I normally don't put anything up at the top of stories besides the disclaimer which I have already posted, and everyone knows I don't own this.
However I will respond personally to Kwisatz Haderach right now, and anyone else who doesn't like my AN length.
Plain and simple don't read something you don't like. I have said it in practically all my stories, it is there for people who have questions. Therefore I am not stuck responding to a bunch of questions, and if people are fully informed about my decisions, they can give proper ideas to further the storyline.
So I normally don't call people out, but after I specifically addressed it last chapter, and I get a comment on it now is frustrating. So I will lay it down for everyone.
ANs at the bottom of the chapter are around 1k in length, period. You don't like that, don't read the last 1000 words of the chapter. If you have questions go ahead. To people who say I am lying about my word count, well in the nicest way possible. You are all still here reading the story, if you want to be overly critical with how long the story it, take 1k words off the length per chapter in your own head. However I really don't see the point seeing as how I have been updating the story relatively quickly regardless. This isn't pointing fingers or calling names, it is just addressing a issue, once again that I hope wont be brought up in this chapters reviews.
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"You seriously expect me to believe that Naruto was just able to scorch the ground when he jumped out of the tree? Better yet, Sasuke! How was he able to beat you up that tree, he should of by far had the hardest time out of everyone in Konoha trying to get up that tree due to his chakra supply." The silver haired jounin said with a frown. He was in pain and was frustrated, he felt like his team was lying to him, he knew over a thousand jutsu and he had never heard of one that scorched the ground upon impact with your feet. Especially something virtually sealless, he didn't want to think Naruto was adapting more and more of Kyuubi's power but so far this was unexplainable.
"Really Kakashi-sensei! Naruto was having such a hard time getting up the tree, and then he made it in one go once Haku decided to help him." Sakura said trying to convince her sensei they weren't lying to him.
"Wait a minute, you never mentioned Haku before?" He asked as his eyes narrowed slightly. Sasuke however took that time to cut in,
"She didn't really have time to help him, she just had him stick his feet to the tree and find the right amount of chakra. Then he grabbed his sword, which pretty much flew up to the top of the tree. I guess he really wanted to get it down or something, which motivated him to get up the tree." Sasuke had a scowl on his face once he finished saying that. It insinuated that Naruto made it up the tree before him, and while that was the truth it wasn't something he ever wanted to be known to the students that were in his graduating class.
Kakashi swapped a crutch into his opposite hand to run a hand through his hair before taking the crutch back. "Alright, well I am interested in a few things, you will answer me is that clear?"
At the silence of his students Kakashi decided he wouldn't fish for a "Yes sensei!" or something along the lines, he just wanted to get to the bottom of the situation.
"How did Naruto get that blade?"
Sasuke sighed, "After you passed out in the water, Naruto swam out to keep you from drowning, while I watched over Haku extract the poison from Sakura's body. Once he set you down, I think he felt Zabuza's sword would just go to waste staying on that tree, so he took it."
Kakashi was getting rather frustrated at his team's lying, "This is not the time to be messing around, the blade looks nothing close to Zabuza's former blade, I would know he nearly killed me with it." not one of his most pleasant memories either. The sight of the giant cleaver coming down on his head was not a pretty one.
Sasuke crossed his arms over his chest, "What exactly is the point of asking us if you don't bother to believe us when we tell you the truth?"
Kakashi paused once Sasuke said that, was he really over thinking things that badly? However if what Sasuke said was true then, that would mean Naruto somehow changed the blade. The question is how exactly.
"Alright, I apologize, I'm in a lot of pain right now and am rather frustrated that my specific chain of command was completely reversed when I was injured." he let his words linger for a moment, hoping they would sink in telling them not to do it again. "Anywhere where are Naruto and this Haku woman?"
Sakura appeared to cheer up at the mention of Haku, which Kakashi caught. "I know where they are." she said rather cheerily. She was likely going through a phase some patients go through when their doctor saves their life. It didn't appear to be anything fanatic however so there was no need to worry.
The group followed Sakura out to the clearing by the lake, where Naruto, Team 10 and Haku were all located. Most of them were soaking wet, besides Haku who had a glint of amusement in her eyes. However the scene was a strike at his pride.
She saved his students life, and she taught his students more than he had taught them in about a day in a half that he hadn't taught them in weeks. The thought was annoying in it's own right.
