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Nate walked into Alex's cabin. It smelt fantastic. He looked at Alex. She was beautiful. Her hair was amazing, falling down her back. He could look at her all day, she was unbelievable. He wished she didn't hate him.

"Look Alex I'm so sorry I didn't wa-" Nate started. But Alex interrupted him.

"Nate you shouldn't be. I should be"

"But I hurt you" Nate said, ashamed

"I hurt you too" Alex said "Maybe we should just start over. Hi I'm Alex"

"Nate" He replied, a huge smile on his face "Wanna go down to the lake?"

"I'd love to" replied Alex

CAMPROCK

Nate burst out laughing. Alex always made him laugh. They were sat on a canoe in the middle of the lake, far away from the lakeside. There sky was covered in dark clouds. Suddenly there was a loud crack of thunder.

"Uh-oh" Nate said worried

"Come on we better get back onto land" Alex said, nervously

They started to row, but suddenly the wind picked up and the heavens opened. It started to pour down with rain and the boat was rocking dangerously from side to side. Nate grabbed onto Alex.

"Nate!! Help me!" Alex screamed. She was so scared. She held on to Nate.

"Alex I've got you!" Nate reassured her. The wind picked up again. It swirled around and the boat started to fall to the left. Alex screamed one last scream, and she fell into the blackness of the water. She felt suddenly freezing. The water engulfed her. She couldn't breathe. Her eyes were closed. She started to sink. This was it. She was going to drown.

Suddenly a hand grabbed hers. It pulled her up. She came out of the water gasping for air. The night sky was still black. There was no light. Alex could hardly see Nate. She clung onto him, her wet hair slapping his face. They were still in the middle of the lake, at Nate was struggling to stay up. The water sloshed around them. Nate had to get Alex to swim otherwise they would both drown.

"Alex! You've got to swim!" He screamed, trying to make himself heard above the roar of the storm

Alex nodded, tears flowing from her eyes. She started to swim with Nate, grasping his hand. Alex was sobbing as they headed to shore. She was tired now, and started to fall behind Nate.

"Alex come on!"

"I can't" she sobbed again.

Nate tried to pull Alex closer to him, but she drifted away, and suddenly their hands parted.

"NATE!!" Alex screamed in terror

"Alex, come on swim to me!"

Alex used the last of her strength to swim and grab Nate's hand. He started to pull her along with all his strength. Nate fought through the wind, trying to swim on. He was almost getting pulled under. Alex was barely able to cling on. Suddenly they both went under again. Alex almost crushed Nate's hand she held it so fiercely. Nate tried to swim again when he reached the surface but couldn't. They were still a long way from the lakeside. He could hardly see as water attacked his eyes. He squeezed Alex's hand one last time, and the last of his energy was drowned out of him.

"Alex" He shouted, crying "I love you!" He went under again

"I love you too Nate!" Alex sobbed

The wind howled louder. The black sky turned blacker. The thunder claps became louder. Lightning, which Alex and Nate hadn't noticed at first, struck close to the lake. As the trees bent in the wind, Alex clung onto Nate as her hair whipped around their faces. She looked into his bloodshot, puffy eyes. She thought Nate Gray never cried. As the wind threw them around in the water they clung onto each other, trying to stay afloat.

Suddenly they heard screaming and someone calling their names. They weren't sure who it was, as there were a lot of voices. Alex suddenly picked out Mitchie's, and Nate heard Shane's. This shocked him; Shane wasn't supposed to be here. What was he doing? Mitchie and Shane were screaming at them to get to shore. But they couldn't. Suddenly the voices stopped, and they heard the sound of a canoe being dragged through the pebbles.

"NO!" Alex and Nate screamed at the same time. They didn't want them to lose their lives aswell. But they were already in the boat and getting closer. Suddenly they saw a light from a torch. It was Mitchie. They screamed to try and get Mitchie and Shane to see them. Mitchie shouted something, but it was lost in the ferocious gale. The saw the light getting closer and then they saw Mitchie's hand reaching for theirs. But they were being dragged away and couldn't reach. They made contact a few times, but their hands would slip away from each other as soon as they did touch. Suddenly the torch went out and they heard the two screaming.

"We're capsizing!"

Alex started sobbing again. Suddenly they were all stuck with no hope of rescue. They were thrown around. Her hand felt Nate's go down. Well if he was going she was going with him. She started to sink. This was the end.

My chapters seem to be getting worse! I need ideas for the next chapter and can't start it until I have one. So please if you want to see more, give me your ideas!