Hey guys! This is my second time typing this because my iPod touch lost connection and it didn't save anything! So as you can see, I'm pretty pissed off. If you know how to fix this error so that it can freaking let me log on, on the computer, I'll update SOOO much faster. I'll also probably update on my other InuyashaXBleach story. ANYWAY, here we go!

WARNING: Hidan... And well, I guess my OC too.

"HELP! NOOOO! ITACHI! DEIDARA! SOMEBODY! HEEEEELLLLPPP MEEEE!"

"but Kira-Chan! I want to plaaaaayyyyy!" Toby said dragging me away.

Everything was going pretty normal today. Then Obito had to come up. Ugh. Guess its time for that conversation.

Itachi and Deidara gave me apologetic looks.

"FINE! SCREW YOU GUYS THEN! " I yelled at them.

toby then dragged me to a room and shut the door. I could see him turn on his sharingan.

"uhh um, heeeey." I laughed nervously.

"you didn't tell anyone about me. You didn't even act differently... Why?" He asked in his real voice.

"Two reasons." I said holding up two fingers. "One, I value my life." He scoffed. " two, its not my secret to tell."

he stared at me for a second. "I can tell."

I cocked a purple eyebrow.

"your trustworthy." He finished.

a had a small smile.

"unless you give me a reason to stop trusting you, I'll consider you an ally. Oh pein needs you."

"Right! Thank you." I nodded at him and walked out.

I then walked down the hall, took a left, and entered pein's office.

"You needed me?" I asked closing the door behind me.

"Yes, you have a mission." He stated ignoring my shocked look. "Your going undercover as a genin from the rain. I'm going to assign two genin to come with you. This will make up your team. This mission will just be so you can have experience. I will explain your next mission when you get back."

"oh, uh ok but what's the mission?" I asked getting over my shock.

"you and your team will go to a civilian village and confirm if they are going to be Orichimaru's new test subjects. If they are, take them out. Understand?" He asked giving me the mission scroll, rain headband, and weapons pouch with Kuni,senbon, and explosive tags.

"um...if they are his test subjects...I can't bring myself to kill them. I-I won't be able to-"

"YOUR AN AKATSKI!" He yelled, "ACT LIKE IT! YOUR GOING TO TAKE THE MISSION!"

I flinched. "But I-"

"DISMISSED!"

"but-"

"ALMIGHTY PUSH!"

I flew through the door and hit the wall of the living room. I gasped from the pain and slid down the wall.

"Daaaaaamn." Hidan said what everyone was thinking."we fucking heard leader fucking yelling at you then you come fucking flying into a fucking wall!"

"owwwwieee. So mean." I whined.

I sighed.

I looked at the mission scroll in my hands. There was a small note from konan attached to it.

'Your team is outside. Go now or I fear pein will almighty push you out, good luck!'

"WHA? Now!?" I yelled getting up and running out. Leaving the Akatski to wonder what the hell just happened.


When I walked outside I was greeted by two girls. They both had long black hair that went mid back with bangs just above their eyes and both wearing a dress that was just like Sakura's from before shippuden except it was blue and their shorts were black. They were identical. Twins. The only reason I didn't think it was a shadow clone was because they had different color eyes. One of them had electric blue eyes and the other had bright red eyes.

"h-hello. i-im Ayame!" The girl with the red eyes said shyly and quietly.

"I'm Ayumi!" Blue eyes growled.

"Oh, hi, I'm Kira." I said with a nod.

They just stared at me.

"W-we should g-get moving, maybe." Ayame poked her index fingers together.

i laughed lightly.

"Alrighty then! Lets do this! Um... Do you guys know where this village is?" I asked them.

Ayumi snorted.

"and your the captain! Dumbass!"

"HEY! Not my fault I've never been there! He didn't even give me a map!"

"Haha ya he did! Check the mission scroll lord pein gave you. IDIOT!" Ayumi laughed.

"oh." I flushed looking at the map."fine lets go."


"So this is the village?" I asked.

"again, why is this idiot caption?" Ayumi asked.

"exuse me?" I asked annoyed.

"Now she's deaf?" Ayumi asked.

"Sister!" Ayame scolded.

"Ok so you guys seem to have a problem with me. What's up?"

"your just a replacement for our older brother! So don't think your our friend!" Ayumi narrowed her eyes at me.

"actually I'm just a temperary member. You can go back with your brother later. Understand?" I asked.

"DAMN BITCH-"

"AYUMI!" Ayame scolded. "W-we need to f-finish the mission.

"Fine." Ayumi grumbled.

so my first impression of these guys... Ayumi hates me and ayame is Hinata 2.0. Ugh why nagato why?

"let's just get this mission over with." I sighed.

we all slipped through the gates. There was no guards.

We walked through the village. It was like a ghost down. Whenever we saw people they just stared at us and pushed their children behind them.

ayame's stomach suddenly growled.

"AYAME!" Ayumi growled.

i laughed lightly.

"let's go eat then. I'm hungry." I smiled at them.

"we're on a mission." Ayumi instantly denied.

"oh I'm sorry. Who died and made you captain?"

HA!

Kira:1. Ayumi:0

I pulled on Ayame hand and we started walking to a nearby resturaunt, followed by a seething Ayumi.

when we made it inside everyone stared at us.

"Um...can we order?" I asked.

suddenly two men stood.

Oh shit. These guys were bigger than all three of us combined!

"You three aren't from around here. Do you work for the sound?" One of them growled.

"I think that's enough confirmation don't you?" Ayumi asked me.

