It's time that I start my rewrite, but before many or some of you might scold me for my decision. Its my fault to tell you what was in the rewrite and it's not that much different from the original. I will replace the originals with the new one.
Some of you said it's my decision and didn't think to cross that in my mind so I did put a lot of work since December and i'm afraid the work effort might be a waste. Plus, even though i'm back, i will try to do my best which i didn't feel as before.
The thing is about this rewrite is whether Luan was able to set up all the traps and stunts extremely accurate. The chances of each loud heading to one of their intended trap are low and rare⦠unless like any other humans like us would've taken NOTES. I would do the same. The hotel episode without a doubt would need pages and might sound irrelevant, but I can assure you is very much so.
Chapter two rewrite will replace the original starts now. And the others is best to post it weekly just to help some slow readers and gives me time to write other chapters like 7 and/or more. It's my decision
This post will be taken down till chapter seven is released
