So many of you are complaining that I criticize too harshly, but I think you misunderstood the purpose of me being honest. Sure, my reviews are too harsh and I'm sorry for that, but I sometimes think having same reviews over and over again is pretty much the same as saying," I was here and I saw your story."

What I wanted to do is to really try to improve an author's level of literal skill by pointing out mistakes that they made in the story, it could be harsh sometimes so I apologize for that.

Imagine having candies and vegetables. Which one would you prefer? Candy of course! But if you think about it, what's the real benefit of some short but sweet reviews? Ok, some encouragement and self-esteem that's something, but if you want to try your hardest to make your story really shine, you would prefer vegetables like me.

It doesn't taste good but it will definitely help out your health just like your literal skill. I haven't said this but, I really love it when you guys can points out tips and criticism so that I can improve.

Except for Jason that reviewed my story, he was just too mean.

Jokes aside, I did expect some refusal for my technique which is fine, but if you really don't like my reviews, just ignore them. I almost always put 'Who am I to judge?" line on the end of my review, just for the safe measure, but that didn't work apparently.

We are all mature adults here alright?(Or at least teenagers) Let's not flip out on something as simple as this, but I never wanted to lower any author's self-esteem, in fact, you should be glad that someone wants to read through every word to help you improve.

The reason why I expected Nightfly to do better is because he's been doing a fantastic job with his stories, but the smallest mistakes like the one I pointed out earlier shouldn't exist because I had a higher level of expectation for him as opposed to some others. I really do hope that Mr. Nightfly can learn to check everything a few times before publishing, it will help your story tremendously, I tell ya.

But you can always ignore this author's note and ask me personally.

Storm and night retreated back as the sun rose in the sky, shining white and bright light on the cold but beautiful snows, birds chirped as the humans woke up to another eventful day. Two Canadian geese flew on top of a metal bar and threw a few snowballs on the stainless window.

Blu woke up to the sounds of snowballs impacting the windows and knew that his geese "friend" are trying to annoy him again. He looked down at Jewel's head and stroke it gently with his wings while trying to not disturb her peaceful dream. He picked her head up and placed it on the couch, and got up to his talon. Blu looked back at Jewel one last time before hopping down on the ground. He walked towards the window while enduring the sounds of snowballs, then climbed up the counter and squeezed himself through the tiny gap under the curtain.

"What do you want?" Blu said annoyingly looking at the two geese," I'm trying to sleep."

"How was your vacation nerd?" Alice mocked him," Missed us?"

"Not at all," Blu crossed his wings and said.

"I bet you just sat in your cage all day," Chloe said," And played with that little bell."

The two burst into laughter as Blu interrupted them," Actually, I was out in the jungle."

"Oh… You mean in your comic books?" The two laughed even harder as Alice almost fell down due to the intense stomach pain from laughing.

"There you are Blu," A voice came behind Blu as he turned around. The curtain suddenly rose up as the lights entered the room, bouncing off every object and illuminating the entire living room.

"Morning Blu," The voice revealed to be Linda as she went back to her kitchen to make coffee and hot chocolate.

The two continued to laugh but Chloe noticed something different in the room. Another blue macaw with the lighter feather was sleeping on the couch sideways with half of her face exposed. Her belly moved up and down evenly with a slight smile was shown on her face.

"Hey Alice," Chloe stopped laughing and nudged her shoulder with her wings.

"What?" Alice's laugh slowly came to a stop as she wiped a drop of tear away from her eyes.

"That," Chloe pointed towards the blue macaw sleeping on the couch, and soon Alice also noticed the macaw.

"Is… That… A macaw?" Alice squinched her eyes on the blue object.

"Yes that is," Blu said.

"So you brought a sister from Rio?"

"Yeah… I mean no! She's not my sister, she's my girlfriend!" Blu said angrily.

"Oh would you stop trying already?" Alice said still trying to mock him," I bet she's a nerd as well."

It was at this point Jewel woke up to the sounds of loud speaking and loss of warmth provided by Blu. She slowly opened her eyes and saw Blu was standing on the window counter speaking. She stood up on her talon and loosened her wings, she flew to Blu and swooped down on the counter, landing beside Blu.

"Hey Blu," Jewel said and greeted him with a small morning kiss.

"Oh… Good morning Jewel," Blu said with his face blushing from the kiss.

"You are a mistake for being with that nerd," Chloe shook her head and began mocking Jewel.

"And you are a mistake for saying that because you will regret it," Jewel said gently with a terrifying smile, she cracked the bones on her talons and mimicked her talon slash through her neck.

"Oh hell, let's run," Alice saw her passive-aggressiveness and flew away like a sissy followed by Chloe who was also terrified by Blu's girlfriend.

"Wow, did you just scare them away?" Blu was shocked with what she did.

