HeroesOfOlympus
Heyyy ya'll! I'm back again with another update! Thank you for your support and please, please, please favourite, follow and review. Before I start the replies to your reviews, there were a few reviews I read that concerned me. Nonetheless, thank you for your criticism and I will work hard on improving.
Chapter 6
CrazyGirlWhoLovesVamps
I'm sorry I take so long to update. I just have a lot on my plate so I hope you understand that. Plus, I am only allowed to use my mother's computer for twenty minutes a day. I have no computer of my own, hence, I have to use my mother's computer. Anyway, thank you! :)
Guest
Thank you! :) You will see soon, why Maya is behaving like that. I will also explain why Zay ran up to her first. Don't worry, I'm definitely having Zay and Riley friendship in this story! I ship Rucas and Rogan but I do completely agree that Lucas deserves to get punched. Oh yes, I'm so excited to write Josh's reaction! I can't tell you much but I can tell you that someone is going to be crying, someone is going to get a black eye and someone is going to be guilty. Please read the first review for the reason why I take so long to update please! Thank you! :D
Guest
THANK YOUUU! :D
Lolly
Hahaha, thank you! :) Oh yes, romance is definitely happening... Aw, thanks! I try to improve. I'm sorry if my earlier chapters did not have very good grammar. I'm not as good as the other writers on this website but I try my best. No excuses but I'm below thirteen years old and above ten years old. However, I'll try my best to improve on all my mistakes! :) Thank you for the smiley face, very appreciated! TEAM ROGAN
Guest
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! :D
volleyballer82
Hahaha, don'y worry, Riley will be confronting her friends very soon! Yes, ONE SMALL STEP FROM MAN, A GIANT LEAP FOR MANKIND! Okay, I'm getting weird... Also, I may be wrong about the phrase... Yes! Thank you for understanding! Me too. Smackle doesn't talk to her that much (half the time she isn' even on the show), Zay was shipping Lucaya, Maya was getting all chummy with Lucas and Lucas didn't stop the triangle sooner, even though he knew his choice earlier. Hahaha, I agree with you. Thank you, and I hope to get another wonderful review like this from you!
PixieDreamer21
Hahahaha, thank you for loving my OC. Logan is my dream boyfriend/husband. Thank you for understanding why I got Zay to tell Riley. It was his usual weird, talkative way. He did tell all the groups secrets to Charlie, Riley and Maya. (You wanna hear a good Lucas story?/You wanna hear a good Riley story?) Oh, Mr Matthew's class is gonna have drama. Lots of drama. Thank you! :) I love your GMW story, Broaden Her Horizon, as well! It was actually my first ever GMW fan fiction I read and I fell in love with it. You're an amazing writer and I love your writing. I actually reread your GMW story, again and again, just to remind myself that I want to write just like that. Thank you! :) Please look at the first reply to the first review to see why I take so long to update.
Anonymous Me
Thank you for your suggestion! I actually thought about doing a crossover between GMW and PJO/HoO. In fact, I might start working on it soon! Thank you! :)
ArabellaRoseD
Hahaha, me too! Most people would'e thought Lucas was going to win but let's just recap for a second. Logan works out almost everyday at the boxing centre his uncle owns whereas Lucas, well, as far as I've seen the show, he's never actually worked out. Get my drift? (Not the boat drift) Hahahaha. Thank you! :)
Kashirama
The endgame couple is entirely up to ya'll! Riley will be forgiving Lucas (unfortunately) as he actually has a valid reason for the smooch fest he had with Maya. Thank you! :) Oh my gods, it's impossible to choose a favourite! I have tons as well but I think my favourite will probably the main character, Percy Jackson. Leo is probably second place, for being the funny goofball he is and a flaming hot McShizzle. Thank you! :D
rebeccas1016
Daniel. (I know, I know, it's old but that was the first thing that came to my mind! :D)
originalguest
That's weird... Anyway, I read your story already! It was fantastic! Can't wait for your next update. Thank you! :) Oh, Lucaya is not happening, 100%. TEAM ROGAN! Hahahaha, you should get that on a shirt! (The joshaya4ever)
ChocolateLover119
Thank you! :) TEAM ROGAN! Oh, you was drama? I got tons of drama! XD (Crying, Punching, Shouting, Insulting, Roasting, Betraying, etc. It's the whole package! Jk.)
Ghost adventure lover23
Thank you! :D
Sanchezashley
Hahaha, just hold on. You might be going back to Team Rucas. Lucas actually (unfortunately) has a valid reason for having the smooch fest with Maya.
Guest
Thank you! :)
LovelyRucas
Riley will be getting new friends, three in fact. But, she will also be having some of her old friends. I know what you mean. Actually, Girl Meets Her Monster, I think it's kinda Maya's fault. Riley would've never talked back to he mother if he had never seen someone talk back to them. Example, all those times Maya calls them 'weirdos', 'losers', etc. Thank you! :) I have actually kind of planned it out. Sometimes, my gut tells me to write something that wasn't what I planned and it ends up to be quite okay. It's fine! :)
Harrypotterwannabe00
Thank you! :) No, the whole gang is not gonna be the bad guys. I don't like it when people portray Riley as a mean person in fanfictions and I don't plan on doing the same to Maya.
laura
I'm sorry for saying this but if you find this really hard to read, then don't read it. I'm sorry for this rant. If you don't want to be offended, please stop reading here.
