stance. Haku didn't responed, instead she raised her hand slowly before grabbing her mask giving it a little tug, she pulled it off her face. She looked at the inside of the mask their was a small seal on the inner plate. Haku looked at the seal for a minute before completly removing it and tossing it away. The mask hit the ground and shattered.

" I'm finally out, about fucking time, I"ve been wearing that shit for years! To think Zabuza-teme would even dare put some seal on me, I'll fucking kill the bastard, that fucking cock-sucking faggot! When I get my hand on him," Hanabi raised a eyebrow at the un-masked assasin. It was like she was a whole different person. " And what do we got here? A Hyuuga how intresting. Tell me girl what is your name?"

Hanabi was a little taken back, what happned to the soft talking girl that was infront of her. She looked to wear the mask was and figured it had something to do with it. " My name is Hyuuga Hanabi, future heir off the Hyuuga clan." She said the name loud and proud. The girl infront of her nodded.

" I see, well if you are what are you doing out here? I didn't think the Hyuuga would be stupid enough to let their heir out. Expecially since their are no body guards around that I sense, unless that kid is in charge and if he is, man are you in for a lot of trouble." Neji felt angry at the barb. Nobody underestimated his fighting ability. He charged only to be cut off by a speeding Lee.

Lee went all out on the woman, he sent everything form high kicks, to knees, jabs, hooks, uppercut and even elbow. The girl easily avoiding any and all attacks by either ducking or plain out over powering with her hands.

" Your good, but why would you fight for him?" Said Haku, leaning back to avoid a kick to the chin. Lee didn't answer instead he did a wide spinning back fist, that cost him as when he turned his back Haku showed a great amount of speed and hit the back of his neck and a kick to the lower spine area. She was a little surprised when the kid still stood up, that should've knocked him out, but hey shit happens.

" Take back what you said about Neji being weak!" Shouted Lee. He dropped on one knee and coffed out some blood. Haku raised a eyebrow.

" Why?"

Lee attacked again dizzy and sloppy he was getting beat, badly. His jab was to weak the elbow not straight enough and he payed for that as Haku would block the jab before hitting taking out a needle and hitting stabbing it into a pressure point in his arm leaving it limply on the ground. So far he had about six needle sticking out of him, he was on the floor now, not being able to use any of him muscle.

" I'll ask again, why do you fight for him?"

" That isn't exactly a soup question, is it?"

" No it is not."

" I fight for him because you called him weak," Said Lee a smirk on his face. " I am his rival, he might not admit it but he knows I am, if you call him weak and hes stronger then me, although I hate to admit it, the fact that you refuse to acknowledge him, means that you'll consider me invisible, something I can't allowe anyone to do!"

Haku raised a eyebrow. That was really... Stupid, his funeral she took out a Kunai ready to finish him off before a sharp pain went through her mind. She flinched for a little bit but was able to hold on to the kunai and deflect the on-coming kunai that was about to impale her. I guess I still need to get use to not having the mask long, after long it's been almost four years since she took it off. She looked at the glass on the floor. That thing was like a curse a curse she was scared to remove. But now she knew was the time.

" That isn't very nice, attacking a girl when she's not looking." Said Haku. She was looking at Hanabi out streched hand. Hanabi looked to he rleft as Neji appeared with Lee's body.

" Take him and the Uchiha back to Tazuna house, they'll be able to recover their. The Uchiha had chakra exhuastion and Lee, well broken." Neji didn't like it but nodded and picked up Lee, and told the Uchiha to follow him after all he could still move. Sasuke looked one last time as Haku, his eyes flashed to the Sharingan one tomoe in each eye, what he saw made him blink a couple of times, as he jumped away. Sasuke jumped after Neji.

Hanabi finally sighed and stretched her muscle. " Getting comfortable I see, ain't that cute." Said Haku. Hanabi looked at her and smirked. She activated her byakuugan.

" You cant fool me, I could see right through your desguised. What is it really?" Said Hanabi earning a surprised looked from Haku.

" That shows me to underestimate the eyes of a Hyuuga," She said teasenly. " If you must know, I got a personality disorder, meaning I got to personality inside of me, that masked was used to separate us, but now I'm myself, I hated being that bitch she was fucking retarted and always wanted to be nice, stupid whore,"

Hanabi asked herself if she knew she was calling herself all those names.

