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Okay so the thoughts of that person are in italic's.

I dont own Maximum Ride. *sigh*

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Max's POV

I bite down on my 'perfect lip' as Fang describes it and almost laughed if not in such a tough situation. I pick up my I-Pod from my pocket and play with it, trying to hold out and give myself time to answer. I can't decide. I-I know I love them but could I deal with being back with them after all of the turmoil and hurt they have caused me?

I sigh and look around at the faces of my old Flock.

Angel-So sad and desperate for a Mom, someone to take care of her, she is still my baby even though I still feel betrayed by her. Please tell me that she will stay. I miss her so much. What will she do?

Gazzy-My little trouper, the Pyro assistant and the little boy who brings me joy, I wish so much that he didn't betray me. I don't know if I can deal with all the sadness if she leaves. She was like our Mom. How could we have let her go?

Nudge-The Nudge channel, the talking machine that finds it so hard to eat animals, she is so gentle yet capable of hurting me so much. I miss Max so much. She was like my Mom and I never got to have my biological Mom. She took care of me, oh how could we have done that to her?

Iggy-My Pyro maniac and bomb maker, my somewhat perverted nice boy, he did yell at me though to leave though. And his thoughts. God Max is so hot. I know that she is like my sister but wow. If she goes what will happen to the little ones though?

Fang-The boy I loved so much, my Second-in-command, he helped me through so much and was there for me since we were little, yet he hurt me so much, telling me to leave broke my heart. Oh Max. My sweet Max. I have missed her so much. How can I let her go when I love her so much?

I finally said something.

"I still love you all so much," they all swelled with happiness and I quickly put in. "But . . . I don't know if I am going to stay with you." They all looked so sad and I too in turn saddened, the wind picked up and rain started to fall. They looked like they were about to protest but I silenced them quickly, "Listen, I have been through so much pain and I don't know if I could go through that much pain again. So here's the deal, I am going to think about that last question and help you guys out. First of all you all desperately need new clothes so we are going shopping." Nudge and Angel squealed and jumped up and down. "And then we are going to go to a hotel so you can get a good night's rest."

They looked at me very excited and happy. I felt a rush of warmth and the rain and wind died down. I smiled up at the sky and released the elements, giving them my thanks.

"Alright let's go," I spoke to them, unleashing my wings and leaping into the air. They all followed close behind after gaping at my wings. I smiled to myself think that even now I still am not used to them. Nudge had started talking a lot more.

"Oh my gosh, where are we going to? The mall? I love the mall. We all do need some new clothes. I wonder if I can get some leather like Max. I am so excited. What do you guys think? We need haircuts too. I wonder if I can get highlights like Max. I wonder who we are going to see. Max how are you going to pay? What abou-?" I quickly went over and shut her mouth.

"Yes Nudge, we are going to the mall. No, you may not get leather like me because that is my signature style. Yes, you are getting haircuts. No, you can't get highlights like mine because mine are natural and special and you will not find them anywhere else but you can get highlights, just not like mine. I am going to pay with my unlimited Gold Max Ride card. Now will you please shut up?" I turned away and flew on.


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