Edward's pov
"Bella's moving," Emmett whispered.
I looked at my Bella and saw her moving her head. She was moving. She was moving! We all ran over to her bed.
"Bella, darling, can you hear us?" said Renee. She grabbed her hand even though her own was shaking.
She didn't say anything.
"Bella?" said Charlie.
Bella stood still.
Charlie got up. "I think that answers the question." he said and ripped up the papers in his hand. Renee gave a weak smile. She then got up and hugged Charlie. They then went to talk privately in corner.
Carlisle went towards Bella and began to examine her. He wrote some notes on his clipboard and walked out.
"Alice," I whispered pulling her aside, "I thought you didn't see her waking up."
"I think her body didn't know if it was going to wake up," she said as she shrugged, but I could tell she was frustrated. You should never mess with Alice and her visions.
"Guys, she's moving again," said Emmett.
We looked, but she was still. We all turned away...our thoughts leading us else where.
"Please don't lie about something like that Emmett," said Renee giving him a sharp look then turning to continue talking to Charlie.
"She's doing it again!" he said.
We turned, but she was still. We looked away, but not before giving Emmett a few glares. His mind can play cruel tricks.
"Emmett, stop lie," said Alice.
"I'm not. SHe's moving her fingers. Why would I lie about something like this? Look! She's doing it again." he yelled.
We turned and she was.
She may have been tricking us I thought and chuckled to myself.
We all rushed towards her bed just as Carlisle rushed in. He must have heard.
"Told you I wasn't lying," muttered Emmett obviously annoyed.
"Bella, hon, can you hear us?" asked Charlie.
She shifted around.
Then I was taken by surprise. Her eyes fluttered open.
"Bella!" yelled Renee as she hugged her. She, eventually, let go, but still held onto her hand.
My dearest Bella was awake!
I longed to go near her and tell her everything was going to be all right. I wanted to tell her I loved her and that everything that had just passed could easily be forgotten. Fortunately, I knew how to restrain myself. I looked at my Bella and her eyes were wide and yet looked so innocent, but she also looked frightened.
"Bella," said Carlisle pushing towards her, "Are you alright?"
Everyone stared at her, holing their breath and Carlisle seemed to notice.
"Bella?" asked Alice pushing towards her.
She looked at all of us looking very frightened.
"Give her some space," instructed Carlisle.
We retreated a bit, except for Carlisle and Renee. I still longed to just rush up to her and tell her my love for her.
Alice then turned away and stood next to me, but not facing anyone. I knew she was going to have a vision. I held her elbow in case she fell.
Carlisle then turned to Bella and said, "Can you speak Bella?"
Tears suddenly rolled down her cheeks. I stepped towards her along with Alice. She had snapped out of her vision.
"Alice," I whispered, "What did you see?"
"Nothing," she whispered back, looking at me with such fear in her eyes, "Her future's blank."
Bella shoved Renee a little and Renee let go of her hand, though she looked hurt.
I couldn't control myself any longer and went towards her. I reached for her hand, but she quickly moved it. She seemed to push herself farther into the hospital bed.
"Bella?" asked Emmett.
She started sort of hyperventilating.
"Am I Bella?" she asked.
No I thought losing hope once more.
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