" Anyways for a long time Zabuza-teme knew about this, he felt that if he wanted a good weapon he didn't want one that was split, it drove him crazy when I changed personalities out of the blue. I was a loose cannon didn't know when I was going to blow up and loose control of my parents, the way I did and ended up killing my parents all those years ago, sucks to be them. It was even worse when I was on my period so, Zabuza went to a seal master in the villiage hidden in the rain and asked him to 'fix' me. The man did but what Zabuza didn't know was that the man instead of just making the seal regulate my emotion, he completly seperated me from the Haku, he basically split are mind in half putting me in one side and locking me away and Nice Haku in the other side and leaving her to control,"

Haku took a minute to catch her breath. " And it wasn't ti'll just a minute couple of minute ago when you broke the seal, or it wore out after so many years, It really doesn't matter which one occured I'm just glad I'm out."

Hanabi had one question. " So where is nice Haku." Adding emphasis on the word nice, as after all the nice Haku did try to kill them.

" Oh, She still hear," Pointing to her mind. " Someplace but for know, you got me to deal with, in reality I don't really want to fight you, how about this I go that way," Said Haku pointing some where in the direction of a mountain. " And you go check on your friends."

Hanabi looked at her strangly, if she didn't know this girl was crazy shw probably would've fought her... But she did knew she was crazy, and she really didn't want to fight a woman that just easily disable Lee, someone she had no dought would beat her in a Tai-jutsu match. So with that Hanabi gave teh strange lady one last look before jumping away.

She smiled at the choice the girl choose, she would be one good shinobi one day, after all there is no pride, honor, or integrity when it came to the shinobi life. She was actually looking forward to fighting her in the near future if possible.

" Now, I think I felt a huge built of chakra in that direction before she sense Zabuza-teme chakra almost disappear. She wished he was dead but knowing them Raiga probably already felt it and is running away with him... Right?


Kakashi & Zabuza.

Zabuza looked down at his chest, the electricity still sparkling around in his chest, he smiled. He could've dodged it but he didn't he wondered why, was it because he lost his way? Working with akaktsuki was fun and all but, what he wanted for the world was different from what they did. He always knew he was going to die, but he also knew he was going to die because he wanted to. He looked down and his vision blured but he stayed awake. He looked up at Kakashi sharingan, in those eyes he saw something spark the color of it made him remember all the blood he spilled coming out the academy the people hes killed.

" This is your end Zabuza." Said Kakashi calmly about to rip his hand out, but couldn't Zabuza was holding it by the wrist leaving it stuck were it was.

" This feeling I want to remember it, the pain, the numbness, my heart barely audible, this is what I want to feel. This is nirvana apsolute bliss, I guess is true you never really lived, untill you die." Kakashi payed attention, after all a mans last words are always the most significant.

" You Kakashi, gave me this feeling,and maybe one day you'll get to feel, what I'm feeling right now. A demon being taken down by a human, what a joke but I ain't angry or nothing," Zabuza collapse on both his knees his hand still gripping Kakashi arm. " I am actually thankfull. I just wished I could've done shit differently, maybe instead od joining akatsuki I could've traveld the world with Haku, maybe remove her seal, I never really liked it, she was to predictable, but hey every-man dies with some regrets right? Can I ask you a favor," Kakashi nodded even though he knew he really didn't want to.

" Take.. this ...blade, Ill... help... you defeat him..." Zabuza was breathing heavy but still talking.

" Who, what person?"

" The... One... And... Only... shi no tenchi. Don't trust that guy Kakashi, he's going to do some stuff to this world. The real reason I want you to take this is because, I won't sleep in piece into that guy si killed... By my blade...haha" With a Demonic laugh. One of the most famous members of the seven swordsman of the mist fell over and died. A hand still in his chest, and a vice grip around the person forearm.

Kakashi looked at him for a minute, ripping his hand out with a 'shink'. He flicked his hand to get the blood off his gloves. He walked up to the blade, he reached with his still bloody hand and gripped the handal. Then everything came to life. The blood on his hand began to slowly travel down the blade all taking a different direction, Kakashi felt a little of his chakra be sucked into it. The blade began to morth, it became more skinny but remeined the same length its knife looked change to appear more like a Katana and the whole at the end remained, the handal wedge and became like a bras-knuckle with four holes to put your fingers through. The bottum had a picture of a weird swirling Sharingan. The blade had four designs. Their was three sharingan on the metal itself all in order, one had only one tomoe, the other had two, the last one closer to the handal had three.