Naruto was standing shakily on the water, with several clones surrounding him doing the same, which caused Kakashi to raise an eyebrow. He was surprised that Naruto would do such training, he almost felt as if his student was cheating. However then he would have to resort to calling himself and an entire clan, even his best friend a cheater. Still nonetheless it was an impressive feat, he was surprised that he wasn't using more clones.
Kakashi closed his eyes and thought to himself for a moment. If Naruto used this tactic, he could advance faster... the problem falls in the fact that he may advance so fast that he would pass his students so much that they would all feel behind and feel weak in comparison. He didn't know whether he should support the growth of his student, or hold him back to keep him in check with the growth of his team. To him it was a tough decision, he saw a lot of himself in Sasuke, and he naturally expected the boy to succeed to greatness relatively quickly under his guidance. However exceeding to greatness means nothing if every day of training a genius does, a hard worker does a fifty-day equivalent in the same amount of time.
Kakashi pursed his lips behind his mask as he repeatedly saw Haku catch Naruto if he was going to slip and fall into the water. It was obvious who the original was, "Sasuke, Sakura, go ask team 10 how to start this exercise. It is another basic chakra control exercise, you all will do fine. It would be best to test yourself by the edge of the lake and trying to find the correct amount of chakra to keep yourself afloat."
Sakura seemed to realize instantly what Kakashi was getting at, yet said something that caused Kakashi to try and mask his displeasure, "Like Haku had Naruto stick his foot to the tree to find the proper amount of chakra before running up it right?"
Kakashi closed his eyes and chuckled, "Yes... like Haku." he finished the last part and quickly began to carry himself out there as best as he could. Kakashi continued to carry himself to the water, and with a feat of impressive chakra control, kept himself and the crutches on top of the water as if it was solid ground.
Haku turned her shoulder as she saw Kakashi approach, it was relatively surprising that the Jounin appeared to be having no trouble at all keeping afloat on the water. Part of her hated the man for what happened to Zabuza, but another part of her told herself that if she got into battle with Kakashi here and killed him, despite Naruto's apparent dislike of the man, Naruto would hate her. Thus goes the cycle of hatred in the shinobi world. Shinobi get even.
"You do realize that Naruto would likely have an easier time learning if he had the chance to try and find the necessary chakra amount to stay afloat before going out this far into the lake." Kakashi said with his casual eye smile. This of course nearly caused Naruto to slip.
Haku had caught him before he even got knee deep in the water, but that didn't stop him from being annoyed. "What the hell? You mean that all this time I wouldn't have to of been freezing my ass off? Haku why didn't you tell me about that?"
Haku rolled her eyes, "Personally, I learned this over a hot spring in the winter. Every time I fell in it would feel as if my skin was on fire. I learned this relatively quickly. Maybe if you dispelled your shadow clones already you would be done?" Haku said as she tossed Naruto up only for him to shakily land on his hands and knees in the water.
"Hey pick me up, that shit isn't funny I am just about to dry off!" he said unable to look at either of the seasoned shinobi behind him.
Kakashi grinned and booted Naruto in the back causing him to fall face first into the water, and he quickly returned to his injured position. Haku while finding the scene rather funny finally realized the true meaning behind it when Naruto came up sputtering.
"What the! Who kicked me?" he yelled in frustration, now soaking wet and trying to pull himself out of the water. Kakashi raised his only visible eyebrow, and lifted a crutch.
"I'm in no shape to be even moving my legs for more than walking Naruto, who do you think kicked you?" Haku proceeded to purse her lips and give Kakashi a glare when Naruto turned to her. Kakashi in turn gave her a classic eye smile before speaking.
"Haku would you mind helping Ino and Sakura while I speak with Naruto. Give you some time to cool off, they are down a ways near the shore under the shade."
There was an underlying message behind Kakashi's words, which Haku had picked up on. It wasn't a suggestion, it was an order. The challenge she gave him when she looked in his eyes was blatantly clear to any seasoned shinobi.
You're in no position to be ordering me around.
Naruto sighed, he didn't notice the hidden message however he did notice Haku's apprehension. "Don't worry Haku, they probably need more help than I do at the moment, especially Sakura since she just started I think. You should go help them." he finished his suggestion to Haku with a smile that shattered any apprehension Haku had. If she was going to serve Naruto better than she served Zabuza, she should at least listen to him. She could virtually travel faster than the speed of sound anyways with this much water around her. Mirror transportation had its advantages. She would just keep Naruto in her sights.