Alright, so here it goes. If you find this really hard to read, then don't read it. I have enough criticisms in my life that just adds to my insecurities and I don't want one review to stop me from writing. I'm not sure why, or how people like to read my stories but apparently, they do and that is a big part in my life. Everyone is entitled to their own opinions, I get that, but that doesn't mean you say them out loud when you know that same person you're talking to, is completely against that opinion. If you want to ramble about Riley being a selfish and obnoxious girl, fine go ahead. But please, don't do it on fanfictions who love Riley. Even though Riley is fiction, not a real character, she plays a big part in many people's lives. For me, she does. She's my freaking role model. She teaches me to be nice, kind to everyone, even the people who freaking bully her (Missy Bradford). She smiles for everyone, she kept a smile on her face even when she was getting cyber bullied. You know the definition of selfless? Well Riley is freaking that. She stepped back for Maya, to let her explore her feelings for Lucas, she cares so much for her friends, supports them so much, yet they couldn't even support her from the start about her cheerleading? The one thing she's passionate about and they tell her to give up? So don't you dare tell me that Riley is being selfish. You have every right to have your own opinions but listen to others. Do you think that you could handle smiling everyday even when you're getting cyber bullied? Do you think that you could handle the hundreds of rejections from something your passionate about? Do you think that you could keep smiling everyday, even though you don't feel like it? So please, keep your comments, which you know the person you are telling them to will not like, to yourself.
I'm sorry if you found that offensive but please put yourself in other people's shoes.
P.S If you still think what I said was wrong and you still find my story hard to read, then why are you still on this fanfiction?
MS
Thank you! :) I will, don't worry.
violet1429
I agree. Go Team Rogan! :D Hahaha. I love the group too, so much but just hold on, don't be too disappointed in them. They will all make up for it and become Riley's friends again except for Maya, whom I will ask ya'll to vote for whether Riley should kick her to the curb or stay friends. Me too!
Uniquely Blonde
Oh my gosh, me too! I was contemplating whether I should make Logan punch Lucas but I thought that would make Riley mad, cause' she didn't like it when she found out Lucas was expelled due to fighting and we can't have Riley mad at Logan. I know! Can you imagine? Her 'friends' are in the other team and she's in the other. Then once the coach blows the whistle, she starts shooting the balls at all of them! Exactly! Maya's childhood was quite bad but now she's got Shawn, who's Riley's godfather but NEVER took the initiative to talk to Riley. I agree. Riley is their real daughter, but yet they're doing the exact opposite of 'blood is thicker than water'. My best friend is actually kinda like Riley except the whole smiling overtime thing. Thank you! :) Hahahaha, I think we both know that ranting about Riley Matthews is not something we should apologise for.
Now that that's done, I would like to thank ya'll for all your support. Also, I may not be able to post a new chapter soon because I will be going on a family holiday for two weeks in Australia! My parents rented a large car but I think they should've rented something bigger because I don't think I can fit two weeks of clothing into a tiny haversack. Anyways, here's the next chapter of Girl Meets Alone and Broken!
"Good Morning students. Due to the construction works on the right wing of the building, all 11th and 12th Graders will have to share classrooms with the 9th and 10th Graders. Since all exams are over, all lessons have been cancelled. However, it is still compulsory for all students to attend their regular classes and continue to come to school. Thank you and have a good day." The speakers in the hallway screeched before silence fell over the students.
Soon, everyone was punching their fists in the air and hollering excitedly. No lessons and they could do whatever they wanted to do!
Well, almost everyone.
Riley and Logan stood outside her classroom, hands clasped together. Riley could feel her heart thumping at a million miles per minute. "How am I going to be able to do it?" She blurted out, her body shaking slightly.
"How am I going to face them? Especially since there will be no lessons conducted and you won't be there. They're bound to start piling me with questions about you..." Riley murmured as Logan's eyes brightened when he heard how much he meant to her. "You'll be fine Queen. Besides, who says I won't be there for you?" He winked, a knowing smirk gracing his features.
Without saying a thing, he took out a crumpled piece of paper from his pocket before passing it to Riley. Riley skimmed through the letter and when she was done, her eyes widened and a grin, slowly but surely, appeared on her face.
The letter indicated that Logan's classes will be shared with Riley's since they had the exact same schedule. "Thank God!" Riley squealed, hugging Logan tightly. The Rebel chuckled, squeezing Riley back. A loud, fake cough interrupted their moment and they pulled away. There stood Riley's 'friends', each having a different emotion.
Jealousy and anger from Lucas, shock and worry from Maya and Farkle, confusion from Smackle and strangely, happiness from Zay
"Peaches! He's dangerous, don't hang out with him!" Maya warned, gripping Riley's arm and tugging her away from Logan. A burst of sudden confidence came from Riley and she shrugged off Maya's grip on her hand. "He is not dangerous and I will hang out with whoever I like." She stated firmly, returning back to Logan's side.