"What? They are just plain stupid," Jewel returned to her normal face and said to Blu sweetly," Anyways, want me to cuddle in your lap?"

"Uhh… Sure?" Blu said unsurely after learning her nature.

"Oh Bluuuuu! Come get your breakfast!" Linda called out as a smell of fresh chocolate floated in the room. Blu hopped down on the ground and ran towards the kitchen excitedly, longing for some sweets. Jewel flapped her wings few feets above the ground and followed Blu to the kitchen.

Blu climbed up the chair and made his way onto the table, a cup of hot chocolate was already placed in the middle of the table. He ran towards the cup and stared in the brown substance with steamy foam around it, he tilted the cup a little and led some chocolate flow into his beak.

"Ahh… This is the best," Blu exclaimed in pleasure as he took another sip, feeling the sweet sugar in his tongue. He looked back at Jewel who was just staring at him the whole time, her stomach ached with hunger and her tongue hanging out for food.

"Oh, almost forgot about you," Blu said to her and wiped his beak," You wanna try some of this?"

Jewel peeked into the cup and immediately said in disgust," Eww no, this looks like tree bark."

"It's not tree bark Jewel, it's called chocolate, it's very sweet," Blu tried to share his drink with her.

"I don't care, all I want is some fresh fruit from the jungle," Jewel shook her head but something caught her eyes. A basket full of different variety of fruits with different colors, her eyes glittered in excitement as she leaped towards the basket and took one out. She examined the fruit and said," Hmm… How come I've never seen these before."

The fruit was sphered shaped with bright red on its surface, she then dug her beak into the hard surface of the fruit and took out a small chunk of yellowish solid. Jewel slowly chewed the fruit and savored its amazing taste.

"Wow, this is not bad," Jewel said and took another bite into the fruit.

"Yes Tulio, Jewel is here with me, I don't know how she got on the plane , but she's here," Linda said to Tulio through her phone.

"Then can you bring her back to Rio?" Tulio asked.

"Yes I can, but I think Blu has attached to her already," She said somewhat sad, sad because Blu might want to stay with Jewel in the forest.

"Well, you can always come back to Rio with Blu if you want," Tulio said to her with a promising voice," And there's no way that they can be smuggled this time, but can you just please bring them to Rio? It's better for their kind."

"I… I'm not sure, let me ask them," Linda said with a frown and put down her phone, and asked Blu," Do you want to go to Rio with Jewel?"

Blu thought about it and looked at Jewel, and asked her," Hey Jewel, Linda asked if you want to go back to Rio with me or not."

"Yes, yes I want to go back," Jewel squawked out loud ecstatically as the memories of soaring through the jungle air came back.

Blu nodded.

"They said yes," Linda spoke through the phone and heard a loud crash," You ok there Tulio?"

"Yeah… Yeah, I just got too excited," Tulio laughed on the phone.

"Ok then, I'll see you Rio," Linda laughed with Tulio and ended the call.

"Well Blu, we are going back to Rio again," Linda said and stroke his cheek. Blu smiled at her and returned to his breakfast with Jewel.

Rio.

A naked cockatoo was sneaking around the jungle as he cursed at the two blue macaws that caused him this misery. It wasn't easy maneuvering with no feathers on and without the ability to fly, and it took him a while to arrive at his destination, a hollow with bones decorating the outside, scaring away any living creatures that comes near, and that's exactly what he was looking for.

"Hey Sana," Nigel yelled out with the top of his lung.

An object quickly flashed by Nigel as he turned around only to find thin air. The red light moved around Nigel in a circle until it eventually stopped, revealing a female red-tail hawk. She stands up one and a half feet tall with a sharp and hooked beak that shreds through anything made out of flesh and bone. Her red eyes craved blood as her personality is unpredictable. Black and brown feathers spread across her entire body and her tail feather was covered in crimson red, and her beak had a few spots of leftover flesh.

"What do you want?" The female hawk asked as she continued to chew on her food and ignored Nigel's nakedness.

"Well, just visiting my good friend," Nigel said keeping his cool in front of a cold-blooded killer," Listen, I need your help."

"Why should I help you?" The hawk asked and stepped forward, and tilted her head which made Nigel back up a bit.

"Because... you owed me a favor," Nigel paused for a moment before he could remember something that he could use to his advantage.

"When did I ever owe you a favor?"

"Remember when I saved your ass from your abusive family?" Nigel said to her and apparently she's younger than him.

"Oh, that time," Sana had a flashback when she was beaten up by his parents and sisters, and turned angry when she thought about them and everything they did to her, luckily Nigel saw it happen and rescued her before she died from the intense bully," Fine, I'll help you, but only this time, do you hear me?"

"Yeah yeah whatever, but I just need you to help me take down two blue macaws, they aren't that hard to distinguish."

"Alright, where are they?" Sana asked and smiled evilly.