Haku nodded her head, "Alright Naruto-sama." she said quickly, slightly displeased that she had to leave him to help Sakura and Ino, but that was what he wanted her to do so she would do it.
Kakashi raised an eyebrow at the Naruto-sama part. 'Has Naruto really gotten her to be blatantly and blindly loyal to him in this short time?'
"Naruto I need to talk to you." Kakashi said slowly frowning under his mask at what he just saw between the boy and Haku. Naruto merely rolled his eyes at his teacher,
"Yeah I gathered that when you came over here. You rarely talk to me if you aren't reprimanding me about something I did."
Kakashi looked away from the cold truth about his neglect of his student, "You know she is right. You would probably be done with this exercise if you dispelled your clones."
Naruto frowned, "Yeah well I can't be passing out on the job. I have been the one keeping the team together," he said putting emphasis on 'I'. "If I appear weak, I am afraid the team may fall apart."
Kakashi's gaze softened at that, 'Maybe I have been underestimating the boy.' He looked around the area with a frown on his face. Naruto had been a better leader to the team than he had been on their first real mission. While he was out of commission, he practically forced teamwork upon everyone. He was able to turn an enemy into a follower but more importantly a friend. He wasn't going to play the ignorant card, if there was one thing the boy really needed in his life it would be friends. That was one of the problems he had been avoiding addressing with Sasuke. The boy believed that he could get by on his own, and would refuse any reasoning that he would try to throw the boy's way. He pictures Itachi as the height of strength in the ninja world, which wouldn't be very far off, but Sasuke's brother does have a flaw in his shinobi way. He has a lot of power, likely more than even himself, but what does he have it for? He has no one to protect, no one to defend. What good is power if you have no one to use it for?
Naruto looked at Kakashi curiously as the man aimlessly looked around. Kakashi eventually turned his head back, "Well you wouldn't be under such strain if you dispel the clones one at a time Naruto. It makes it easier for you to file the information. Sort of like a stream going down a drain rather then a tidal wave that way."
Naruto looked puzzled for a moment, but took Kakashi's advice for once. What could it hurt? One by one clones popped leaving a fogginess over the water for a moment before disappearing. For Naruto it rapidly became easier and easier for him to stand on the water, as if he had been practicing for days. By the time he was done he could have sworn he could stay on top of the water while doing back flips. The idea of getting a technique such as this so quickly made him gain a huge grin across his face. The idea that he beat Sasuke in doing something by a mile was something that he was proud of.
Kakashi smiled at the amount of joy that came across his face. Perhaps this was the look that Obito would of given if he had ever beaten him at something, besides being a good teammate and a good friend.
"Naruto I was originally going to-"
"Reprimand me for taking charge of the situation, and for bringing Haku along, right?" Naruto cut Kakashi off with his accusation.
Kakashi sighed, "Originally? Yes that was the case. However... I believe I have underestimated you. You have done a lot and kept the team organized, I shouldn't get mad over that. You did a good job." Kakashi felt guilty when the borderline shocked look of surprise came across his face. Was he really that open about how he underestimated Naruto?
Kakashi choosing his words carefully biting on his lips while he thought over how he wanted to say things, "This probably isn't the proper thing to do in these situations but, how would you like to be the designated leader of the team when I am not around, and the designated leader for the remainder of the mission?"
Naruto's eyebrow raised at being the designated leader of the team when Kakashi was away, but for the remainder of the mission? He had to hold himself from gaping when Kakashi announced that. Not trusting his voice at the moment, he numbly nodded his head.
He swallowed some spit that built up in his mouth and took a deep breath before speaking, "Well... umm, I just have to ask why Kakashi...sensei." He added the title as a late after thought. If his supposed sensei was going to recognize him and admit to his mistake and try to make up for it. Than he would try to put aside their differences and try to move forward.
Kakashi swallowed his pride and with a sigh he spoke, "Well it is fairly apparent that you have taken charge of this mission and have been doing a fantastic job. With Zabuza out of the picture, and no danger I can foresee in the future, I believe I can trust your judgment with training the teams as a group and you have my full support. However I would like for you to keep me posted on any actions you choose to do."
Naruto took a moment to let that all sink in and nodded, "Alright..." he said slowly with a frown on his face still not believing it to be completely true.