Kakashi inspected the design, he turned on his Sharingan and the first three began to glow a pale red and the tomoe inside began to spin. He notice the back with the swirling design didn't glow. 'So it tells me the level of the Sharingan, so far I got three tomoe's in each eyes, this explain these three lighting up, so this one at the end most be the Magekyo sharingan.' He turned the blade around and saw a carving of the nine-tails fox looking at the moon, under it their was another eye only this one didn't look like a sharingan it had rings and a lizard like look to it. ' Is that another eye? And can I get it?' Said Kakashi seeing somebody coming his way he but the Katana over his shoulder like he used to do when he was in the Anbu black ops.

Infront of him landed Gai, he had a couple of scartches here and there but for the most part he looked fine. " What happen to your guy, Raiga?"

" He left." Plain and simple.

" Why?"

" I don't know, he looked in this direction, gave a small sigh and just left the batttle field."

" Strange." He looked to where Zabuza was at only to see a girl their, she looked at him gave him a small smile, he couldn't tell if it was fake as the girl disappeared with his body in a shushin of wind and ice.

" Where's Naruto?" Asked Gai.

" I think he still fighting, come on lets go over their just in case he needs back up."

" And that sword?"

Kakashi reached out and grabbed it and gave it a twirl for Gai to see. " This old thing? Its a gift, from somebody that has truly lived." Said Kakashi.

Gai looked at him strangly but didn't get anymore into it before jumping in the direction of Naruto signature. Which was huge by the way.

" We better hurry, I thought I felt it, earlier." Gai faced when though a state of fear before he dashed even quicker. Kakashi was right on his tail, remembering his fight with Zabuza.

' I wonder what he ment with Naruto, that I better watch out with him.'

5 minutes later

Kakashi and Gai arrived on the scene the many crater didn't seem to bother them, as they were to scared by the amount of killing intent. Naruto was a couple of feet away from Kisame, Kakashi saw that the Man was obviously on the losing side as he was on his last leg, literly on his last leg, one of Kisame leg was either broken or torn-up, the man was only on his right foot his sword on the left side to keep him from tripping over. Kakashi was more surprised that Naruto didn't have a single scratch on him.

" I guess he has it under control." Gai. kakashi ignored him. He notice that Naruto eyes were different and he was covering one side. Kakashi had a sudden flashback about what Sasuke told him about the technique Naruto used to finish Zabuza, the first time they met in battle.

" Gai, Lets go!" He said grabbing Gai by the colar of his jump suit and sprinting backwards. This wasn't good they still needed a good one and a half yards to escape the blast radius.

" We have to hurry, we only got a couple of seconds." Then it happen a huge explosion echoed. Kakashi cursed. Gai looked back their was thousands of trees and rocks coming behind them, he grabbed Kakashi.

"Hold on. First gate: Open." They were gone!


Naruto

Naruto looked at the handicapped Kisame. Their was almost no emotion in his voice when he said these words.

" Everybody has dreams, but only real people make them come true!"

Seika Geijutsu: Kokuren sienaru hi

The peach black fox phoenix of hell spread his wings shooting into the air, it gave a large roar!

" This is Arion! The fox bird of fire, Kisame meet the creature made by Demeter the ruler of life and death. It's said he set this same planet on fire two thosands years ago. The fire lasted forthy years I can't produce nothing that strong but this is still strong enough to kill you! Say hello to kami for me, wait you wont be able to!"

The attack hit its target. The attack lasted longer then it did the last time after Naruto practiced it for so long. The heat was starting to sting Naruto after alll he was within the blast radius, only thing stopping it from killing him was that the technique was his Chakra, that didn't stop the rocks from smashing into him everynow and then.

Naruto curse as he felt his eyes begin to burn and the blood pour out even quicker. He decided that passing out because of blood lost wasn't really heroic, after all the use of the Kyuubi chakra was still affecting his body, plus the mental strain from being forced into conciousness by Hakai, Naruto finally allowed the attack to give in. He waited a minute till the cloud of dust cleared and for his vision to return. He found Kisame in a crater or what was left of him anyways. To be honest Naruto was a little surprised even this much remain, even though it was only a head, but still. Jumping down Naruto grabbed the head looked into the dead eyes and smiled.

