I am honestly trying to make the chapters longer :/

Accident

Hollypaw looked opened her amber eyes and stretched her long legs in the sunlight. Sunlight? Why wasn't she in her den? Then she remembered the events of last night. Her fight with Darkfur, meeting Bluestar by the moonpool and finally falling asleep by the lake. Everyone at camp would be awake now, they must be frantic! She needed to get back quickly so she started running through the tree's. She was running so fast that she didn't see a tree root in the path of her paws. She yowled as she tripped painfully over the root and landed hard on the ground. Her head was banging and her body felt like it had turned to smush, she tried to pull herself up but couldn't. Her head was swimming and she thought she heard some familiar voices before everything went black.

Squirrelflight stared at her daughter in shock, she was just lying there, totally still, was she dead? No! She couldn't be. "Over here!" she yowled to the rest of her patrol, "Quickly!" They all ran to where Squirrelflight was waiting and Dustpelt quicly took charge. He ordered Birchfall and Cloudtail to carry Hollypaw back on their shoulders and take her to Jayfeather immeadiately. Throughout all of this Rosepaw stood in shock, staring at the motionless form that was her sister. She hardly noticed Squirrelflight come to her side and lead her back to camp.

Firepaw was waiting anxiously at the entrance of the camp when he saw Birchfall and Cloudtail carrying Hollypaw back through the tree's. He ran as fast as his short legs could carry him to Jayfeather's nest and screeched " It's Hollypaw, she's hurt!" Jayfether and Leafpool were waiting, all their herbs prepared when Hollypaw was bought into the medicine den. Leafpool examined her and stated " She's unconcious, we wont know what to treat her with until she wakes up." Firepaw sighed with relief then went to tell Rosepaw who had been in a trance like state ever since she had returned to camp. "Guess what," Firepaw said softly "Hollypaw's not dead, only unconcious." Rosepaw turned to look at her brother then said quietly "Thank starclan."

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