"NO WAY! That could just be a coincidence!" I instantly denied.

Ayame poked her fingers together nervously.

"no, from the rain." I pointed at the forehead protector pein gave me that was tied on my arm.

"huh? Why are you guys here?" The other guy asked.

"we're just passing by. Is there anything wrong here? Can we help you?" I asked politely.

the two men looked at each other. Then they both nodded and walked away.

ayame let out a sigh of relief.

"Damn it Ayame. Coward." Ayumi narrowed her eyes at her.

"Just leave her alone." I retorted.

"oh I'm sorry. Who died and made you her twin?" She smirked.

my eyebrow twitched as I seethed in the inside.

Kira: 1 Ayumi: 1


After we ate we walked through the village. We went around snooping for any evidence that they were in kahoots with Orichimaru.

All of a sudden a Kuni wizzed past my face.

"oh damn we missed."

All three of us turned around and saw the two men from before. The entire village was behind them. (It was a small mostly abandoned village so it was like 40ish people.) o shit.

"we're going to join lord Orichimaru. There's nothing you can do about it." The man stated.

"please tell me THAT'S enough proof?!" Ayumi growled at me.

"there's too many." I whispered.

"the fuck? Aren't you lord pein's solder or something. THAT'S AN INSULT TO HIM! God will punish you!" Ayumi yelled at me.

That's right. I'm an Akatski. I'm considered equal to all of them. Am I just a coward. A disappointment? No. No! I'll prove it! I'm not a coward.

with newfound determination I pulled a Kuni from the pouch pein gave me.

"your right. Thank you Ayumi." I smiled at her.

she seemed taken back. Guess she didn't expect me to thank her. She does think I'm the bad guy after all.

"Ready, lets do this." I ordered and all three of us rushed at them.

I but my finger touch my mirror and teleported behind someone. I was about cut his neck but I hesitated. Damn it! Why can't I kill him. The man recovered his shock and knocked away my Kuni. He then grabbed my neck.

Out of the corner if my eye I saw Ayumi fighting with one of them in tyjutsu and ayame was helping out. They were ganging up on one person. The others then rushed at them and grabbed ayame.

"AYAME!" Ayumi yelled and started attacking all of them.

My vision was getting blury.

Wow, your pathetic arn't you. Can't kill? Well I'll show you my true strength.

who are you? Your not Kanna. Are you the 'her' I released?

Not as dumb as you look huh. My names Tatski. I can't let my host's body die now can I? I'll be borrowing your body now. You can be damn sure ill take care of this little issue.

that's all I heard before I passed out.


(Ayumi's point of view)

ayame was just caught by this bastard. I looked for Kira and found that she too was captured. Damn weaklings.

i went through a flurry of hand signs.

"Ice style: thousand needles of death!" I yelled and my ice needles stabbed through the one holding my sister.

She gasped then jumped back going through multiple hand signs.

"Magma style: lava wave." Ayame said shyly and lava shot out of her mouth and instantly killed three people.

"you know ayame, your the damn scariest person I've ever met." I said bluntly.

that was our abilities. Our kekei genkai. I have ability over ice and ayame has ability over magma. Our power reflects in our eyes too. We're the last of our clan though.

Suddenly we felt a powerful killer intent. We turned slowly and saw Kira hunched over.

"Kira?" I asked slowly.

She turned her head up and her eyes were no longer the same light purple easygoing eyes. They were a blood red killer intent filled eyes. She had a sadistic smile on her face and I noticed blood on her hands. It was the blood of the man who had caught her.

Ayame and I fell on our knees in fear. What happened to Kira?

she then turned her head. In and instant she was behind someone and easily slit their throat. She licked the blood off the blade before laughing maniacally. A brave one rushed through hand signs and shot a water dragon jutsu on her.

Then she put her hand in front of her and stuck her arms out.

"Reflect." She said. Her voice wasn't even the same. It sounded deep and scary. I wanted to cry.

the dragon rushed at her but reflected off her hands and flung back at her opponent killing him in an instant. Then she just started disappearing and appearing behind people. Each time we would find a senbon in their throat and they would collapse already dead. I closed my eyes and only heard their bloodcurdling screams as they watched their loved ones die or die themselves. Soon they were all dead and ayame and I were the only ones left standing. Well on our knees.

she then apeared in front of me.

"Hello." She said with crazy eyes.

i started to cry. I couldn't help it. My sister was already crying next to me.

"My name is Tatski. You will respect me. I don't care who has control over this body. Respect me. Or I'll come back and make your heads roll on the ground. I will probably take over whenever she fights sense she's so weak. When I show up again, I'll decide whether or not to kill you. Understand? You. Serve. Me."

i nodded rapidly as did my sister.

"Good. Take care of this pathetic body while I'm gone."

With that her eyes flashed back to light purple. Then her eyelids flew shut and she fell forward. I grabbed her before she fell. If I let her get hurt, Tatski will kill me.

I looked over at ayame. She was still staring at her in shock. I picked her up and put her over my back gently.

"let's go ayame. Our mission is finished. Success." I said wiping away my tears.

i have to be strong. For Ayame.

For those of you yelling MARY SUE at me, hush. She's obviously not. That was Tatski not her. Plus they were all obviously civilians except for the two big guys. I also warned you I wasn't going to have a weak-ass OC. She ain't strong but she's not weak either. And she can't just call on Tatski every time she needs help because Tatski is evil.

so, SHE IS NOT MARY-SUE!

Anyway, tell me how I can improve! Reveiw please!