Kakashi nodded and turned to walk away, letting one last message drift through the air on his walk back to the house, "Be careful Naruto, I was going to talk to you about Haku, but now I just don't want to see you getting hurt."
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"I don't get why you are so upset Ino? So what if Haku helped Naruto?" Sakura asked as she was quickly getting the hang of the water walking. She was having a harder trouble balancing than she was controlling her chakra output to keep her above the water.
"So what? Sakura how can you say that? Naruto is your teammate. Suddenly this girl is just going to come in here and start feeling all over Naruto? Did you see the way she rubbed her hand down his leg? The way she was massaging his shoulders and whispering in his ear? Ugh!" Ino picked up a rock and chucked it as far as she could out into the water. The rock making a rather large splash, and Ino sat herself down on a rock near where Sakura was practicing.
Sakura stayed silent as she listened to her friend and rival rant about the girl. "I just don't get it, why would Naruto even let her touch him like that, he has always been so clueless about girls before!" she exasperated with a frown.
Sakura shrugged, "I don't think she was making a move on him or anything Ino, this is Naruto we are talking about. I mean sure, he's been clueless about girls, I mean, look at Hinata. She has liked him for years and Naruto hasn't noticed. I mean I guess it is partially her own fault for not bothering to approach him... but still. Even if she was making some sort of move on him, I doubt he knew how to react if a girl started to touch him."
Ino scowled, "No! He would know what to do." she threw another rock into the water. Sakura had turned to Ino with a raised eyebrow when she said that.
"How do you know that Naruto would know what to do Ino?" questioned Sakura. She had stopped standing on top of the water, and opted to stand on a rock nearby in shallow water in case her concentration slipped.
Ino frowned, she couldn't openly say something about what happened between the two of them. Ino shrugged, "I just have a feeling that Naruto would know what to do if a girl ever came on to him, he did make that ridiculous henge after all." Ino lied through her teeth.
Sakura frowned, "Why are you so interested who comes onto Naruto anyway? Have you finally given up on going after Sasuke?" Sakura finished that thought with a piercing gleam in her eye. The thought that she may finally no longer have to compete for Sasuke's affection...
Ino promptly squashed that theory though when she said, "As if Forehead, I am just annoyed... that... that Naruto is getting attention from this random girl yet Sasuke isn't giving me or you any attention." it was a half-truth. She wasn't just annoyed, she was borderline furious that Haku had moved in and was effectively taking Naruto away between her fingers. She made sure that she was going to talk to him one of these days while out in wave.
Sakura sighed, "Look Ino, Haku may have some rough spots, but she saved my life I don't think there is anything to worry about with her she is a strong kunoichi. You should be happy that Naruto has someone like her possibly going after him." Sakura flinched a bit on the inside. She used to remember when she was the target of Naruto's affections. That seemed to stop once they had gotten on a team. Now Naruto could look at her nearly naked and not even be fazed. The thought made her shrink a bit. No one even seemed phased by her being naked, not Naruto, not Sasuke, nobody.
Ino threw another rock out to the water, "Whatever, I don't think she is good for him. I think that she may be too skilled of a kunoichi for Naruto."
Haku had snuck up on the pair and said calmly after Ino's statement, "Yes well I believe that a skilled Kunoichi would only help further Naruto-sama's progression as a shinobi. Not to mention you are both right, I am far more skilled than either of you or both of you combined for that matter."
Ino turned around with a glare, 'great the person I least wanted to see... at least since she is here it means she isn't with Naruto.' she thought with a frown on her face. Sakura seemed to address her thoughts when she said,
"Haku! I thought you were helping Naruto?" Sakura asked, surprised that the shinobi had snuck up on the two of them. Mildly afraid due to the truth in her statement and idly wondered how long she had been listening in on their conversation.
"Naruto-sama appears to be finished with water walking." she motioned a ways down the lake where Naruto was talking to Kakashi after having dispelled his clones. He was hopping up and down on the water perfectly fine.
Ino believed that Naruto was done, he got tree climbing done relatively instantly the second Haku started helping him. That of course only served to frustrate her more. She was helping Sasuke for at least an hour, and while he made progress he didn't get anywhere close to getting up the entire tree in one go. The image of Haku's comment moments ago sank in about her being better than her and Sakura combined. She crushed the idea and quickly asked, "Why do you call him that?"
Haku gave a fake smile, "Call who what Ino-chan."
