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A Secret Revealed:
When McGee had regained his senses after waking 3 days later, Ziva was by his bed side with The team plus the Los Angeles team, Dom and Callum gave him a firm handshake, Kenzi pressed a soft kiss too his head and Ziva did the same... Abby hugged him tight as she struggled with the tears in her eyes.
McGee turned to Callum and grinned "I thought you all were dead"
Callum grinned and chuckled "Nah... we escaped during his attack... Hetty sends her best she is just finishing up with Director Shepherd" McGee groaned as he sat up and placed his feet on the floor but just sat there.
"You were lucky McGee" Dom said "What you went through would have killed any other person" they all nodded and Gibbs watched the agent get oout of the bed shakingly.
"Fat lot of goood it did... that thing's still Alive" he groaned as he limped his way to the chair near the window.
"Forget about him, you live to fight another day" Dominic patted his shoulder and everyone nodded in agreement.
McGee knew he was right, he survived another encounter but he was running out of lives fast... he needed an Achillles heel against that beast.
Ncis:
The body count was stacking up and there was nothing they could do to stop it, Callum and the team from Ncis in Los Angeles joined in the fight, Kenzi was bed ridden in hospital with her boyfriend watching over her, he had no idea why she believed in McGee so much but she saw something in him which nobody could see.
McGee visited as much as he could but was at the office trying to track Crimson down.
He had reached the end of his rope when he stumbled on something, Richard Fenix's house was the same as it was before, their was construction pieces leftover but nothing had changed inside or outside of the building, and 2 questions popped into his head 'Why contract builders for a job that had not even been done?' and 'What had changed?' and an answer came too him "that house was hiding something" he grabbed his coat and headed to the door not realising Ziva was right behind him until it was too late.
Ziva and McGee spread around the house to find what had changed in the building, looking for anything that didn't match or anything, McGee had reached the last room with Ziva and that was the study room where the bits and pieces of the body were found, Ziva had searched high and low for anyhting new in this room but nothing, until McGee called out;
"Ziva" he motioned her to him and she stood by him as they stared at the wince case the size of the book shelves... cobwebs blowing gently but theire was no breeze coming from behind them, McGee looked at the faint scratching on the ground so he gripped the shelf tight and soon it began to rumble deep as it opened.
McGee looked to Ziva and smiled "shall we" he bowed and walked head as she followed with a smirk.
The sound stairs were dark and damp... they thought they were heading into a damp cellar... but iinstead they found a room full of computers, the power lever rested comfotably in the off positions, Ziva went to the lever and placced a hand on it, McGee looked at her and was about to tell her to stop but too late, she pulled the lever and soon the lights and computers buzzed to life, the light blue illuminated the room around them, McGee spotted something in the corner of his eyes, it was a figure, McGee gulped the bile back thinking he knew what it was was.
"Crimson" he warned and they both drew their guns and took aim, No gun fire as they both froze at the sight before them... it was a Cybernectic suit
McGee" she gasped at the sight of it as they cllosed in, the suit was empty.
This battle suit was more bulky and looked like it could match to the Crimson, iits colour was sky blue, its bulkiness was something that made them iin awe, the flight tech smaller than Crimsons and it was folded into a bagpack type, 2 long blades were attached to the arms and folded back ready to be drawn.
McGee gulped as he gazed at the sight.
A voice brought them both back to reality "My name is Richard Fenix... I am the creator of the Crimson suit... My life's work" McGee and Ziva went around to the screen before them and listened intently. "My work was meant to save lives... but instead it has been perverted for evil" McGee's mind was filled with the images of the dead, Ziva gripped his hand tight as they listened "Now i have built a new suit... one that does not rely on CPU control but instead, the will of a human pilot... this is my last chance, my legacy is destroying lives... it is time to make things right"
"If your watching this then Crimson has found me... The suit is shielded from its sensors so its safe here... but Crimson must be stopped... i beg you, End the beast i created... my monster must die, I wish my Legacy to be used to save lives... this suit will grant me that... i beg you... Stop Crimson once and for all" the image faded from existance.
Ziva choked back the tears "He died trying to fix his mistake"
"Lets get out of here" McGee grabbed her hand and led her to the stares.
"McGee... wait" Ziva stopped.
"What Ziva" McGee looked curiously.
"We have a way to stop it" Ziva looked at him hopeful.
"Oh no" McGee shook his head hard "no way"
"Tim... you can end this" She pleaded.
"I will not use that thing" He grrowled out "i will not become like Crimson"
"But..." He cut her off
"I AM NO HERO!" he turned away from her "Lets get back to base"
Ziva unwillingly follwed making sure the entrance was closed.
(what do you think now?)
Lycanboy666
