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Elsa walked into the cold chamber, recognizing it for a minute. Suddenly, she heard muffled cries and remembered what she came for.
"Jack, are you okay?" She asked, concerned as she bent down to see his big, pleading eyes, and his mouth covered with a piece of cloth. She had told Rapunzel and Eugene to wait outside. Before she knew what had happened, a hand grabbed her from behind, clutching her throat. Jack shouted through his cloth until it fell off.
"Let her GO!" He shouted furiously, attempting to break free of his iron cuffs. It seemed so familiar to her and she finally realized who the person, or spirit was. Pitch.
"Pitch come on, it's not her you want, it's me." He pleaded.
"Trying to protect your princess?" He scoffed. Given that Elsa had peripheral vision, she was able to spot a figure with what looked like a frying pan approach at the corner of her eye. Pitch let Elsa go, finally, on the ground, as she gasped for breath.
"Elsa, ar-are you okay?" Jack asked.
"I'm…fine." She finally gasped.
"I feel a presence of another person in the room." Pitch sneered as he slowly turned around. Luckily, Rapunzel had a lot of experience with hitting people with a frying pan, so her reflexes kicked in, and her reaction was faster than Pitch's. While Rapunzel was distracting him, Elsa quickly ran to Jack.
"Are you okay?" She whispered as she shot ice shards at his cuffs.
"Hey, that's what I was going to say." He smirked as the ice made his cuffs explode.
"Let's get out of here. Rapunzel, you and Eugene on one horse, me and Jack on the other." Elsa announced. They ran and ran through the blizzard, Pitch following closely behind them.
"You will never escape from me." Pitch laughed. The horses started to go without their permission, but Eugene pulled Rapunzel up onto the horse and they galloped away. Elsa fell into the mountain of snow as Jack held onto the horse's reins.
"Elsa! Grab on!" He shouted over the howling wind. Pitch and Jack both reached in to get her, their fingertips coming in at the same speed. In that same moment, Elsa's heart started to thump wildly, and her palms were ice cold, regardless of the weather. However, Jack caught her first.
"You will regret it!" Pitch yelled with a menacing smile. Jack pulled Elsa on the horse and placed her in front of him, so that she wouldn't fall. What happened next was totally unexpected. Elsa fell back into Jack and their lips touched, and Elsa felt her face flush red as she made the kiss deeper, feeling a tingling sensation.
"I love you." Jack murmured.
"I love you more." Elsa smirked, as they kissed again, oblivious to what was happening in their lives, and the truth about their ice powers.