Silence fell over the group and then, her 'friends' started shouting warnings and accusations about Logan. Logan stood there, his fists clenched so hard till it was white and his face expressionless. Finally, Riley had enough and shouted, "SHUT UP! I don't freaking care what you are all saying about Logan. He's the nicest person out of all of you here!"
Stunned, the group had their mouths dangling open and their eyes wide with shock. "Don't you see Riles? He's changing you! In a bad way!" Maya furrowed her eyebrows, pointing a finger in Logan's direction. Before Riley could open her mouth, Logan stepped closer to Maya and leaned forward, his mouth centimetres away from his ear.
He whispered something nobody could hear and Maya's face turned paler for every word he spoke. Soon, he pulled away and Maya's face was as white as snow. "Got it?" He asked and Maya stood still, fear in her eyes. Turning on his heel, Logan walked into the classroom behind Riley.
"What'd you tell her?" Riley asked, her natural inquisitive personality showing. Logan gave her a smirk as they plopped down on the seats at the back of the class. "Just gave her a warning..." Logan trailed off, shrugging.
LINEBREAK/GIRL MEETS ALONE AND BROKEN
Riley stared at her group of friends who were laughing happily, huge grins plastered on their faces. Everyone was laughing except Zay, who would sneak a quick, but concerned, glance at Riley from time to time. She felt her heart shrivel up and being ripped apart into a million little pieces.
They didn't care.
Here she was, queuing up for her food with Logan and her 'friends' were laughing away, as if Riley not sitting with them was perfectly normal. Maybe it was, maybe she was a nothing in the group. She was just another person in the group. Someone useless, too clingy, too happy, too Riley. She felt tears beginning to well up in her eyes and quickly, she blinked them away.
Holding her tray tightly, she rigidly walked beside Logan. They headed towards a lunch table hidden behind a pillar, way behind the cafeteria. It was next to one of the large windows that showed a breathtaking view of the school garden.
When they reached the table, Riley noticed there were three people already seated there. She recognised Brandon, the supposed 'bad boy' in her level, and Wade, with his hair now black, most probably his real hair colour.
Who she didn't recognise was the girl.
She had an uncanny resemblance to Wade and was Chinese as well, just like the mentioned male. The only difference was that she had Auburn hair, which Riley could tell was not dyed, and while Wade was tan, she had fair skin. She wore a red sweater dress that reached to her knees and a pair of black tights. Her eyes were black but turned a shade of chestnut brown under the lights.
"Hey Logan! Who's this?" The girl asked, giving a beam in their direction. Riley noticed Brandon's usual frown on his face turned into a small smile. His stern eyes softened and he sighed contently, looking at the girl. Riley matched all the signs together and knew for sure that Brandon, the bad boy, was crushing on the girl.
"This is Riley Matthews, she's in your year." Logan introduced, sitting down with Riley. The girl gave Riley a grin and reached over the table to hold out her hand for Riley to shake. "Nice to meet you Riley! My name's Katherine but you can call me Kitty. All my friends and family call me that!" Katherine shook Riley's hand, not knowing what she said had made many questions run through Riley's mind.
'Am I already her friend?' Riley thought but nonetheless, gave the enthusiastic girl a small smile. Suddenly, Kitty leaned over the table yet again, poking Logan on his shoulder repeatedly. She wiggled her eyebrows, poking Logan relentlessly.
"Why are you doing that? Stop it!" Logan rolled his eyes, swatting away Kitty's hand. Kitty mockingly rolled her eyes back before sitting back down. She then started to talk with Brandon, the whole time her eyes only focused on his face and occasionally flickering down to his lips and back again to his eyes.
Suddenly, she placed her hand gently on top of Brandon's hand, which was on the table. As fast as lightning, Wade shot up from his seat and snatched Kitty's hand away from Brandon's. He then proceeded to squeeze in between the two of them, forming a makeshift barrier between the two of them. Wade shot Brandon a frightening glare and if looks could kill, Brandon would be dead.
"I'm guessing Wade's the overprotective, older brother of Kitty?" Riley whispered into Logan's ear. Logan snickered and answered, "No shit Sherlock." They stared into each other's eyes, both captivated by each other's eye colours that displayed so many emotions they both couldn't read.
"Language Wolverine."
"English, my dear Knicksie."
They both then threw their heads back and laughed, as if there was nothing and nobody around them. They were in a world which only consisted of the two of them, no problems, no insecurities, no worries, nothing except the two of them.
A small smile graced Wade's features as he whispered to Kitty, "That girl is bringing our old Logan back..." Kitty nodded her head in agreement before smacking her older brother on the head. "That reminds me, I'm telling mama you're being overprotective again!" Kitty scolded as Wade sighed, rolling his eyes in exasperation.
Aaaand... CUT! That's a wrap for this chapter! Please favourite, follow, review and check out my stories on percyjacksonfanfiction .com under the username HeroesOfOlympus. See ya'll in the next chapter!
Peace Out,
HeroesOfOlympus