" I wonder where your sword went, doesn't matter really. The sword samehada was, a piece of shit, great quality but a piece of shit." Naruto talked to the body piece. he was basically the embodiment of chakra why did he need a blade that stole it? Anyways grabbing the head he took a scroll, and seald it inside it.

Naruto looked at the scroll it was a little heavier now that the head was in it. What a lot of people didn't know that the object you seal inside a scroll it would be sealed and easier to carry but the mass of it remained or infact transfer to the scroll, this was the reason ninja didn't carry more then two, the scroll only changed the size making it more travel worthy if it could cover weight too then people will seal everything in it, from kunai tools, to even houses, he wanted to fix that but he was never really into sealing. Naruto put the thought away for another day as, Kakashi and Gai appeared infront of him.

" Where's Zabuza?" Naruto asked.

" Dead." Kakashi answered.

" And his blade?" Naruto said his eyes narrowing at the katana on Kakashi back.

" Gone."

" I see," Said Naruto. He gave the blade one last glance but turned his eyes to Gai. " And Raiga, he obviously didn't die, especially not to someone like you."

" He fled the seen." Gai said, not at all bothered by the Jab at his skills. Naruto nodded, just before falling on his knees blood dripping from his mouth, Kakashi was quick by his side.

" Are you okay?"

Naruto pushed him off him, he used his hand to get back up. " I'm fine. Lets go, we need to go back to Tazuna house, to pick are things up and go back home."

" Why? Are you in a hurry, we could stay till tomorrow and leave early in the morning, plus its been a long day and you need to rest." Said kakashi, showing some real concern for his student, after all he's still is his sensei son.

Naruto looked at him nodded. " Alright." Naruto said about to jump up in the direction of the villiage only to trip but be was caught by Kakahsi again, Kakshi was carrying Naruto piggy back. " I said I was fine."

" Yeah, but since when did you give me orders? Anyways lets head out we don't got anytime to waist." Naruto hid his smirk but complied after all he was tired.

The three ninja arrived at the old beach house in a couple of minutes. Kakashi set Naruto down after carrying him the whole way over here, receiving a small thank you from Naruto. That was strange he didn't think Naruto would be able to give him anything but a evil eye, thats already two things hes given me this mission. Kakashi thought to himself thinking of his eyes, and in away with out him I wouldn't have this blade either.

' Then why should I be worried about him? Zabuza thinks I need this thing to no dought kill him in the near future but for what? Was Naruto planning something that Zabuza knew about? Anyways now is not the time to talk about it, Hokage-sama gonna have a cow, when I tell him everything that happened in this C-rank mission.'

Kakashi sighed at the thought of all the paper-work he was gonna have to hand in. The door was opened by a smilling Sakura.

" Kakashi-sensei! Naruto-kun, and eye-brows, your alive. I'm so glad I thought you died!" Said Sakura getting a little teary and running over and giving Kakshi a hug before braking away and moving in to give Naruto one, apparently he didn't notice as she felt him stiffen when her arms were around him, before he relaxed but he didn't make a move to return the embrace. Sakra hold on to him for a while longer. Thats when she remembered.

" Your other bushy brow sensei, right? Well we really need to get him to a hospital, he was hurt badly." Gai eyes widen bursting into the house to see his most prized student.

" Are you tired Naruto? Theirs a room I made for you, I thought you was gonna come back un-concious again," Naruto raised a eyebrow at this, to the fact that she made his bed or that she thought he was gonna be knocked out, nobody knew. " If not you could go eat, Tsunami was able to cook up something good for yah return."

" Its okay, I'm gonna go to sleep." Said Naruto emotionally cold, brushing right through her.

" Okay..." A little sad at the fact that Naruto didn't take up her offer on the food, and that his voice was so cold.

" Don't worry about it, I'm sure he noticed you cared, hes just that type of person," Said Kakashi scracthing the back of his head. " So you mentioned food?"

Sakura smiled at what she heard. " Yeah she made some really good fried fish, and all these other sea food dishes."

They walked inside.

Later that night.

Haku just finished digging Zabuza grave a couple of minutes ago. She been staring at the garve stone which she made of ice with he rown chakra, Ill only last as long as she was alive. She didn't speak any words just stared.