Ino grit her teeth but tried to remain calm, "Don't call me Ino-chan, and you know what I am talking about. Why do you call Naruto 'Naruto-sama'?"
Haku chose to not look at Ino when she responded, trying to be blatantly disrespectful. She walked out on the water, allowed a foot to sink a bit when it came near Ino allowing a bit of extra water to splash onto Ino. "Simple, I pledged my allegiance to Naruto-sama, and I shall treat him how a person like him should be treated."
Ino forced herself to smile as she ground out, "Oh so your his slave then? I understand."
Haku had to fight down the flinch, it was one thing to be thought of as a shinobi tool. All shinobi of a village where tools of the Kage's, an extension of a Kage's will. It was a low blow for Ino to call her a slave and she knew the girl knew it as well. There was a fine line between being a female slave and a tool.
However opting to take the bait, and rework the conversation in her favor. She wasn't about to let a foolish girl who couldn't decide which boy to chase try and run this conversation. "I wouldn't call myself a slave... I have given my allegiance to him however, so like a shinobi of a Kage I am an extension of his will. Similar to how you genin do your ummm d-rank missions for your Hokage. However, I guess if I wanted to delve deeper into it, I guess I am the closest person Naruto has ever been with in life so far."
Ino picked up a rock, she just wanted Haku to give her a reason to throw it at her, "I really doubt that. I am sure that there have been people around Naruto that have been closer to Naruto then others. I am sure there may even be those that have been with him on a more intimate level."
Haku paused at that, she didn't have a direct comeback to that. The message was clear as day, but Sakura was forcing it to be explained.
"What do you mean intimate level Ino?" Sakura asked eyes wide, was she really implying that Naruto could already be going around having sex at their age? Hell the only thing she had close to any sexual activity was when she spent the night over at Ino's and they practiced kissing. 'Not one of my fondest moments looking at how we act with each other today.' she thought with a frown.
Ino maintained Haku's gaze the entire time while talking, "Well you know Sakura, how much do we really know about Naruto. I mean he likely has people that are family to him, but don't forget that bastardized version of a henge. He must of had someone he knew be with him on a intimate level at some point."
There was a silence amongst the girls, Haku and Ino didn't avert their gazes while Sakura let that tidbit of information about Naruto sink in.
Haku was the first to remove her gaze from Ino, this was a battle she didn't expect to lose. She never thought that Ino and Naruto had ever been together on an intimate level. However she wanted this battle of words to finish up on an even note, "Well that is good I suppose, he is rather cute, and he is strong. If he has been intimate before, he will at least know what he is doing."
Ino had thought she won up until that point. She thought that her comment had put claim on Naruto. It had only added fuel to a fire.
Haku sighed, "Well I'm going to go look and see if Naruto-sama needs any help with learning a jutsu or something along those lines. You two appear to have the hang of water walking. Sakura don't strain yourself."
Haku then disappeared by melting into the water.
Sakura was the first to overcome her surprise, "Wow... do you really think she is going to make a move on Naruto tonight?"
Ino had her head held down, "I don't know Sakura..."
Remembering a saying her mother often told her when she had been instigating fights at school,
"You weren't just playing with fire Ino, you soaked the matches in gasoline."
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Naruto sighed, once he had taken up his post as leader of the team, he decided to tell Kakashi that he would go into town. He wanted to see how things were down in the port town that Gatou ran. If he was going to be saving these people, he wanted to see whom he was saving.
He didn't know what he was hoping to see, when he got there he felt at home. The problem was in order to feel at home, then everyone else would have to be miserable, because when he is at Konoha he is miserable but he can't call it home. He is ignored while everyone else goes on with his or her lives. Here, he was at home because while everyone was going on with their lives, they were all miserable. It may have made absolutely no sense to the average person, but to him it made perfect sense. However he didn't want this to last, the more he looked around, the children trying to kick around a deflated ball. He knew he had to help these people, it was just a matter of how.
He walked around aimlessly for the past 10 minutes, before he walked past a fruit stand and heard voice carrying a tune through the surrounding area.
Is there anybody going to listen to my story?
All about the girl who came to stay
She's the kind of girl you want so much it makes you sorry...
Still you don't regret a single thing...
Naruto stopped when he heard the voice, across from the fruit stand inside a small pub/Inn there was a man inside. He was the one singing. Naruto didn't know if it was the right thing to do, but he wanted to learn more about the people he was going to save? Well he had to start somewhere.
He walked up to the blonde man at the table, and sat across from him and calmly said, "I'll listen..."
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Haku had been wandering around the town aimlessly, after she had heard from Kakashi that Naruto was in the town trying to connect and learn more about the people. She wanted to slap the man. Sure Naruto was strong, but if Gatou hired someone else of Zabuza's caliber he could very well be screwed.
She had searched through several areas of the port town. However once she thought all hope of finding the blonde was lost and she would have to wait till he came back to the house to talk to him, she found a head of blonde hair in the window. She knew Naruto must of been the only blonde haired individual besides Ino in the entire village. Everyone in the port town seemed to have dark hair colors, nothing that stood out. The closest thing was a light brown and even that was far away from blond. She tried to block out the idea that there was another similarity between Naruto and Ino, it still stung a bit her loss at the argument. She just hoped her final comment was able to get across to the girl and make her thing.
When she rushed into the pub, she paled instantly. She was hoping to spot Naruto to talking to your everyday village fisherman.
Imagine her surprise when she spotted Naruto speaking to the only man she had personally met besides Kakashi to best Zabuza in combat.
Warren Peace.
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Now since I addressed the AN thing above, I will be jumping into the character actions right off the bat. If you don't like this, kindly don't read it.
If you are still here, hello.
Kakashi: Anyways I was originally going to drag out a feud between him and Naruto for a lot of the story. However I thought that if I went any further I would start to paint Kakashi's character in a far darker light then I would like to. While he wasn't a very good sensei to Naruto in part one, he doesn't deserve to be bashed over it. I see Jiraiya getting held on a high horse all the time even though he neglected Naruto just as much(so it would seem) in part two, if not moreso than Kakashi in part 2.
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Ino and Haku: I will continue to address these two in a pair mainly because their characters will be consistently butting heads as the story goes on. You have a seasoned ninja with a bunch of experience, not pulling any punches against a young fresh genin that is trying to just win this battle, but doesn't really know how to go about doing it. I wanted this chapter to actually show that it is not such a one sided battle as it has the previous couple of chapters with Haku getting under Ino's skin. Ino can do the same, despite the fact that she is frustrated with Haku. Haku however just gets even as you see in the chapter.
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Sakura and Sasuke: Sasuke wasn't really addressed much this chapter, besides some stray thoughts from Kakashi. I said I would try to make them more likable. It is far easier to do that with Sakura than it is with Sasuke, however I am trying. You get to see her be a bit vulnerable internally here, and there will be a progressive build up throughout the story until she gets to her personal turning point(which is usually described as training with Tsunade). Hopefully I will be able to expand on Sasuke more in later chapters.
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Naruto's Sword: Har Har, kept you in the dark again... no I'm kidding. This isn't really intentional, I had an original plan for this story and then suddenly my brain blew up with a new thought trail, so I am just trying to get it back on track with the blade and what it is exactly. I believe I can use Warren as a tool to do that. Yep, use a current unknown to describe another unknown. I just gave you a bunch of information just now hmm?
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Warren Peace: To me, I think you will love this guy. Someone said they would like to see fanart for characters in the story? I'm afraid I don't draw anymore(started to write lol). However I do have a picture I can reference for Warren if anyone is interested I can say who I am physically modeling him after. Just say so in a review, and I will post who next chapter. If you want to let your imagination do the talking I will just keep the picture to myself :).
Anyways as I said, I think you will love the guy, he has a lot of depth to him that I have made for his character. I would honestly like to write a story just about him, but I'm afraid not one reads stories about just OCs in the Naruto universe. So I will have to try and win you over in the short amount of face time I can give for him during Wave.
People have asked will he be a reoccuring character? I doubt it, he isn't going to train Naruto or anything like that. I wont go in too much detail about him right now in order not to spoil anything. I wont say he is going to be directly related to the plot, but you will hear of his actions and the effects they have on people throughout the story.
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Anyways next chapter I don't know whether to make it this length or not, I haven't decided if I wanted it to purely focus on Haku, Naruto and Warren... or more than that.
Whatever I do, hopefully I can get an update out to you soon. I am hoping that I can make Warren a character you can all really like.
Till next time, have fun all, Read and Review.
PS: The chapter may break the "1k limit" on the AN due to the response I felt I had to give at the top -.-'