" It's rude to stare." Haku.

" You mean what you've been doing the whole time?"

" True, but un-like you I know this person."

" Did you? You seen him and talked to him but did you know him?"

" I don't understand."

" Who does? Anyways my name is Naruto."

" Nice to meet you Naruto, I'm Haku."

" I have a proposal, to be frank its more of a deal." Haku raised a eyebrow.

" I'm listening."

" Here what we gonna do..."


The next day.

Team seven and Nine were now on the gate of the villiage. There was only one person to see them off and that was Tsunami. Apparently the villiage blame them for destroying the bridge... Ain't that a bitch?

" I see you, I'm sorry my father acted so unkindly, its just he was working on that bridge for a long time, now we got to start it all over again, its very tiring." Said Tsunami.

" No problem." Said Kakashi, the others could care less, excluding Sakura who felt a little bad for them.

" I wish you the best, please return to visit someday." Nobody nodded. With that they turned and walked away.

" Where were you last night Naruto?" Kakashi asked. " I walked into your room to remind you to wake up but you wasn't their." Naruto looked at him from the corner of his eye.

" I was out." Said Naruto, Kakshi knew the conversation was over. Sasuke looked at Naruto he saw the two blades on the kids back. Then he noticed Kakashi also had a blade.

" Where did you get that, Kakashi?" Naruto ears perked up at the mention of the blade, of course he already knew but he just wanted to be assured.

" Somewhere." Naruto smiled, apparently Kakashi also knew how to end a conversation with only giving a answer. Naruto saw his team. The Hyuuga girl would look at him every now and then, the Male pale eye kid will just keep turning on and off his byakuugan, he thought it was for enemies but he noticed him counting he filed it off as eye training or something. He saw the Sensei carrying one of them, the kid had many bandages here and there and was under some medication to reduce the pain.

Naruto mined wandered, he thought of his encounter with the girl.

' You better follow through, after all I really don't want to kill you.'


Back at the villiage.

Tazuna was at his house drawing another blue print for the bridge making it a little different, he decided he wanted it instead of having pillars to support it he'll make it go over the water and connect from land to land, this will be harder to make as only ninja villiage will be able to get the technology to accomplish this. This was for he could have more then one boat pass under it making trade better and not interrupting the cargo that was passing through the bridge less, as he had to lift and lower the bridge everytime a boat came.

Tazuna jumped as he heard a thud behind him, he turned around. He gasped. Standing their was a girl dressed in all black. She was wearing a mask made of ice so it was easily see through and he could see the pretty face, but the cold brown eyes told him a different story. The girl walked up to the table looking over him at the blue print, she nodded.

" Its that the new bridge?"

Tazuna gave a nod, to scared to talk.

" I see, well tell me Tazuna what if I told you I could help this thing become a reality, and make the wave villiage something not to be messed with?"

Tazuna didn't like the tone, but he was desperate, he needed this thing built, if not say goodbye to the wave villiage. The girl smiled at the tone in his voice.

" Okay, I got proposal for you, more of a deal really."

" I'm listening."


Thats a rap...

Finally, I had the biggest writter block trying to end this fucking shit! I'll continue the author note next chapter, to tired plus I need to write it out first.

So I listen to the complaints and try'd to fix them, what do you think?

Leave it in a review what you didn't like.

Name of jutsu.

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2. Cursed child: Demonic curse.

3. Holy arts: Un-holy fire.

Pretty much it.

Thats the end of the Wave ark, and yes Tazuna only had a small part in the ark, but lets face it he wasn't all that important to begin with. He'll play a bigger role next time.

I'm starting the Chunin Exam next chapter... Maybe, I get scatter brain sometimes and my ideas just go everywhere. I actually might do a mission next chapter..

Should I do a flashback? Of what Naruto did when he was away. This will only be a piece not a whole chapter, after all I love leaving you guessing.

I know its sounds corny but I add cross overs everynow and them And since Tsukune names Tsukune.

Think of Tsukune from the Rosario+ Vampires.

His transformation when he goes half Vampire, thats the image I wanted to paint. But I ain't that good at imagery, so bare with me.

Well its late I got to review this shit for mistake...

I need a fucking Beta, anyone that wants to help me please P.m me!

Silvergold out..

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